【正文】 生活需要游戲，但不能游戲人生；生活需要歌舞，但不需醉生夢死；生活需要藝術，但不能投機取巧；生活需要勇氣，但不能魯莽蠻干；生活需要重復，但不能重蹈覆轍。 無名新東方考研英語FLASH課堂作文筆記新東方考研英語FLASH課堂作文筆記作者：lovehina2001 。作文平均11分 作文在4070分之間 寫作課的學習方法：八字方針：背誦——精彩詞匯；精彩句型；文章里精彩的句子；萬能的框架；經(jīng)典范文　　　　　　默寫、互譯、描紅　一種文章只用一種寫法　三個階段：牢記、效仿、持之以恒一、考生寫作的困境及其對策　?。?、滔滔不絕意識流中文：　情感分段；觀點由讀者領會　　　　英文：　邏輯分段；觀點由作者交待　　　　“猴子原則”：the monkey principle ——提綱原則，注重命題的提綱　　　　量化：２００個字，１２－１５句話　?。?、無話可說真難受 　　　?。梗保梗赌辏荷鐣缘膯栴}　聯(lián)系生活實際　?。场⒄媲榱髀稕]必要　　　只需要“相關”　　　　考作文是制造一個機會展示書面表達英語的能力，應該把構(gòu)思的時間降低到最低限度　　４、英語表達憋得慌　　　　達到１２分：安全第一：句子結(jié)構(gòu)，語法　簡單原則：詞匯　　　　達到１７分以上：詞匯多變：多使用同義詞、近義詞　　　　　　　　　　　　句子結(jié)構(gòu)多變：一定要有復雜的句子結(jié)構(gòu)樹干：謂語部分、核心部分　　　　　　刺眼的錯誤：１主謂一致；２動詞時態(tài)；３定冠詞和不定冠詞４名詞單復數(shù)；５介詞、副詞的搭配；６拼寫錯誤 樹枝：狀語從局、定語從局、非謂語從局等綠葉：各種修飾　對每一個句子，從寫作的角度，從這三個層次上用心體會每一個句子５、處于被動危害大：寫作應是主動的，避免不利于自己的詞和句　　從錯誤中提高自己。寫２００１年作文題二、透視91年到2001年真題,提煉重點題型,歸納總結(jié)經(jīng)典段落 １、歷屆真題 從９１年開始——第一次考研作文命題，基本上和托福作文命題差不多 “Where to live ,in the city or the country?” title 開頭有一句話 ：Some people think that people living in the country enjoy more advantages than those who live in the city. outline of the city of the country of both preference Private Car Nowadays, any Chinese can enjoy the luxury of owning a private car if he can afford it. Outline： of owning a private car of owning a private car it be necessary to enlarge the private car market? Why or why not? 如果認為不應該發(fā)展小汽車，最后一段就寫不應該發(fā)展小汽車的幾個理由。 如果最后一段表示支持，調(diào)整結(jié)構(gòu)： 第１段寫小汽車的好處 第２段寫小汽車的壞處 第３段寫為什么要發(fā)展小汽車 ９２年——標題 For a better understanding between parent and child situation: lack of munication between parent and child reasons: a different likes and dislikes b. misunderstanding c. others : a. for parents b. for children 第二段不管是單數(shù)還是復數(shù)，都應該寫幾個理由 第三段不管是單數(shù)還是復數(shù)，至少要寫到兩點 詳細記錄９２年提綱——經(jīng)典題型之一 ９３年——Advertisement on TV state ments ９４年——On making friends need for friendship（為什么要交朋友） friendship（解釋性段落——十大經(jīng)典段落之一）——參看９７年１月四、六級考試 　寫掉這三個段落　《大學英語考試高分作文》 principle in making friends ９５年——The project hope situation of the project suggestion ９６年（不成功）——Good health of good health to keep fit own practice ９７年依然不成功 the pictures the tendency of tobacco consumption and give your reasons ９８年圖畫作文 一只母雞拿著一張紙，上面寫著“如此承諾”——本母雞承諾下的雞蛋有蛋清、蛋黃、蛋殼……，旁邊有一首打油詩 out the message conveyed by the cartoon your ments ９９年 Directions: essay should cover these three points: reason for the effect suggestion for wild life protection essay:論文——introduction, body, conclusion 歷史留給我們的是 １、幾個經(jīng)典段落?。?、outline（思路） 圖畫作文比較公正客觀 ９２年是第一個經(jīng)典題型，９９年是第二個經(jīng)典題型 ２０００年是第３大經(jīng)典題型 the picture(描述圖表——十大經(jīng)典段落之一） the purpose of the drawer of the pictures（畫家的意圖——十大經(jīng)典段落之一） your countermeasures ９８年命題不成功——沒有想到現(xiàn)實生活中人是怎么欣賞漫畫的 ２０００年?。?、看畫　２、畫家想干嘛　３、看了畫以后會要采取什么行動 A brief history of world mercial fishing 漫畫不需要動很多腦筋　　看漫畫時不需要想太多 ２０００年 As is shown in the pictures, we can see clearly that with the increase of mercial fishing, the number of fishes sharply/dramatically decreased. In one picture, there were various kinds of fish and only one fishingboat in the contrary, in 1995 there was only one fish, with(but的重心在后面，with的重心在前面） many fishingboats. The purpose of this picture is to show us that due attention has to be paid to the decreased. If we let this situation continue/go as it is, we won39。t know where fish is in the future. By that time, our environment will suffer a great destruction. Therefore, it is imperative for us to take effective measures. For one thing, we should appeal to our authorities to make strict laws to control mercial fishing. For another, we should enhance the awareness of people that the ocean resources are very vital to us. Only in this way can we protect our ocean resources. Also I believe that we humans can overe this difficulty, and we will have a bright future. １、本文１８５個詞?。?、１２個句子　第１段３句話，５３個單詞　第２段４句話，６０個單詞　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　第３段５句話，７２個單詞 提綱第一點里面要你干什么你就干什么 １。代表一種方向（問題有，又有解決問題的方案，構(gòu)成整體的漫畫） Today, the earth39。s deserts are spreading and getting larger and desertification is a serious problem facing the world. The major reason for this is irresponsible cutting down of trees. As is shown in the first cartoon, when people cut down trees desert forces on and bees irrepressible. 第一段就在分析原因 作文在判卷的時候注重兩個方面：語言、內(nèi)容 １、句子的主語和謂語是否一致 　２、時態(tài) ?。?、名次的單復數(shù) ４、定冠詞和不定冠詞 　５、搭配 ?。丁卧~的拼寫 套用句型時要對句型部分句法結(jié)構(gòu)功能特別清晰 詞匯兩個方面 ：１詞匯面的寬度 ?。苍~匯的難度 語法的兩個原則：１語法的精確性 ?。舱Z法的復雜性 the caption =the words read 漫畫中的說明文字 具體的東西抽象化，抽象的東西具體化。 As is shown in the pictures, we can see clearly the relationship between people and the deserts. In the first picture, people are fleeing from greedy sand hills because they have cut down all the trees. The caption reads: As the sand advantages, we retreat in the second picture, the people have returned carrying tools, water and young trees to plant the land again. The caption reads: As we advance, the sand retreats. 描述圖片 ２００１年（經(jīng)典題型） １場景　?。蔡峋V　?。硤D畫 第１段描述圖畫、畫家意圖 第２段具體例證 第３段具體做法 ２００１年大綱樣題 Widespread tobacco consumption has led to grave consequences, yet the tobacco panies still claim that they male a valuable contribution to the world economy. There is a discussion in a newspaper on the above two viewpoints. Write an essay to the newspaper 1)criticizing（評論） their view and 2)justify your stand. In your essay, make full use of the information provided in the pictures printed below. You should write about 200 words on answer sheet 2. (picture: the year 1997) 原來的經(jīng)典圖表題：提綱＋圖表 １、描述圖片 ２、幾個可能的理由 ３、建議措施 經(jīng)典題型之五： 現(xiàn)在的圖表題：場景＋提綱＋圖表 十大經(jīng)典段落 １現(xiàn)狀　２解釋性段落?。趁枋鲂远温洌▓D表圖畫）　開頭段落 ４原因列舉（a list of reason）——　主體段落 ５舉例（２００１年考研題，參看９７年１月四六級考題） ６意圖分析　７利和弊（自己總結(jié)）　——中間段落 ８結(jié)尾（自己總結(jié)）?。菇ㄗh措施?。保邦A測未來 學術性英語的功能段落　不是survival 而是academic范文三 在寫一些文章時，不可避免的會有一些核心概念。避免重復。 　　　人口增長、野生動物、滅絕、構(gòu)成危險 突出寫作的語言意識。 The two