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nds in very short time and can buy somethings6 we need in the internet. other wise7 ,there8 are so many good software tools, we can download them to use. the most of important9,they are free. 1.錯(cuò)誤逗號(hào)2.主謂搭配不一致3.修飾語搭配不當(dāng)4.詞性錯(cuò)誤5.拼寫錯(cuò)誤6.不定代詞錯(cuò)誤7.關(guān)聯(lián)詞、拼寫錯(cuò)誤8.大小寫錯(cuò)誤9.固定短語使用錯(cuò)誤經(jīng)修整后的書面表達(dá)now, the fastdeveloping internet brings us a lot of benefits. first of all, we can get the latest information, so we can save the money used for newspapers and the time spent in the library. the second, we can our friends in a fraction of second, while the traditional post may take a few days or even months. the third, we can even make purchases through the internet, such as books, cds, used items and so on. what,s more , there is so much good software available on the internet that you can download for free.其次,準(zhǔn)確性還體現(xiàn)在使用人稱和時(shí)態(tài)上。不少考生在寫書面表達(dá)時(shí)因缺乏正確的人稱、時(shí)態(tài)意識(shí),造成重正文內(nèi)容表達(dá),輕人稱和時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用,從而影響了文章的整體表達(dá)效果。其實(shí),書面表達(dá)的人稱使用是有一定規(guī)律的,例如:書面表達(dá)的說明部分出現(xiàn)了:“假如你是……”的字樣,則應(yīng)使用第一人稱,如果出現(xiàn)了“請(qǐng)你介紹一下……”則應(yīng)使用第三人稱等,只要考生