【正文】 第一篇：大學(xué)英語四級作文真題解析大學(xué)英語四級作文真題解析四級的題型包括論說文、說明文、記敘文。2017年6月份我們考的是考應(yīng)用文，賣的是二手車、二手電腦，12月份考的是文字當(dāng)中的A或者B的形式，到底是工作還是考研，到底是國企還是外企。2017年12月考到的是大家關(guān)心的醫(yī)鬧問題，同學(xué)感覺到這個(gè)問題比較傷感。醫(yī)鬧怎么說?我們可以翻成“醫(yī)療的一些問題、爭端或者沖突”等等。這是第一套題。第二套題，講的是所謂的老師和學(xué)生之間的關(guān)系如何營造。第三套題，父母和孩子的關(guān)系。大家發(fā)現(xiàn)這道題從審題的難度來講基本長沒有什么難度，基本上是初中、小學(xué)詞匯，題干不會出現(xiàn)什么問題?！癏ow to”題型已經(jīng)考過三次，重點(diǎn)在如何(how)，也就是說我們重點(diǎn)是方法。從內(nèi)容上來講，但是發(fā)現(xiàn)這三道考題之間的關(guān)系是大家非常熟悉的話題，比說醫(yī)鬧關(guān)系，醫(yī)生和患者之間的關(guān)系，老師和學(xué)生的關(guān)系，這是教育的話題，再比如家長和孩子之間的關(guān)系等等，所以從題材到內(nèi)容來說都是四級考生已經(jīng)必備的知識要素。我們的四六級的寫作滿分是15分，包括兩部分，第一是獎勵分，第二是基本分的部分。首先，獎勵分是卷面的問題，大家都喜歡美的事物。也就是說要保持卷面清晰，給老師留下好的第一印象。第二是基本分。這里包括三部分。第一是文章的結(jié)構(gòu)。我們在寫作文的時(shí)候分三個(gè)層次，總分總的原則，第一自然段我們一定要進(jìn)行引題部分，第二是分析，第三是總結(jié)。第一段把醫(yī)患關(guān)系，家長和孩子關(guān)系，學(xué)生和老師的關(guān)系等等，這些核心的主題詞引導(dǎo)出來。第二是分析。根據(jù)不同文章的要求，不同文章的題材進(jìn)行分析的過程。重點(diǎn)在方法、建議的措施上。所以這個(gè)文章中間分析的環(huán)節(jié)，重點(diǎn)講的是建議、措施和方法。第三是總結(jié)。注意要加上所謂邏輯關(guān)系詞。比如三個(gè)方法，或者是三個(gè)建議的措施，三個(gè)原因，三個(gè)危害等等。這是英語考試，大家一定要想清楚我們每句話首先保證的是準(zhǔn)確，其次保證的是漂亮。如何保證準(zhǔn)確漂亮?第一個(gè)是詞的運(yùn)用，我們在剛才的文章當(dāng)中，是否出現(xiàn)了“重要important”這個(gè)單詞，你可以換一些高級的詞匯essential，當(dāng)你把這些常見的單詞進(jìn)行高級化的替換以后，你的分值就會提高。再說一下句型的文化。好的文章，不僅是句子準(zhǔn)確，還要考慮句子的高級化。比如說你是否運(yùn)用了非謂語動詞等高級語法。第二篇：最新大學(xué)英語四級真題作文2012年6月四級作文On Excessive PackagingNowadays the phenomena of excessive packaging of goods are prevailing in our society: clothes swathed in tissue paper, placed in cardboard box and finally wrapped in welldesigned plastic bags, imported bottles of grape wine packed in wooden boxes, fruits put in handwoven baskets, to name but a are several causes of excessive first reason is that a large number of panies believe that they can attract customers’ attention and stimulate their purchasing desire by overpackaging their goods, thus gaining more the other hand, quite a number of consumers mistakenly hold that the more delicate the package is, the better the quality will be, thus encouraging excessive my point of view, excessive packaging has disastrous consequences, including the loss of precious resources, excessive consumption of water and energy, and unnecessary extraction of scarce land for solve the problem, it’s necessary to take the following , laws and regulations must be made to restrict excessive packaging of addition, we need to raise consumer’s awareness that excessive packaging doesn’t equal to high quality and advocate packaging recycling.【解析】本次作文的話題是“過度包裝”，話題不斷新，考生應(yīng)該都比較熟悉。寫好本篇作文的關(guān)鍵在于緊跟題目所列提綱：現(xiàn)象——原因——看法和建議，確定相應(yīng)的寫作結(jié)構(gòu)。重點(diǎn)分析產(chǎn)生此現(xiàn)象的原因有哪些，把最重要的兩三點(diǎn)羅列下來。最后，根據(jù)分析出的原因提供相應(yīng)的建議。范文首段開門見山，首先一句話總結(jié)如今社會上過度包裝現(xiàn)象盛行，而后舉出一些實(shí)例補(bǔ)充說明。第二段重點(diǎn)從公司和消費(fèi)者兩方面論述產(chǎn)生過度包裝的原因。公司方面是為了吸引顧客，刺激消費(fèi)，贏取更多的利潤；消費(fèi)者方面是認(rèn)為包裝越精美，質(zhì)量越好這種錯誤的消費(fèi)意識。接下來作者表明自己的看法，認(rèn)為過度包裝會導(dǎo)致很多問題：稀缺資源的流失；水，能源的過度消耗以及產(chǎn)生不必要的垃圾場等。2011年12月四級作文Directions: You39。re allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will by menting on the humorous saying, “Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the ’ve done it hundreds of time.”You39。d write at least 120 words but no more than 180 :。，不刻苦學(xué)習(xí)，終究不會成為有用之才Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong WillWith the ing of a brand new era full of opportunities and innovations, the issue of how to succeed has aroused growing concern in the there are thousands of ways to success, in my opinion, a strong will is the important guarantee of success, just as a proverb says, “Where there is a will there is a way”.The long history of human being has proved that only those who have a strong will can fulfill great mission and achieve success at succeeds without a strong Mao Zedong, one of the great founders of the People’s Republic of China, as an without the strong will to save Chinese people from heavy disaster and build a prosperous, democratic and civilized new country, how could he drive Japanese out of China and bee such a famous leader in the world?If we as a student want to be successful in the future, the strong will on hardworking is the most , we have been entering an information age with rapid update of firstly seizes and keeps up with the development of advanced information can succeeds at , studying hard to get more knowledge and improve our ability to handle plicated problems as possible is the only way to lay the solid foundation of future Succeeds Without a Strong Will“Where there is a will, there is way” is an old proverb which almost everyone knows, but not all understand it so , it means that if you are really resolved to do something, no matter how difficult it might be, never give fact, strong will is a kind of good quality which successful people should great man is always one who has a firm resolution and an inflexible will never succeed all his life without a firm will to get the final a rule, great tasks are acplished by men of strong example, Yatsen, the founder of the Republic of China, set the Chinese people free from the Manchurian rule through a long period of hard of his attempts failed and many of his followers were killed, but he had an inflexible spirit and stuck to his , he made the revolution of 1911 a same is true of men in all walks of is quite obvious that there is nothing difficult in the world, if you make up your mind to do it, you will certainly acplish your stands to as for students like us, we should have a good attitude towards with difficulties and failures, keep heads up and never give , we should make full preparation, though strong will help us overe the difficulties, it is not for person who has no 標(biāo)準(zhǔn)版Doing Shopping OnlineWith the development of the Internet, shopping is no longer a tiring click your mouse to choose the articles you like, and the purchase is don39。t even have to step out of the seems all easy and , people39。s opinions vary on this believe that on line shopping is time and money plentiful selection options, they can buy whatever they like at any time others insist that mispurchasing alone is annoying enough, not to mention the credibility of the sellers and the safety of their my opinion, the convenience and excitement of on line shopping is beyond all the meantime, we must always bear in mind that certain traps do exist, so we39。d better make sure the sellers are trustworthy before addition, we should also guard ourselves from the pot