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【正文】 iculties and problems that the high school education is example, while proponents address the safety that uniform policy would bring, opponents are aware of the fact that campus violence would not be reduced because of grown up already, most students no longer feel that uniforms help them bee a part of the , Uniforms may not save parents as much money as many people would like to do not eliminate the need for clothing needed for outside many times wear their school clothing the rest of the day once they are home from , jackets, boots, casual clothing, and more will still be may first appear to be economical, may not in reality, be accurate.?source=relate第二篇：托福寫作高分(17)托福寫作高分范文（17）Agree or disagree: In modern times, grandparents cannot give their grandchildren useful advice because the world of today and the world of 50 years ago are too different.()題型：絕對題（今昔對比、家庭話題）角度：具象拆分觀點：讓步段開頭：不同意祖父母的意見對于孫子是無用的。（話題引入+雙方/某方觀 點+明確立場及過渡）Grandchild has been the apple of grandparents’ matter how poor or rich a family is, the grandchild always enjoys extra love and care from grandparents, taking their advice to polish behaviors and , with the changes of the society, some people claim that the advice from grandparents to grandchildren is not useful far as I’m concerned, this assertion is arbitrary and unilateral because there are at least two aspects in which grandparents’ advice still remain reasons and examples are given below.（88 字）中間段1：遇到挫折方面。（主題句+說理論證+細(xì)節(jié)例子）Firstly, the advice from grandparents works well when children
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