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One possible version:Dear Mr. Wu,We have discussed whether Jim or Jane should be the volunteer for the event of the 2,500thanniversary of the founding of Yangzhou City. Different groups have different remendations. Jim and Jane are two candidates,Group A of the class strongly remend Jim. Because Jim is often praised by teachers for his excellent grades. Though a few words, he learns about the history of our Yangzhou City. Also he speaks English wonderfully.However, Group B think Jane is better. It’s true that Jane’s Grades are not so good, but she is willing to do extra work for the class in her spare time.In my opinion, I prefer Jane to be the volunteer. As we all know, a volunteer must be good at munication and be ready to devote his /her time to people in trouble. And Jane has the quality.I hope my will be of some value to you.Yours sincerely,Li Ping觀點理由Group A推薦Jim學習成績優(yōu)秀,經(jīng)常受到老師表揚雖不多言,但……Group B推薦Jane學習成績雖然一般,但……樂于在空余時間為班級做額外的工作你推薦……作為志愿者應該樂于奉獻,……請舉例說明你所推薦的Jim/Jane的品質和能力試題分析:這是一篇圖表作文,內(nèi)容要求以班長Li Ping的名義,根據(jù)漢語提示和表格給學校負責人吳先生寫一份電子郵件,向他匯報你班招募志愿者的具體情況。Jim和Jane是兩名候選人,班上的A組同學推薦Jim,B組同學推薦Jane。你會推薦誰,理由是什么? 本文應該一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài),人稱為單數(shù)第一,三人稱,注意主謂一致問題,寫作中注意一些常見句式的應用和多種句式交替運用。還有敘述順序,符合邏輯關系?!玖咙c說明】本文結構合理。第一、二段匯報了同學們的觀點,第三段說明班長個人的看法。涵蓋了所有的要點。同時運用了較復雜的句子,because、but等這些詞組的運用使句子之間銜接緊密、連貫。prefer…to,devote his /her time to…等較高級的詞匯的應用為文章增色不少。.隨著年齡的增長,我們的課外活動領域會擴大,關注點也會增多。你們學校的English Newsletter正在以My AfterSchool Activities為題舉行征文活動,請根據(jù)下列表格提示的內(nèi)容,用英語寫一篇征文?;睢雨P注點以 前1.看電視;2. ……自己?,F(xiàn) 在1.和家長交流;2.做志愿者;3. ……家庭、……我們在成長,我們應該……要求:1)表達清楚,語法正確,上下文連貫;2)必須包括表格中所有的相關信息,并適當發(fā)揮;3)詞數(shù):100詞左右(征文的開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù));4)不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。One possible version:My AfterSchool ActivitiesAs we grow, both our afterschool activities and what we care about are being more and more.In the past, I often watched TV or played puter games at home. Sometimes I went out to play football with my friends. And I only cared about my own feeling and never cared about others.But now, I often have a munication with my parents, and let them know what I think and what I want to do. And now I am a volunteer. I often help people in need. I don’t think only about myself, but about others. This made me feel happy.We are growing up. We should think more about others, not only about ourselves. We should do some meaningful things.隨著網(wǎng)絡技術的不斷發(fā)展,人們傳遞情感的方式也在不斷變化,假如你叫王強,上周你就“使用紙質卡片還是電子卡片?”在班級展開了一項調(diào)查。請你給“China Daily”報社寫一封信,介紹此次調(diào)查的結果并發(fā)表你的觀點。約30%的同學認為約70%的同學認為你的看法使用紙質卡片:1. 手工制作,表達真情2. 攜帶方便,便于保存3. ......使用電子卡片:1.信息量大,傳遞快捷2. 節(jié)約紙張,利于環(huán)保3. ....... ....... ......(至少兩條)【要求】1. 表達清楚,語法正確,上下文連貫;2. 必須包括所有相關信息,并作適當發(fā)揮;3. 詞數(shù):100詞左右(信的開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù));4. 不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。Dear Editor,I am writing to tell you about the survey I’ve made on “Using paper cards or ecards?” in our class.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours SincerelyWang Qiang二、優(yōu)秀范文(原文)Dear Editor,I am writing to tell you ab