gre寫作官方范文分析匯總-wenkub
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【正文】 out in order for the principal’s conclusion to be valid. 官方認(rèn)為的有幾個關(guān)鍵名詞需要解釋，其中analysis這個詞的解釋很重要，很多同學(xué)知道這個詞的意思是分析，但什么是分析就說得不是很清楚了。在這過程中更重要的是：sometimes implicit steps in the thinking process and consider whether the movement from each one to the next is logically sound。what is not stated, but necessarily follows from what is stated?！ ts就像是一個羞澀的女孩，從來不會直接告訴我們她想要什么，但同時，也在無時不刻的不在暗示我們她想要什么。 第二部分是我的對于全部6份官方范文(結(jié)合awintro)的分析，本文屬于個人觀點，一家之言難免存在偏頗和不足之處，懇請大家多多指教。之所以很多人看了很多遍沒有看出什么可借鑒的地方，源于兩點：一是沒有和awintro上的要求相對應(yīng)起來看，二是沒有把有限的6篇官方范文進(jìn)行橫比。另外，實際上新東方的模版寫出來的argu文章和官方范文給出的滿分文章是有很大差別的，主要體現(xiàn)在是一個是零散湊成的(所謂的讓步式攻擊有時只是形式上的)而另一個是有核心思想的，我會在后面的分析中具體說明。我個人認(rèn)為這是個誤區(qū)。： 官方范文的重要性不言而喻，大家對官方范文的態(tài)度也有褒有貶，有人說這些6分的官方文章都是大牛寫出來的，我們學(xué)不來，于是有的同學(xué)的重心就轉(zhuǎn)向了北美范文。我們最后拿到的成績是個平均分，沒有人知道具體每篇是多少。既然這樣，那完全有可能最終4分是來源于3分的argue加5分的issue，而不是反之?！ ”疚恼w結(jié)構(gòu)： 第一部分awintro中A部分重點語句的歸納和梳理，方便與后面的分析相對照?！ 〉谌糠譃榭偨Y(jié)。awintro的歸納和整理 在拿到題目后應(yīng)該找出這些：what is offered as evidence, support, or proof?？偨Y(jié)一下：即論據(jù)，結(jié)論，推理過程中的未加證明的假設(shè)，論據(jù)中的潛在后果。這是我們攻擊的要點，尤其是隱含的邏輯步驟。這里給出了清晰的答案：the process of breaking something (., an argument) down into its ponent parts in order to understand how they work together to make up the whole。尋找它因和尋找反例think of as many alternative explanations and counterexamples as you can?！ ∑渲?，在論證時需要：think of what additional evidence might weaken or lend support to the claims。先復(fù)述題目，然后清晰的表明觀點，然后發(fā)展。 6分作文標(biāo)準(zhǔn)： A 6 paper presents a cogent, wellarticulated critique of the argument and conveys meaning skillfully. A typical paper in this category ? clearly identifies important features of the argument and analyzes them insightfully ? develops ideas cogently, organizes them logically, and connects them with clear transitions ? effectively supports the main points of the critique ? demonstrates control of language, including appropriate word choice and sentence variety ? demonstrates facility with the conventions (., grammar, usage, and mechanics) of standard written English but may have minor errors范文分析 第一篇文章 Hospital statistics regarding people who go to the emergency room after rollerskating accidents indicate the need for more protective equipment. Within this group of people, 75 percent of those who had accidents in streets or parking lots were not wearing any protective clothing (helmets, knee pads, etc.) or any lightreflecting material (clipon lights, glowinthedark wrist pads, etc.). Clearly, these statistics indicate that by investing in highquality protective gear and reflective equipment, rollerskaters will greatly reduce their risk of being severely injured in an accident. 原題邏輯順序為：數(shù)據(jù)顯示了對保護(hù)裝備的需求==〉展開說明這個數(shù)據(jù)是怎樣顯示這樣的需求的(即用這個裝備有什么效果)==〉結(jié)論：為了達(dá)到這個效果我們應(yīng)該重金買這保護(hù)設(shè)備。而沒有光是羅列觀點?！ irst of all, as mentioned in the argument, there are two distinct kinds of gear preventative gear (such as light reflecting material) and protective gear (such as helmets). body打頭第一段是屬于攻擊總前提假設(shè)的，作者認(rèn)為這個(即保護(hù)性設(shè)備和防護(hù)性設(shè)備的差別)是有必要在討論一切之前弄清楚的。Preventative gear is intended to warn others, presumably for the most part motorists, of the presence of the roller skater. It works only if the other is a respo
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