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【正文】 ionchinglishdiomaticBig filmblockbusterEarly lovePuppy loveConvenient noodlesInstant noodlesFist productKnockout productOne sex goodsDisposable goodsGrasp the connotation請(qǐng)幫我們(宣傳)一下這個(gè)新產(chǎn)品。Please help us to propagate this new product. Propagate should be replaced by promote他遇事總是先想著自己，真是太個(gè)人主義了 He is selfconcerned and individualistic。 Individualistic should be replaced by selfishnessGrammarPronouns1Subjective vs. objectiveSubjective: I she you he it who whom theyObjective: me her you his whom whose them its2Singular vs. plural3Point of view is used to describe the perspective in writing.Unit 3 the Better WordFocusConciseness (Brevity is the soul of wit. )Tip: 1 eliminate or expression rewrite that repeat the same point2cut out unnecessary intensifiers3avoid overusing the noun forms of verbs4change phrase into single words5 change unnecessary “that, who and which” clause into phrases.Notice: redundancy is not always easy to spot. the best way is to proofread your writing carefully and try to find words, phrases or even sentence that are not essential.Preciseness：The concreteness of expressionGeneral words convey inexact intangible and often abstract concepts whereas specific words provide precise, sensory or concrete details. For example: it was fine last weekend, so we went to the countryside and had a good time. We saw many things and people there. And we had a wonderful time.Improved: It was a wonderful and relaxed weekend, we drive our private and spacious car to the countryside, there we were a enjoyable and relax time. We saw so many people who wearied plain and simple clothes and there are so much interesting tings like assembly and folk dance. We’re weled by passionate villager and had delicious dinner with them. That was really a memorable and wonderful time.EffectivenessSentence Base Unit 4FocusThe sentence base, which is like the trunk of a tree, consists of at least one subject and one verb.Subject: to choose a good subject is the first crucial step in sentence writing, tell us who or what is responsible for an action, feelings, and state or process.Position of the subject: The subject is usually, through not always ,put at the beginning of a sentence.The subject of a declarative sentence a sentence that makes a statement – usually precedes the verb .but in one situation , it follows the verb,( In the center of the painting stands a lady in white. )Voice: the voice of a verb depends on the relation between the verb and its subject. when the subject acts, the verb is in the active voice。 when the subject is acted upon, the verb is in the passive voice.1Choosing the active voiceThe active voice stresses the activity of the subject and helps to make a sentence direct, concise, and vigorous.2Choosing the passive voiceThough the active voice is more monly used in writing, the passive voice may be more suitable for the following:1when the agent is followed by a long modifier, we use the passive voice to avoid suspension of the verb2the passive also used to keep the focus of two sentencesGrammarTense1The simple present: a表示現(xiàn)在的狀態(tài)，b表經(jīng)常或習(xí)慣性動(dòng)作，c表主語(yǔ)具備的性格和功能 d普遍真理和自然規(guī)律e表示將來(lái)和過(guò)去時(shí)間2Sequence of tenses: simple present, simple past, present progressive, past progressive, present perfective, past perfective, present perfective progressive, past perfective progressiveMood: the indicative mood, the imperative mood, the subjunctive moodThe subjunctive mood: In grammar, the subjunctive mood (abbreviated sjv or sbjv) is a verb mood typically used in subordinate clauses to express various states of unreality such as wish, emotion, possibility, judgment, opinion, necessity, or action that has not yet occurred. It is sometimes referred to as the conjunctive mood, as it often follows a conjunctionUnit 5 Expanded Sentence BaseFocusAttributes: words or phrases used to narrow down or describe nouns are called attributes.What can be used as attribute?A Determiner
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