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如何寫出好句子 一 . 教學內容: 如何寫出好句子 如何寫出好句子: 好句子的標準應是:用詞準確、邏輯清晰、簡潔明了、可讀性強。 1. 學會運用復合句 復合句包括:名詞性從句、狀語從句、定語從句 用復合句增強句子之間的邏輯關系,使你的句子變得緊湊 [練習] 根據句子之間的關系,用正確的連詞使其成為復合句。 ( 1) Children grow older. They prefer to be more independent rather than be at the mercy of their parents. When children grow older, they prefer to be more independent rather than be at the mercy of their parents. ( 2) I was very excited . I couldn’t express myself in words. I was so excited that I couldn’t express myself in words. ( 3) We will have a further discussion. We draw a final conclusion. We will have a further discussion before we draw a final conclusion. ( 4) The economy in this area is developing rapidly. The qualities of some citizens are still not satisfactory. Although the economy in this area is developing rapidly, the qualities of some citizens are still not satisfactory. ( 5) You are allowed to drive my car . You should drive carefully and slowly. You are allowed to drive my car on condition that/ as long as you should drive carefully and slowly. ( 6) The teacher had read my position. He gave me his opinion. After the teacher had read my position, he gave me his opinion. ( 7) You have got the secret. Please don’t spread it in public. If you have got the secret, please don’t spread it in public. ( 8) They arrived at the farm. They were weled by the farmers. The moment/As soon as they arrived at the farm, they were weled by the farmers. ( 9) The International Red Cross is an anization. Its purpose is to help the sick and the needy. The International Red Cross is an anization whose purpose is to help the sick and the needy. ( 10) I decided to find a job. I could earn the money. I decided to find a job so that I could earn the money. 2. 學會運用非謂語動詞 用非謂語動詞使