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英語書面表達(dá)練習(xí)含解析一、英語書面表達(dá)1.書面表達(dá)地球是我們的家園,我們作為地球的主人,就應(yīng)該好好保護(hù)地球。現(xiàn)在正在倡導(dǎo)“低碳”生活,只要我們不污染地球的環(huán)境,不浪費(fèi)地球的能源,就能夠讓我們的周圍變得更綠,生活變得更美好。作為中學(xué)生,我們應(yīng)該怎樣做呢?談?wù)勀愕南敕?。?nèi)容應(yīng)該包括以下幾點(diǎn):1. 節(jié)約用水、用電;2. 節(jié)約紙張,循環(huán)使用舊課本,保護(hù)森林;3. 節(jié)約糧食,在更多的土地上種樹;4. 不亂丟雜物,保護(hù)環(huán)境;要求:短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名;80詞左右提示詞:the greenhouse gases lifestyle 低碳生活方式How does our earth turn better?The earth is our home. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we are living will be better and better.【答案】How does our earth turn better?The earth is our home. We should protect our earth as the owner. But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle?I think as a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. When you wash, can you close down the water? Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? I think saving paper is necessary. All the used text books should be recycled. Thus, less trees won39。t be cut down again. If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm. Don39。t throw litter everywhere, it will pollute our environment.If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we living will be better and better.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語,為文章增色不少,如how to do,live in,around us, such as,as a middle school student,and so on,close down the water,turn off the lights,cut down,make a contribution to our earth,pollute our environment,better and better等。而固定結(jié)構(gòu)But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle?和I think as a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. /Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? / If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their ,豐富了短文內(nèi)容,使表達(dá)多樣化,是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性,也更富有條理。【點(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以,考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn),要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。2.書面表達(dá)假設(shè)你是某英文報(bào)紙“Teenagers”欄目的編輯Betty,日前收到了Lucy的來信。她在信中訴說了她的煩惱,請你根據(jù)Lucy的來信,用英語寫一封90詞左右的回信。要求內(nèi)容合理,信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Lucy,I’m sorry to know that you aren’t allowed to read eBooks._______________________________________All the best!Betty【答案】Dear Lucy,I’m sorry to know that you aren’t allowed to read eBooks.In recent years, electronic books, as a product of information technology, have gained more and more popularity. It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits. For one thing, they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. For another, their appearance will make paperwaste less.However, as every coin has two sides, electronic books also have some disadvantages. For example, long time of reading ebooks does harm to our eyes. And there are more radiation which is harmful to people39。s body.In my opinion, Ebook cannot take the place of traditional book, but it39。s an useful product. I think that ebooks are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading over.All the best!Betty【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語,為文章增色不少,如in recent years,as a product of,live in,more and more,so…that,for example,do harm to,be harmful to,in my opinion,take the place of,instead of等。同時(shí)For one thing, / For another,/ However,等使短文的敘述很有條理,而It is no doubt electronic books brin