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染做些什么?請用英語寫一篇不少于80詞的短文,談?wù)勛约旱南敕?。參考詞匯:discussion, protect the environment, be caused by, ordinary people, instead of driving cars, use plastic bags, cut down on, recycle, natural food, save energy, reduce pollutions__________________________________范文:(一)One possible version:Our class had a discussion about protecting the is my think the environment is one of our biggest was found out that a lot of air pollution is actually caused by ordinary people, not just by big are so many things each one of us can do every 39。s best for people to take buses or walk instead of driving should stop to use plastic bags for can cut down on waste, recycle trash and eat more natural these ways we can save energy and reduce pollutions.(二)評分說明:評分原則(1)評分時,先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次,然后以該檔次的要求來衡量,確定或調(diào)整檔次,最后給分。(2)評分時,應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為:內(nèi)容要點、應(yīng)用詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和準確性及上下文的連貫性。(3)拼寫與標點符號是語言準確性的一個方面,評分時,應(yīng)視其對交際的影響程度予以考慮。(4)如果書寫較差,以至影響交際,將分數(shù)降低一個檔次。各檔次的給分范圍和要求第一檔(1315分)很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點;應(yīng)用了較豐富的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯;用詞準確、句子通順、行文連貫、表達清楚,沒有或基本沒有語言錯誤;書寫工整;字數(shù)符合要求。完全達到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。第二擋(1012分)較好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。雖漏掉2個次重點,但覆蓋所有主要內(nèi)容;應(yīng)用的語言結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯雖不太豐富,但能滿足任務(wù)的要求;句子較通順、表達較清楚;有少量語言錯誤;書寫工整;字數(shù)基本符合要求。達到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。第三檔(79分)基本完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。雖漏掉一些內(nèi)容,但覆蓋所有主要內(nèi)容;應(yīng)用的語言結(jié)構(gòu)單一;句子不夠通順,行文不夠連貫;語言錯誤較多;書寫不夠工整,字數(shù)較少。整體而言,基本達到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。第四檔(06分)未恰當(dāng)完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要內(nèi)容,寫了一些無關(guān)內(nèi)容;應(yīng)用的語言結(jié)構(gòu)單一且不規(guī)范;句子不通順,行文不連貫;語言錯誤多;書寫潦草,字數(shù)不足50。信息未能清楚地傳達給讀者。萊蕪:八、書面表達(共1題,計20分)2010年4月,青海玉樹發(fā)生了地震(earthquake),家園、學(xué)校受到了損壞。一名災(zāi)區(qū)的學(xué)生(Zhuoma)下周將來你們班。她將在你們班學(xué)習(xí)一年。請根據(jù)表格提示,用英語寫一篇短文,談?wù)勀銓⑷绾螏椭?,并適當(dāng)寫出自己的想法。卓瑪(Zhuoma):年齡:13歲,家鄉(xiāng):青海玉樹。On weekdays:1.帶她參觀校園,2.送她學(xué)習(xí)用品,3.在學(xué)習(xí)上幫助她,4.......。On weekends:1.請她來家里,2.一起吃飯,3……。注意:字數(shù)要控制在80100詞左右。不要出現(xiàn)你的姓名和學(xué)校信息。開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。Zhuoma will e to our class next week.She39。s from范文:(一)One possible version:Zhuoma is a 13yearold will e to our class next 39。s from Yushu, her hometown, she couldn39。t go to school because of the 39。ll study with us for a her new classmate, I39。ll try my best to help she es, I39。ll introduce my friends to her and show her around our weekdays, I39。m going to give her some school 39。m good at English, so I can help her with her 39。ll help her join our English she is lonely on can invite her to my 39。ll have dinner , we can play games or watch 39。ll do my best to make her happy and feel at my opinion, all Chinese e from a should help each other.(二)評分說明:要求考生用適當(dāng)?shù)臅r態(tài)、語態(tài)、句式和詞語,完整準確地表述所提示的內(nèi)容,書寫工整。分四檔評分:1.短文通順完整,表達清楚,語言基本元誤,l720分;2.短文較通順完整,表達基本清楚,語言有少量錯誤,l216分;3.能寫明基本要點,短文不夠通順完整,語言有較多錯誤,但尚能達意,611分;4.僅能寫明部分要點,短文不完整,語言錯誤多,影響意思表達,05分。第三篇:2010年全國各地中考英語作文題目及2010年全國各地中考英語作文題目及范文匯編(一)書面表達現(xiàn)在網(wǎng)上購物越來越流行,假如你的朋友想在網(wǎng)上購買一款MP5,但他不知如何操作,請你根據(jù)表格中的提示寫一篇短文,向他介紹網(wǎng)上購物的益處、購買MP4的過程及網(wǎng)上購物的不利因素。要求:1.文中談?wù)摼W(wǎng)上購物的益處和不利因素均不少于兩點。2.文中不得出現(xiàn)與考生相關(guān)的真實信息,否則不予給分。3.語言規(guī)范,90詞左右。文章的題目和開頭已經(jīng)給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。Advantages 1.?2.?Process 1.Look through the shopping website.2.Choose the thing you want.3.Fill in the form(information such as credit card,address and so on).4.Click “Enter”.5.Get the thing by mail.Disadvantages 1.?2.?書面表達(本題共1大題;滿分20分)One possible version:Nowadays shopping online is more and more popular.I think shopping online is very convenient.You call buy anything online you want without leaving home.Shopping online will save much time.What39。s more,it39。s often in a low price.If you want to buy an MP4,you can look through the shopping website,type “MP4” on the website,you can find all kinds of MP4s.Then choose your favorite.What you