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ly hope that you approve of my resignation. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 2020 真題:請求信 Directions: You want to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area, write a letter to the department concerned, asking them to help find a candidate. You should specify what kind of child you want to help and how you will carry out your plan. Write your letter in no less than 100 words. Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. 大家學(xué)習(xí)網(wǎng) Don39。評分時,視其對交際的影響程度予以考慮。 A節(jié)作文的字?jǐn)?shù)要求是 100詞左右。允許在作文中使用提示語中出現(xiàn)過的關(guān)鍵詞,但使 用提示語中出現(xiàn)過的詞組或句子將被扣分。 (三) 評分原則和方法 : 雖然 A、 B 兩節(jié)的考查要點有所不同,但對考生寫作能力的基本要求是相同的,所以一般評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)對兩節(jié)都適用。 B 節(jié):要求考生根據(jù)提示信息寫出一篇 160- 200詞的短文(標(biāo)點符號不計算在內(nèi))。總分 30 分。大家學(xué)習(xí)網(wǎng) 考研基礎(chǔ)班網(wǎng)絡(luò)課堂寫作 講義 北京新東方學(xué)校 王江濤 第一節(jié) 考研寫作總論 一、課程安排: 考研寫作總論:評卷實例、復(fù)習(xí)計劃、 學(xué)習(xí)方法、大綱解讀 應(yīng)用文:書信類、告示類 段落寫作:真題透視、框架結(jié)構(gòu)、啟承轉(zhuǎn)合 兩圖寫作( 00、 0 0 07) 一圖寫作( 9 0 0 0 05) 圖表作文 二、評卷實例: 2020 年 真題 Directions: Among all the worthy feelings of mankind, love is probably the noblest, but everyone had his/her own understanding of it. There has been a discussion recently on the issue in a newspaper. Write an essay to the newspaper to 1) show your understanding of the symbolic meaning of the picture below, 2) give a specific example, and 3) give your suggestion as to the best way to show love. 20分范文: Among all the worthy feelings of mankind, love is probably the noblest. It is of the utmost importance to the human beings. Everybody not only needs love, but also should give love. As is described in the picture, “l(fā)ove is a lamp which is brighter in darker places.” This is indeed true. People in darker places need more light than ordinary people. Maybe even a dim light can give them much hope for a better life and progress. Maybe even a dim light can give them much hope for a better life and progress. Maybe just a thread of light will call forth their strength and courage to step out of their difficulties. For instance when someone is starving to death, just a little food and water from you may save his life. Or when a little girl in a poor rural area drops out of school because of poverty, just a 大家學(xué)習(xí)網(wǎng) small sum of money from you may support her to finish her schooling and change her life, you have given love which is like a lamp in a dark place where light is most needed. So to sum up, we should offer our help to all who are in need. We expect to get love from others and we also give love to others so when you see someone in difficulty or in distress and in need of help, don’t hesitate to give your love to him. I believe then the relationship between people will be harmonious and our society will be a better place for us to live in. 18 分范文 It is generally believed that love is a hot topic which is most talked about. This is true not only in China but also in other countries. We live in different countries, speak different languages, but love is something mon to us all. But how to show love may be different with different people in different countries. This is something we should give more thought to. As is shown in the picture, love is like a lamp which shines brightest in dark places. This tells us a simple truth: Love is like a lamp. It is most valuable when it is most needed. For example, once I saw a foreign lady get lost in the street. She could not speak Chinese and nobody seemed to be able to help her. Though my English is not very good and I am a shy person, I thought she needed help very much. I asked her what she wanted. She told me she lost her way, so I showed her the way to her hotel. It was a small thing but she thanked me very much because my help was needed very much. My help was like a lamp in dark places. I think we all should be like a lamp in a dark place, showing our love, giving our help to others, even to strangers. In this way, we can make this world a harmonious and peaceful world. 三、復(fù)習(xí)計劃: 考前復(fù)習(xí): 1)攻克詞匯 : 2)精研真題:詞匯、句子結(jié)構(gòu)、選項設(shè)置、英譯漢、背誦 3)適當(dāng)??迹? 寫作練習(xí): 時間分配: 1) 14: 00- 14: 15 寫作 A節(jié) 2) 14: 15- 14: 50 寫作 B 節(jié) 3) 14: 50- 16: 00 閱讀 A節(jié) 4) 16: 00- 16: 20 完型填空 5) 16: 20- 16: 40 閱讀 B 節(jié) 6) 16: 40- 17: 00 閱讀 C 節(jié) 第二節(jié) 應(yīng)用文 一、 學(xué)習(xí)方法: (一) 提高實力: 十遍精讀: 1) 精彩詞匯 2) 精彩詞組 3) 精彩句型 大家學(xué)習(xí)網(wǎng) 4) 句子結(jié)構(gòu):簡單句(主干+修飾成分)、從句、時態(tài)、冠詞、主謂一致 5) 段落結(jié)構(gòu):總分總,主題句+論證(+小結(jié)) 6) 關(guān)聯(lián)詞:小作文 3- 5 個,大作文 5- 7 個 7) 同義替換:詞匯+句型 8) 代詞替換: it, that, they 9) 精彩觀點: 10) 原因建議: 背誦: 滾瓜爛熟、脫口而出、多多益善 默寫: 發(fā)現(xiàn)寫作弱點 中譯英: 提高寫作實力 寫作: 模仿 (二) 掌握技巧: 萬能框架 二、 大綱解讀: (一)評價目標(biāo): 考生應(yīng)能寫不同類型的應(yīng)用文,包括私人和公務(wù)信函、備忘錄、摘要、報告等,還應(yīng)能寫一般描述性、敘述性和說明或議論性的文章。 A節(jié):考生根據(jù)所給情景寫出一篇約 100詞(標(biāo)點符號不計算在內(nèi))的應(yīng)用性短文,包括私人和公務(wù)信函、備忘錄、摘要、報告等。提示信息的形式有主題句、寫作 提綱、規(guī)定情景、圖、表等。但根據(jù)兩節(jié)的不同考查要點,評分是會有不同的側(cè)重點。 B 節(jié) B 節(jié)作文的評分重點在于內(nèi)容的完整性、文章的連貫組織性、語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯的多樣性及語言的準(zhǔn)確性。 B 節(jié)作文的字?jǐn)?shù)要求是 160- 200 詞。英、美拼寫及詞匯用法均可接受。t sign your own name at the end of the letter, use Li Ming instead. Don39。 圖二: 花 300 元做個 小貝 頭 。 manufacturing units guarantee to turn out products of good quality。 1 2020: Directions: Write an essay of 160200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and then 3) support your view with an example/examples. You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points) 四、考研論說文框架結(jié)構(gòu): 3 段、 12 句、 160- 200 詞、 5- 7 關(guān)聯(lián)詞、 5- 7 從句 第四節(jié) 兩圖寫作 大家學(xué)習(xí)網(wǎng) 一、 考研論說文框架結(jié)構(gòu): (一) 第一段:圖畫描述, 3 句 總體描述:人物 /動物 /事物+動作 /服裝+環(huán)境 /表情, 1 句 挖掘細(xì)節(jié)詞、串連成句: 1- 2 句 文字說明 /象征寓意: 1 句 (二) 第二段:意義闡釋, 5 句 主題句:象征寓意 , 1 句 論證: 3 句 1) 基礎(chǔ)一般的同學(xué): ( 1) 講原因: ( 2) 講故事: ( 3) 聯(lián)系現(xiàn)實:圖畫作文創(chuàng)作原則(以小見大,把握象征寓意,個體想為群體,具體想為抽象) 2) 基礎(chǔ)較好的同學(xué): ( 1) 五大角度:背景、事實、反方觀點、原因、后果 ( 2) 六種手段:因果、分類、定義解釋、統(tǒng)計事實、舉例、正反論證 小結(jié): 1 句 (三) 第三段:建議措施, 4 句 結(jié)論句: 1 句 針對雙方提建議: 2 句 包裝結(jié)尾、展望未來: 1 句 二、