【正文】 So he stood in front of the gate. At that moment, there were snowflakes flying over his head and it was very cold. But yangshi still stood in the snow until Mr. Cheng woke up. When the teacher woke up, the snow was very deep. Yangshi was like a snowman standing at the gate. Finally, the teacher was moved deeply.After reading the story, I think we should respect our teacher. We should study hard.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文，主要介紹中國(guó)的經(jīng)典故事, “程門立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”。3字跡工整、語(yǔ)言精練、表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、條理清晰。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)（have/has+done）。請(qǐng)根據(jù)旅行社提供的信息，將你的選擇用英文向同學(xué)們介紹。 導(dǎo)致 cause注意：，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；；：100詞左右，文章開頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總數(shù)。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。d like to help people． For example， I volunteer to visit sick children in the hospital and cheer them up．最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性?！熬W(wǎng)購(gòu)”已成為一種時(shí)尚，越來(lái)越多的學(xué)生也加入到網(wǎng)購(gòu)群體中。Hangzhou is the resort where Longjing tea is produced. 杭州是龍井茶出產(chǎn)的勝地。 注意：1．短文應(yīng)包括表中所有內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不要逐字翻譯； 2．不少于80詞。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。（3）同學(xué)們將在下個(gè)月網(wǎng)購(gòu)其他的英文書。4．為了宣傳和弘揚(yáng)中華優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化, 某雙語(yǔ)雜志將舉辦征文活動(dòng)來(lái)介紹中國(guó)的經(jīng)典故事, “程門立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”是其中一個(gè)選題。2．書面表達(dá)假設(shè)你是某英文報(bào)紙“Teenagers”欄目的編輯Betty，日前收到了Lucy的來(lái)信。t be cut down again. If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm. Don39?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。注意固定搭配及主謂一致的問(wèn)題，例如:There was/ were...注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，具有條理性。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如bought sth for sb, be grateful to, be going to do, share sth with sb, be fond of, as far as I am concerned, on the one hand...on the other hand, from to以及we had a reading party,which was held on Friday in our reading room中which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。 這件事在學(xué)生中引 起了強(qiáng)烈的反響，請(qǐng)你把下列不同意見整理成一篇書面材料，報(bào)告給學(xué)校。What is Longjing Tea famous for?Good tasteWhat is it used for?Keep healthyHow is it produced?Grow on the sides of mountains ...What’s the best place to learn about it?Why?Hangzhou National Tea Museum ...Longjing Tea____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Tea culture is one of the most famous cultures in China. Longjing tea is one of the famous Chinese traditional teas and famous green tea. Why is Longjing Tea famous for? Because it taste good. It is good for people to keep healthy by drinking longjing tea. Longjing tea grows mainly on the sides of mountains. People are very strict about the picking of Longjing tea.Longjing is a famous tea in China, which is related not only to the climate and soil environment of Longjing, but also to the production technology of Longjing. Hangzhou is the resort where Longjing tea is produced. So Hangzhou National Tea Museum is the best place to learn about Hongjing tea.【解析】【詳解】