【正文】 135 ? 185題庫 68題 ? 07年 ? 185題庫 57題 ? 185題庫 108題 機(jī)經(jīng) (TOPIC and TASK) ? 只考 AorD題 ? 重復(fù)已經(jīng)考過的題目 ? 可以轉(zhuǎn)化為 185題庫的題目 評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) ? OG P209 OG(3e.) P209 5 An essay at this level largely acplishes all of the following: ? Effectively addresses the topic and task ? Is well anized and well developed, using clearly appropriate explanations, exemplifications, and/or details ? Displays unity, progression, and coherence ? Displays consistent facility in the use of language, demonstrating syntactic variety, appropriate word choice, and idiomaticity, though it may have minor lexical or grammatical errors 36 Scoring Rubrics ? 有效切題或解決了任務(wù) ? 組織結(jié)構(gòu)有序，適用清晰合適的解釋、例證和細(xì)節(jié) ? 表現(xiàn)出整體性、統(tǒng)一性和前后一致 ? 表現(xiàn)出穩(wěn)定的語言應(yīng)用能力，句式多樣，合理選詞和適用成語，盡管可能有小的詞匯和語法錯(cuò)誤。 扣題 這個(gè)指主旨 充實(shí) 這個(gè)指素材 嚴(yán)密 這個(gè)指論證 耐看 這個(gè)指詞句和語法 獨(dú)立寫作評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) ? effectively: in a way that produces the intended result or a successful result ? anized: arranged or planned in a particular order or structure ? developed: to make an idea clearer by explaining it further ? explanation: a statement, fact or situation that tells you why a reason given for something ? unity: the state of looking or being plete in a natural and pleasing way ? progression: the process of developing gradually from one stage to another 獨(dú)立寫作評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) ? coherence:of different ideas,arguments,sentences to have a clear logical connection so that together they make a whole ? consistent:always behaving in the same way ,or having the same opinions standard Effectively addresses the topic and task 有效的回答了題目和任務(wù) ? Topic ? 題目 ? In the modern society, the ability to speak well is more important than the ability to write well. ? Task ? 任務(wù) ? Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? ? Which do you prefer? （機(jī)經(jīng)中很少出現(xiàn)） ? Why do you think?（機(jī)經(jīng)中不再出現(xiàn)） ? 例 1： Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the modern society, the ability to speak well is more important than the ability to write well. ? Address the topic: For most people, speaking ability is more important than writing ability. ? Fail to address the topic： Speaking ability plays a vital role in a person’s success. ? 不能隨意增加或者刪減題目的內(nèi)容 ? 例 1： Some one prefer to ask their friends for advice when they met troubles, others prefer to ask their parents for advice. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. ? Address the topic: I prefer to ask my parents for advice/ I prefer to ask my friends for advice. ? Fail to address the topic： I prefer to ask a counselor for advice. Wellanized 良好的組織 ? 整體 wellanized。要求：整篇文章分為introduction、 body和 conclusion； thesis statement位于 introduction之后； body分body paragraphs； transitional words；conclusion重申 thesis statement。 ? 段內(nèi) wellanized。要求 topic sentence盡量置于段首，段內(nèi)每個(gè) sentence支持 topic sentence。 45 Scoring Rubrics ? wellanized 良好的組織 Does easierprepared food improve the way people live? Another reason I held for this opinion can been easily seen. Now people in growing numbers are unhealthy, especially among children. What make this e so far? Undoubtly short order is the majority of reasons. The significance of health cannot be emphsized too much. Short order makes people get fatter, and it threat our heath strictly. It also brought on a fact that the majority of people are not in good condition. Proper measures must be taken to limit this situation. Welldeveloped ? 三重意義 ? Thesis statement得到 welldeveloped，意味著 body paragraph( sub point)的數(shù)量不能過少 ? 每個(gè) topic sentence得到充分展開。 ? 每個(gè) body paragraph( sub point)的字?jǐn)?shù)不能過少。經(jīng)驗(yàn)表明，主要段落字?jǐn)?shù)不低于 150字。 ? Examples ? welldeveloped 良好的展開 47 Scoring Rubrics Does easierprepared food improve the way people live? Although I agree that there may be a couple of advantages of easierprepared food, I feel that the disadvantages are more obvious and even debased the way people live. details ? He is rich. ? He owns a large pany and has an annual ine of 20 million dollars. details 1 ) You should stop smoking now. ? You should give up smoking now, for the sake of your own health, for the sake of the health of others, for the sake of your family, and for the sake of the entire world. 2) Doctors think that an active person should have a restful hobby, while a person who sits at a desk should have a lively hobby. ? Doctors think that an active person, such as a baseball player or a swimmer, should have a restful hobby such as reading, collections of stamps, dolls, buttons or shells and so on, while a person who sits at a desk all day, such as a teacher or a doctor should have a lively hobby such as tennis, golf, swimming or skating. 3)A child with a problem will probably go to his friends for sympathy. ? A child with a problem, then he feels what he will probably get from his parents is inprehension or criticism, will go instead to his friends for sympathy and advice, leaving the parents totally unaware of the problem he has. 4)We can be informed of a lot by reading books. ? By reading scientific books, we can be informed of many facts。 by reading geography, we know the earth surface, forms, physical features and so on。 by reading history, we are told of the growth of the nations. 5) We39。d better to keep pany with the true friends. ? As friends are both helpful and disastrous, it is better to keep pany with the true friends who are helpful, encouraging and loyal, but to avoid those who are mean, stingy and treacherous. Unity ? Introduction、 Body、 Conclusion必須完整 ? 每個(gè) body paragraph支持 thesis statement ? 每個(gè) body paragraph中的 sentences支持 topic sentence Progression ? Body paragraphs使用 transitional words和repetition ? Body paragraphs中從抽象（ topic sentence）