【正文】 nd weakness drawback 缺點 TV:A Blessing or a curse 一篇作文的主體段如下 As is often pointed out, television keeps one better informed about the current events, allow one to follow the latest developments in politics and science, and offers endless series of programmers which are both instructive and science, and offers endless series of programmers which are both instructive and stimulating. The most distant countries, the strangest customs and attractive scenes of nature are brought right into one’s room. Yet here again, there is danger. The main problem with TV has been its negative effect on people in general. For example, rubbishy mercials and harmful programs contributing to the rise in violence and crime in the streets. 好學(xué)生：brilliant students ,top students, outstanding boy and girls, students of high ability make efforts=make(exert/devote/direct) untiring(painstaking/concerted/consistent/tremendous /persistent/sustained) efforts Watching too much TV is harmful to our eyesight=Heavy exposure to TV will produce harmful effect on eyesight. The progress I have made surprise me. This leads me to the conclusion that money doesn’t mean everything. ２、句型的變化 The career I pursue A variety of reasons have led me to choose this occupation over other more lucrative ones. First, teaching is learning. To make my lectures more interesting, I have to reading more books, explore new knowledge and gain a better understanding of the worldthe very thing I like to do in my life. Second, teaching means freedom. As a teacher, I can freely express my opinions and explain them in my own way since nobody will interfere with me. Finally, I like teaching because it offers a certain peace of mind. No more rushing to catching a morning bus, no more anxiety to please a boss, and no more worries about being laid off because you are getting old. 文中有4個詞的短句First, teaching is make　my lectures more interesting, I have to read more books, explore new knowledge and　gain a better understanding of the world—the very thing I like to do in my ,也有復(fù)雜句As a teacher, I can freely express my opinions and explain them in my own way since nobody will interfere with me。所謂語言漂亮是指語言的變化。 數(shù)據(jù)就變成論證。 　　　　　２、對圖表的發(fā)展趨勢，發(fā)表個人看法。 現(xiàn)狀——原因——預(yù)測未來（好的東西） 　　　　　　——建議、措施（不好的東西） 語言句式非常清晰。 The two charts.... increase in the . population has been acpanied... corresponding decline Far too many 太多的 species have been lost already 　被動語態(tài)——表明立場 This poses a danger to 　被……構(gòu)成危險 As the human population expands, more and more wild animals are hunted for food... or because... they are thought to... present a threat to... but studies show that one of the primary causes... disappearance this makes us wonder... other life forms　與其他生命方式 in harmony　和睦相處 share this planet 共享這個星球 In my opinion, it is imperative to 迫切的 In my opinion, it is imperative to take step to reverse the disturbing trend illustrated in the charts. One measure would be to forbid the building of cities in areas where wild life is threatened with extinction. But, more importantly, man must learn to stop polluting the environment, or he himself will bee extinct. reverse 　(a.)相反的(v.)逆轉(zhuǎn)過來 disturbing 令人困惑的 illustrated in the charts One measure would be to... But ,more importantly, forbid extinction stop polluting the environment or 表示否則 １、人口增長了幾次？ ...the increase in the . population As the human population expands... ...population growth... ２、野生動物。s deserts are spreading and getting larger and desertification is a serious problem facing the world. The major reason for this is irresponsible cutting down of trees. As is shown in the first cartoon, when people cut down trees desert forces on and bees irrepressible. 第一段就在分析原因 作文在判卷的時候注重兩個方面：語言、內(nèi)容 １、句子的主語和謂語是否一致 ?。?、時態(tài) 　３、名次的單復(fù)數(shù) ４、定冠詞和不定冠詞 　５、搭配 ?。?、單詞的拼寫 套用句型時要對句型部分句法結(jié)構(gòu)功能特別清晰 詞匯兩個方面 ：１詞匯面的寬度 　２詞匯的難度 語法的兩個原則：１語法的精確性 ?。舱Z法的復(fù)雜性 the caption =the words read 漫畫中的說明文字 具體的東西抽象化，抽象的東西具體化。寫２００１年作文題二、透視91年到2001年真題,提煉重點題型,歸納總結(jié)經(jīng)典段落 １、歷屆真題 從９１年開始——第一次考研作文命題，基本上和托福作文命題差不多 “Where to live ,in the city or the country?” title 開頭有一句話 ：Some people think that people living in the country enjoy more advantages than those who live in the city. outline of the city of the country of both preference Private Car Nowadays, any Chinese can enjoy the luxury of owning a private car if he can afford it. Outline： of owning a private car of owning a private car it be necessary to enlarge the private car market? Why or why not? 如果認(rèn)為不應(yīng)該發(fā)展小汽車，最后一段就寫不應(yīng)該發(fā)展小汽車的幾個理由。 無名新東方考研英語FLASH課堂作文筆記新東方考研英語FLASH課堂作文筆記作者：lovehina 如果最后一段表示支持，調(diào)整結(jié)構(gòu)： 第１段寫小汽車的好處 第２段寫小汽車的壞處 第３段寫為什么要發(fā)展小汽車 ９２年——標(biāo)題 For a better understanding between parent and child situation: lack of munication between parent and child reasons: a different likes and dislikes b. misunderstanding c. others : a. for parents b. for children 第二段不管是單數(shù)還是復(fù)數(shù)，都應(yīng)該寫幾個理由 第三段不管是單數(shù)還是復(fù)數(shù)，至少要寫到兩點 詳細(xì)記錄９２年提綱——經(jīng)典題型之一 ９３年——Advertisement on TV state ments ９４年——On making friends need for friendship（為什么要交朋友） friendship（解釋性段落——十大經(jīng)典段落之一）——參看９７年１月四、六級考試 　寫掉這三個段落　《大學(xué)英語考試高分作文》 principle in making friends ９５年——The project hope situation of the project suggestion ９６年（不成功）——Good health of good health to keep fit own practice ９７年依然不成功 the pictures the tendency of tobacco consumption and give your reasons ９８年圖畫作文 一只母雞拿著一張紙，上面寫著“如此承諾”——本母雞承諾下的雞蛋有蛋清、蛋黃、蛋殼……，旁邊有一首打油詩 out the message conveyed by the cartoon your ments ９９年 Directions: essay should cover these three points: reason for the effect suggestion for wild life protection essay:論文——introduction, body, conclusion 歷史留給我們的是 １、幾個經(jīng)典段落?。?、outline（思路） 圖畫作文比較公正客觀 ９２年是第一個經(jīng)典題型，９９年是第二個經(jīng)典題型 ２０００年是第３大經(jīng)典題型 the picture(描述圖表——十大經(jīng)典段落之一） the purpose of the drawer of the pictures（畫家的意圖——十大經(jīng)典