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the writer manage to tell readerswhat art form he likes best?whether he is good at this art from?when he became interested in this art form?whether he has any stories about this art form?How important this art from is to him?Adapted from the questionnaire in the text bookLet’s check if the writer finishes the writing taskGood anizationCharacteristics of good writingGood writingFine language Enough contents二 .評作品成熟度I like art best Both my teachers and classmates think I am able to sing well because I have a gift for singing. I began to learn my first song ‘Twinkle, twinkle, little star’ when I was six years old. At that time I found that singing was such an interesting thing, up to now, I have learned over two hundred songs. In my spare time, I often sing songs to others. Everyone is happy to be my listeners, because of my passion and confidence. Even though I cannot be a professional singer, I still get a lot of fun from singing. Because of singing, my life bees more colourful.二評作品成熟度結 構 : 讀 ? 2分 頭 是否吸引 讀 者 ? 1分 結 構是否有所感悟 ? 1分內容 : 講 述故事而非告