【正文】 第一篇：大學(xué)英語四級(jí)優(yōu)秀作文大學(xué)英語四級(jí)考試優(yōu)秀范文Part 1:2010年12月，父母應(yīng)該……How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent①It is beyond reproach that children are always considered the apple of parents” eyes ,which is especially true in singlechild families.②However ,many parents goso far as to take over everything for their life and study even to their future.③It is not unusual to witness that an increasing number of children are acpanied by parent on their first day in college.④I declare in no uncertain terms that it will end up with the children” s lack of such a world full of fierce petition ,being independent bees essential for a wouldbe ,⑤what should parents do ?In my humble opinion, ⑥on the one hand ,parents should raise children in a freeranging way instead of being “helicopter” parents, who always seem to hover over their children。⑦ on the other hand ,parents should teach children to be responsible for their own behaviors instead of monopolizing everything.⑧I cling to the belief that only when parents realize what is better for their children and care them in a right way ,can they help children develop ：①引入話題：孩子是父母的掌上明珠。②自然過渡：但是，有些父母卻為孩子包辦一切。③引用生活中的實(shí)例，證實(shí)父母為孩子包辦并非空穴來風(fēng)。④分析包辦所帶來的后果。⑤提出問題：父母應(yīng)該如何做？⑥和⑦具體闡述解決問題的策略，層次分明。⑧簡要總結(jié)前文所提的具體側(cè)咧，是文章結(jié)尾不顯突兀。加分亮點(diǎn)：beyond reproach 無可非議be acpanied by…有……陪同declare in no uncertain terms 毫不諱言fierce petition 激烈的競(jìng)爭essential 至關(guān)重要的cling to the belief 堅(jiān)信Part 2:2010年6月……，我認(rèn)為……Due Attention Should Be Given to SpellingNowadays,① an increasing number of students seem to attach less importance to spelling in English learning.②Thus ,numerous misspellings appear in their papers, ③and what ”s worse , a wellorganized essay is therefore totally impossible.④There are various reasons responsible for this embarrassing situation.⑤For on thing ,much more students give priorities to oral English at the cost of dosing less spelling exercises ,let alone reflect on what they learned the other day.⑥For another ,many teachers put so much emphasis on munication and grammar in teaching that they seldom highlight spelling, and occasionally worse still, they themselves are caught in change this situation, ⑦I hold to the belief that students and teachers should work together.⑧On the one hand ,students should stop plaining about spellings ,and they should realize correct spelling is a must in learning English.⑨On the other hand, teachers should pay more attention to spelling in teaching, for example, focusing on pronunciation and word via joint effort can students gain much ground in ：①開門見山，描述現(xiàn)象：很多學(xué)生不重視拼寫。②和③使用thus, and what” s worse 說明該現(xiàn)象造成的結(jié)果：拼寫錯(cuò)誤連篇，文章結(jié)構(gòu)混亂。④本段分析造成上述結(jié)果的原因。⑤和⑥for on thing…for another…具體列舉不同的原因，層次分明。⑦概括提出解決問題的方法。⑧和⑨使用on the one hand …on the other hand …結(jié)構(gòu)，針對(duì)上述成因，提出兩種對(duì)應(yīng)的解決方案。最后結(jié)尾常用的倒裝句，總結(jié)前文。加分亮點(diǎn)：embarrassing 令人為難的，尷尬的give priorities to 認(rèn)為優(yōu)先Put emphasis on 強(qiáng)調(diào)Part 3：2009年12月……，我們應(yīng)該……Creating a Green CampusDuring recent years ,①the topic of a green campus ,which has aroused widely public attention, is being more and more popular.②Undoubtedly, a green campus, the indispensable part for the development of college students ,has a profound impact on both individuals and society, for its significance cannot be neglectedA green environment ,rather than anything else, plays a decisive role in the growth of college ,③it should also be mentioned that a preen campus includes not only the places where the students live, but also the mental green surrounding ,the soul of students would be not as pure as we that case ,④in no place other than campus should we attempt to make a green to the seriousness of the situation, it is crucial for us to take effective measures to create a green campus.⑤In the first place, it” s essential that law and regulations should be worked out and enforced by the government and authorities.⑥Furthermore, it is high time that we enhanced the awareness of the students themselves.⑦ Only in this way can we get satisfactory these measures taken ,it is reasonable for us to believe that a green campus will be achieved in the near ：①開門見山，提出綠色校園的話題已經(jīng)引起社會(huì)關(guān)注。②點(diǎn)名綠色校園的重要意義。③用not only..but also 句型介紹綠色校園的內(nèi)涵和外延。④半倒裝句的運(yùn)用恰到好處，引出下文要闡述的內(nèi)容，即社會(huì)各界應(yīng)行動(dòng)起來，推動(dòng)綠色校園的建設(shè)。⑤和⑥結(jié)構(gòu)連接詞in the first place 和furthermore 的運(yùn)用，使得論述清晰明了。⑦結(jié)尾常用的倒裝句，總結(jié)前文。加分亮點(diǎn)：undoubtedly 毋庸置疑地indispensable必不可少的，必需的significance意義Part4:2009年6月，目的是………Free Admissions to Museums?①Recently ,more and more museums are open to the public free of doing so ,they can attract more visitors ,and offer the visitors more opportunities to explore and get easy access to the world of history ,culture and knowledge.②However, some people view that the practice also brings problems and are right in a sense.③For one thing ,their main concern is that with more visitors ,it is possible that objects exhibited can get damaged more easily.④For another ,it bees a huge economic burden for museums to run as usual without any profits from the visitors.⑤In my opinion, I am absolutely in favor of this reason lies in the fact that the government should provide more opportunities for citizens to explore and get access to the knowledge , kids and teenagers can acquire knowledge in a more vivid way in the museums.⑥I hope all the people can share the same national treasures in more free ：①開門見山，提出論點(diǎn)。并說明這樣做的目的。②話題一轉(zhuǎn)，闡明這個(gè)舉措的弊端。③和④運(yùn)用關(guān)聯(lián)詞For one thing …For another…,使文章層次分明。⑤利用in my opinion 銜接文章，引出自己的觀點(diǎn)。⑥最后提出希望，總結(jié)全文。加分亮點(diǎn)：get access to 接觸in favor of 贊同vivid 生動(dòng)的 鮮明的Part 5:2008年12月Limiting the Use of Disposable Plastic Bags①Recently, limiting the use of disposable plastic bags has been brought to popular attention in one would deny that it was a real convenience in our daily life.②However ,what would our society be like with the excessive use ?The sharp increase in using plastic bags has given a rise to such problems as environmental takes many years for plastic bags to be absorbed by soil, ③which blocks the drainage system and causes water pollution.④What ?s worse ,some bags are of poorquality, and eve