考研英語短文寫作十年真題解析-wenkub
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【正文】 daily lives and too many plastic bags bring about many problems. How to solve this problem has bee a hot issue among many people in recent years. To address this problem, I would like to lodge several suggestions. On the one hand, the authorities should set up rules and regulations to control the production and circulation of the plastic bags. On the other hand, people should realize the significant of protecting our environment and not use too many plastic bags. I sincerely hope that you can take my letter seriously. Thank you very much for your time and consideration. Yours faithfully, Li Ming (126words) 親愛的編輯： 我寫此信是為了讓您關(guān)注“白色污染”這一問題。有很多商家為了爭取自己定期的?？?，他們可能會想到促銷的手段或者銷售的途徑，那就是說送給你塑料袋，方便你使用?？忌鷮@個(gè)話題可寫的東西比較多。今年走出考場的考生普遍感覺今年的試題較往年難度有所降低，尤其是寫作部分兩道題目難度適中，大家基本發(fā)揮出了正常水平。下面針對小作文和大作文分別給予點(diǎn)評，并提供閱卷的范文供大家參考。且在平時(shí)大作文的訓(xùn)練中考生都接觸過不少表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)看法和提出建議的方法，尤其在環(huán)境保護(hù)方面的建議措施接觸的更多，因此這篇小作文題材大家非常熟悉，難度適中。但是這些顧客們可能有些人是懂得或者說環(huán)保意識很強(qiáng)的，有些塑料袋，他們總是重復(fù)地去用；可是有一些不盡然，像年輕人這樣，用過后就扔掉。在日常生活中人們總是會用到塑料袋，而塑料袋過多會產(chǎn)生很多問題。另一方面，人們應(yīng)該意識到保護(hù)環(huán)境的重要性并不使用太多的塑料袋。由于本信函屬于公務(wù)信件，題目提供的名字就是編輯，所以要按較正式的口吻來寫作，文章開始的稱呼為Dear Editor，語氣就比較正式。第二段承上啟下，按議論文模式設(shè)定了段首句，提出的兩種方案用On the one hand和On the other hand靈活列出。五．閱卷樣文五檔：9分Dear editor, I’m a sincere reader of your newspaper and I like your discussion of the social problems. Now I want to give some opinions of myself about the “White Pollution”. As we know, regulation was made to solve the problem in June 1st of 2008. The use of plastic bags was restricted in the supermarket and many other shops freely. At the beginning, it was carried on well, but now I found plastic bags were used in some small shops for free or with no pay. I am writing to tell you that we should solve this problem soon with the help of your newspaper. You could make some investigators about it and write some reports of it, so as to appeal to all the people’s attentions of our society. Sincerely, Li Ming評語：本文很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，與目標(biāo)讀者完全產(chǎn)生了預(yù)期的效果： 1．內(nèi)容包含了所有的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，該文第一段的內(nèi)容更吻合題目的要求。 5．格式與語域恰當(dāng)貼切。 4. 采用了適當(dāng)?shù)你暯邮侄?，例? but, meanwhile, besides等，層次也比較清晰。 3. 采用了一些簡單的銜接手段，內(nèi)容還算連貫，層次也算清楚。 2．語法和用詞錯(cuò)誤太多，表明作者缺乏基本的英語語法知識或者使用語法知識的能力。 第一檔：12分Dear the editor I’m pleasure to write the letter to you. With the development of the socity, white pollution is more and more bad. Our sky is not blue, our earth is not clean and our river is not fish. To solve this question, I have some suggestions. First, every one drive their car less a day in a week than before. Second, when we are shopping, we use environment plastic bags. Third, our government do some rules. Do you thing my opinion? Look forward your reply. Yours faithfully, Li Ming評語：未完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，不能把信息傳遞給讀者： 1．文章內(nèi)容基本離題，有許多不相關(guān)的內(nèi)容。 Write an essay of 160200 words based on the following drawing．In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and then 3) give your ments.You should write neatly on ANSHWER SHEET 2. (20 points) 互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的“近”與“遠(yuǎn)”一．審題構(gòu)思 09年大作文仍然是圖畫式作文，題目要求與往年基本相同。圖片描寫可能會給一部分考生造成困難，這一點(diǎn)要看學(xué)生平時(shí)的積累。這一主題比較貼近現(xiàn)代生活，也是當(dāng)今大學(xué)生熟悉的話題：網(wǎng)絡(luò)雖然非常便利，讓人與人足不出戶就可以相互聯(lián)系，但是人與人之間的直接聯(lián)系卻變得稀少了。通過這個(gè)分析我們感知到的是什么呢？要發(fā)自內(nèi)心地先要把大的方位描述出來。互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的優(yōu)勢不容置疑，網(wǎng)絡(luò)的確使我們變得更近了，這種近是多方面的，其中最重要的方面是信息的快捷。另一方面，人與人之間逐漸疏遠(yuǎn)，這也是事實(shí)，因?yàn)楝F(xiàn)在大家工作學(xué)習(xí)壓力都很大，缺乏人與人的溝通，只是在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上的虛擬世界里尋找慰藉。一方面，很多人認(rèn)為互聯(lián)網(wǎng)讓我們比以往更親密。）另一方面，其
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