【正文】 18, Saturday Fine Today I visited Water Park with several of my 【答案】May 18, Saturday FineToday I visited Water Park with several of mv classmates. It took us about an hour to get there by bus. When we arrived, there were a lot of visitors.In the morning, we went boating and enjoyed ourselves. We saw many animals, such as pandas, giraffes and monkeys in the afternoon. They are so lovely. We met some foreign guests and talked with them happily. However, during our visit we saw some people throwing rubbish and cutting in line.In my opinion, it is our duty to protect the environment and follow the rules in public. And I hope changes will take place in the future.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文，要求寫參觀日記。【點(diǎn)睛】此類作文首先要做的就是認(rèn)真閱讀題目要求，結(jié)合所給材料確定內(nèi)容，不能跑題偏題。3．書面表達(dá)初中畢業(yè)在即, 回顧三年的學(xué)習(xí)生活, 你一定有成功的體驗(yàn), 如一次考試, 一次比賽, 一次表演...... 請你以Believe Myself, and I Will Win為題寫一篇演講稿。Believe Myself, and I Will WinHello, everyone!___________________________________________________________________________Thank you for your listening.【答案】Believe Myself, and I will winHello, everyone! As an old saying goes, where there is a will, there is a way. There always are difficulties in our life and we have to face them.When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English. I just couldn’t understand it. I even wanted to give it up. Then my parents told me that where there is a will, there is a way. They also told me that I should be confident. My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it. I had the confidence again. I found when I put my heart into it, English didn’t’ seem that difficult. I made great progress. My parents and teachers were happy for me. I felt pleased and proud for myself, too. To be confident means I should believe myself. Believe myself, there are hopes in my life. In the future, I won39。寫作時(shí)學(xué)生們應(yīng)根據(jù)這幾個(gè)內(nèi)容提要，發(fā)揮自己的想象力，將這些內(nèi)容補(bǔ)充完整，用正確的英語表達(dá)出來。應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，選擇適當(dāng)句型、短語、詞匯進(jìn)行表達(dá)。文章有以下幾個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)：首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包括了題目中要求的所有內(nèi)容，沒有遺漏要點(diǎn)。文章中句式變化豐富，有簡單句、并列句、復(fù)合句，長短句結(jié)合，增強(qiáng)了文章的表現(xiàn)力。4．現(xiàn)在智能手機(jī)（smartphone）越來越普及，很多中學(xué)生都有智能手機(jī)。首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作。5．書面表達(dá) 我校決定讓學(xué)生輪流打掃廁所，以此作為教育學(xué)生的一種方式。 3．學(xué)會(huì)理解和尊重清潔工人的勞動(dòng)。 注意：1．短文應(yīng)包括表中所有內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不要逐字翻譯； 2．不少于80詞?，F(xiàn)在完成時(shí)（have/has+done）。你們班級的同學(xué)們就春節(jié)是否能燃放煙花進(jìn)行了討論。AGREEDISAGREE原 因1．減少空氣和噪音污染，保護(hù)環(huán)境……2．可能引起安全問題。請根據(jù)表格所提供的信息,給市長寫一封信介紹大家的觀點(diǎn)，同時(shí)談?wù)勛约旱南敕?。盡量使用高分句型。本文提綱： 大多數(shù)學(xué)生不同意在春節(jié)放煙花。有些孩子喜歡玩煙花，這對他們的眼睛很危險(xiǎn)。此外，中國傳統(tǒng)文化也缺失了。保護(hù)環(huán)境就是保護(hù)我們自己。要學(xué)以致用。假設(shè)你是一個(gè)注重“低碳”生活的中學(xué)生，請以“My Green Life”為題寫一篇短文，簡單談?wù)劇熬G色生活”的重要性，以及你所倡導(dǎo)的“綠色生活”方式。其次點(diǎn)明綠色生活的重要性。其次，在語句正確的基礎(chǔ)上，多運(yùn)用連詞，使文章升華，長短句結(jié)合，使文章更上一檔次。注意：. ，句子連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；2. 短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名或能夠透露你個(gè)人身份的相關(guān)信息。審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)以一般過去時(shí)、第一人稱為主來敘述。句子的結(jié)構(gòu)要完整，可以簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，如主謂賓或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)。短文有以下幾個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)：首先文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)、完整，符合題目要求。語法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確，注意了名詞、動(dòng)詞、形容詞等的正確形式。所提供的材料中列舉了“書山有路勤為徑, 學(xué)海無涯苦作舟”, 成功不會(huì)從天而降, 美好的未來需要靠不斷努力來創(chuàng)造。寫作時(shí)，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。句子because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in 。這句話用到了“the+比較級，the+比較級”結(jié)構(gòu)。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。時(shí)態(tài)為一般過去時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱。短文中較好的句型有：In the past, I was busy learning my subjects and worked hard at them、But now I am interested in history, because it is very interesting、In this way, I’ve got more knowledge and improved my life.、I’ll make it more and more beautiful. Believing myself is the key to success等等。層次清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)合理。語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫、自然。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：首先要展開合理想象，補(bǔ)充文章細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容，注意各部分內(nèi)容之間的層次，內(nèi)容要完整、充實(shí)，結(jié)構(gòu)要清晰。My Unforgettable Junior High School LifeHow time flies!