【正文】 n in poor areas./ They encouraged us and gave us some help, so we became happy and excited./ If everyone gives a helping hand to those in need, the world will be much ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。6．近年來，各大城市霧霾（haze）情況越來越嚴(yán)重，整個(gè)國(guó)家的空氣污染狀況令人擔(dān)憂。請(qǐng)分析空氣污染的現(xiàn)象，原因，應(yīng)對(duì)措施，寫一份英文的倡議書，呼吁大家保護(hù)環(huán)境，減少對(duì)空氣的污染。要點(diǎn)提示：（1）我國(guó)空氣污染的現(xiàn)象。（至少寫2點(diǎn)）（2） 空氣污染產(chǎn)生的原因。（至少寫2點(diǎn)）（3）減少空氣污染的措施。（至少寫2點(diǎn)）要求：（1） 80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。（2） 文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。Dear students , As we all know , hazy days have been influencing our lives a lot in recent years . That warns us of the serious airpollution____________________________________________________________________________　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　【答案】Dear students,As we all know, hazy days have been influencing our lives a lot in recent years. That warns us of the serious air pollution. Big factories, power plants and cars all can cause air pollution. For example, chemicals in the smoke from power stations cause a lot of damage. Besides, the people39。s activities are also the sources of air pollution such as throwing the rubbish and smoking. What39。s more, the more trees are cut down, the less polluted air can absorb. Air pollution is being more and more serious, so we should take some measures such as planting more trees and stop factories from sending out waste air, what39。s more, we had better walk or take a bus. Protecting the environment is our duty. Everyone should play a part in saving the earth.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下整個(gè)國(guó)家的空氣污染狀況。所提供的材料中列舉了近年來，各大城市霧霾（haze）情況越來越嚴(yán)重，主要從空氣污染的現(xiàn)象，原因，應(yīng)對(duì)措施三個(gè)方面去介紹。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時(shí)，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縒e had better walk or take a bus. 我們最好步行或乘公共汽車。這里had better表示最好，后面跟動(dòng)詞原形，take a bus表示乘公共汽車?！靖叻志湫投縋rotecting the environment is our duty. 保護(hù)環(huán)境是我們的職責(zé)。這里Protecting the environment 做主語，用的是動(dòng)詞的ing形式。7．今年初《流浪地球》在中國(guó)火熱上映。影片故事設(shè)定在2075年，講述太陽即將毀火，已經(jīng)不適合人類生存，而面對(duì)絕境，人類將開啟“流浪地球”計(jì)劃，試圖帶著地球一起逃離太陽系，尋找人類新家園的故事。影片多次提到“希望”。比如，老師問:希望是什么?班長(zhǎng)回答:希望是我們這個(gè)年代鉆石一樣的東西。你的筆友Demon觀看后，印象深刻，給你寫了一封郵件。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容結(jié)合你的情況，用英語回復(fù)。To: LiHua@China. From: Demon@ America. Subject:Problems and hopeDear Li Hua, How are you? I hope you are well. I have watched a movie called Wandering Earth. I am deeply moved by those Chinese people who never give up. You Chinese are really brave and full of wisdom. As my Chinese pen pal, what will you do when you meet difficulty? Would you please tell me the following things?What problems do you often meet in your school life?How do you usually solve your problems?Who has influenced you most in your life and what do you think of him/her?What do you think about hope? Please write back and tell me everything.Best wishes,Demon注意：，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順。、校名等相關(guān)信息。Dear DemonI39。m glad that you like the film. Indeed, I have learned a lot from it as Please write to me and tell me your view.Yours,LiHua【答案】Dear Demon，I39。m glad that you like the film. Indeed, I have learned a lot from it as well. In school, I also encounter some problems, the biggest problem is how to strike a balance between study and life. Whenever I want to play and don39。t want to study, I will think of the Chinese people who never give up in the film wandering Earth, who will inspire me to study hard.In life, my English teacher has the greatest influence on me. Whenever I have a great need, my English teacher always es to help me. She is the person who helps me the most in my junior high school life at the beginning of three years. . I like her very much and thank her even more.I think hope is the driving force of all, as long as there is hope, there will be motivation, it is possible to succeed. What do you think?Please write to me and tell me your view.Yours,LiHua【解析】【詳解】這是一篇書信作文。根據(jù)所給出的材料內(nèi)容可知文章時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要用第一、第三人稱。首先要注意書信的書寫格式，要對(duì)來信中的問題作出全面的答復(fù)。同時(shí)在寫作時(shí)，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩?！军c(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；同時(shí)注意語句要通順，詞匯書寫無誤，不要出現(xiàn)語法錯(cuò)誤。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。8．假如你是李華，作為活動(dòng)主持人，你打算邀請(qǐng)外教 Smith 先生來參加本周末學(xué)校開展的“英語戲劇展示”活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)用英語給他寫一封邀請(qǐng)函，告訴他本次活動(dòng)的具體時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)，安排了哪些內(nèi)容，以及需要他做哪些事情。提示詞語:wear, role, perform, judge, suggestions, photos提示問題:When and where are you going to hold the English dram