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【正文】 reasingly fierce.隨著經(jīng)濟(jì)和社會(huì)的發(fā)展，競爭越來越激烈。3. It is wellknown that we exist in a dynamic world with various difficulties. We can do nothing but face them. Attitude is the key point to take the first step.眾所周知，我們生活在一個(gè)存在很多困難的動(dòng)態(tài)的世界里，我們只能面對他們。態(tài)度是邁出第一步的關(guān)鍵點(diǎn)。4.Smartphones have penetrated every aspect of daily life.智能手機(jī)已經(jīng)滲透入日常生活的方方面面。5. With the accelerated pace of contemporary life, people’s work and life are increasingly stressful.隨著當(dāng)代生活的節(jié)奏加快，人們的工作和生活壓力越來越大。6. Resource exhaustion, environment degradation, andaging population constitute the three major national issues confronting human beings.資源耗盡，環(huán)境惡化，和老齡化人口組成了人類面臨的三大問題。7. Life is ten percent what you make it and ninety percent how you take it. The value of life lies not in the length of days, but in the use we make of them. So having right values in life is very important for us, especially youngsters.生活的10%在于你如何創(chuàng)造它，90%在于你如何接受它，生活的價(jià)值不在于天的長度，而在于我們的利用，因此具有正確的價(jià)值觀非常重要，尤其對于年輕人。第三部分：六脈神劍（起承轉(zhuǎn)合獨(dú)評）我把六脈神劍總結(jié)為四個(gè)問題，更便于閱讀。1.“兩點(diǎn)”怎么表述？Firstly, …Secondly, …To begin with, …Furthermore, …On the one hand, …On the other, …In the first place, …Besides, …2.“順接”和“轉(zhuǎn)接”怎么表述順接：as a result/as a consequence /consequently /thus / hence / therefore轉(zhuǎn)接however / nevertheless / nonetheless3.“總結(jié)”怎么表述總結(jié)in conclusion, all in all, in a word簡而言之in short, in brief, to sum up如前所述as has been mentioned abovegiven the factors I have just outlined4.“個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)”怎么表述in my eyesas for mefrom my perspectiveas far as I am concernedTo my knowledgeFrom my level of understanding附贈(zèng)六脈神劍完整版：啟部：用于引導(dǎo)第一點(diǎn)首先：1. first, firstly, first of all。 2. to begin with, to start with。 3. in the first place, first and foremost一方面：1. on the one hand (on the other)。 2. for one thing (for another thing).承部：承接前面觀點(diǎn)其次 second, secondly, third, thirdly進(jìn)一步 furthermore, what’s more, moreover此外 besides, in addition結(jié)果 consequently, as a consequence/result, thus hence therefore, on this account, in light of this轉(zhuǎn)部：轉(zhuǎn)折語義相反技巧1：but改although/in spite of/despite如：Selecting their favorite lecturer does bring great benefits to students’ study, but it also cause a number of problems.Although selecting their favorite lecturer does bring great benefits to students’ study, it also causes a number of problems.In spite of/despite its great benefits for students’ study, selecting their favorite lecturer does cause a number of problems.注：很多老師建議but改成in spite of the fact that. 那么那些老師有興趣去看看GMAT語法，這種寫法叫wordy或者redundancy（冗長，累贅）。但是如果改成in spite of this，那還可以。不過前面需要句話句掉。技巧2：but改yet/while/whereas如：Many people argue that the spring festival gala should not be cancelled, but others adopt a pletely different view.Many people argue that the spring festival gala should not be cancelled, while others adopt a pletely different view.此外還可以用：不幸地：sadly unfortunately相反地：on the contrary, by contrast, conversely事實(shí)上：as a matter of fact, in fact然而：nevertheless, nonetheless合部：小結(jié)上文中段落的內(nèi)容總結(jié)：in conclusion, all in all, in a word簡而言之：in short, in brief, to sum up如前所述：as has been noted / mentioned abovegiven the factors I have just outlinedtaking into account all the above factors (后面主語用I)獨(dú)部：個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)標(biāo)志詞personally speaking可以用in my eyes, as for me, as I see it
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