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Homework ? Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists? You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: ? 名校校園正成為旅游新熱點 ? 校園是否應(yīng)對游客開放,人們看法不同 ? 我認(rèn)為 …… 問題 ?字?jǐn)?shù)不夠 ?標(biāo)題的大小寫問題 實詞:名詞、代詞、形容詞、數(shù)詞、動詞、副詞 虛詞:冠詞、介詞、連詞、感嘆詞 ?個別詞匯短語錯誤: 旅游勝地 熱門話題 tourist attraction hot topic/issue ?表述觀點的句型不會運用 ?語法錯誤 ? In addition, if open, there will be a few unsafe factors enter into school gate. ? Should the university campus be open to tourists has aroused wide concerning. ? But if the university should be open to tourists, has advantages and disadvantages. ? …so that is benefit to teenagers. ? Along with the advance of society, more and more problems brought our attention. ? Others think that don’t open is a better choice. ? They think the tourists will destroy the peaceful of the college. ? They think the university campus is where have cultural atmosphere. ? Some tourists, who are rude, may bring bad influence to university students. 作文類型 段落組織模式 現(xiàn)象解釋型 描述段(描述現(xiàn)象) 說明段(闡述原因或影響)議論段(表明看法) 問題解決型 描述段(描述問題) 說明段(分析問題的原因或危害) 說明段(說明解決問題的