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【詳解】假如你是李華,你們學校正在進行課堂教學改革,經過一段時間的適應,同學們發(fā)現現在的課堂跟以前比較發(fā)生了一些變化,請你根據所給提示以“The Changes in Class”為題目,用英語寫一篇100詞左右的文章,談談你的感受和想法,開頭和結尾已給出(不計入總詞數)。 結合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現在時,人稱為單數第一人稱,注意主謂一致問題,句子結構主要為系表結構,注意一些常見句式的應用,寫作中注意運用代詞,注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關系。【點睛】本文結構緊湊,語言簡練文中運用了一些好的句型:We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this 。7.書面表達根據下列表格的提示,寫一篇題為Changes in Our Hometown的英語短文.(80詞左右)文章內容必須包含所給的所有信息.開頭已給出,不計入總詞數.內容要點:過去現在1舊房1高樓2河水骯臟2河水清澈(clean and clear).3步行、騎自行車上班3乘公交車、小汽車上班4道路狹窄(narrow).4街道寬闊(wide),干凈整潔5居住條件(livingconditions)差5生活越來越好,環(huán)境(environment)越來越舒適.6你的感想…(寫兩到三句)Changes in Our HometownIn the past ten years,great changes have taken place in our hometown. 【答案】Changes in Our HometownIn the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. In the past, there used to be old houses. The river was very dirty. The roads were narrow and the living conditions were terrible. People were not rich. They went to work on foot or by bike. But now, there are many tall buildings in our hometown. We can see the clean river and the clear water . Even we can see fish in the water. There are many wide and clean roads. Our life is better and better The environment around us is more and more fortable. People usually go to work by bus or by car.I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. But I think it’s still important to remember the past. It tells that we should cherish the present life.【解析】【詳解】亮點說明:這篇習作的層次清晰,內容飽滿,表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語,例如take place,in our hometown,in the past,used to be,go to do,on foot,by bike,better and better,more and more等。而I think it39。s still important to remember the past/It tells that we should cherish the present ,豐富了習作內容,使表達多樣,是本文的最大亮點。【點睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內容經整理后展開思維,考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以,考生不能遺漏要點,要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結構以便得到較高的分數。8.假如你叫李華,最近你班里的美國交換生Lucy想要感受中國的傳統(tǒng)文化。周末你和父母商議后,打算邀請她去老舍茶館。你通過微信告知她:要去哪,在那要做什么以及何時何地見面。提示詞語:Laoshe Teahouse, drink tea, Peking Opera, magic shows, gate提示問題:Where are you going?What will you do there?When and where will you meet?【答案】Hi, Lucy! I know you like Chinese traditional culture. I want to invite you to Laoshe Teahouse this Saturday morning. We are going to drink tea, watch magic shows, enjoy Peking Opera, and eat Chinese traditional food in Laoshe Teahouse. We can experience Chinese traditional culture there. Let’s meet at the gate of Laoshe Teahouse at 8:30, OK? See you.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文,我通過微信告訴Lucy要去哪,在那里要做什么以及何時何地見面。結合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現在時和一般將來時,人稱為第一人稱,注意主謂一致問題,句子結構主要為系表結構和動賓結構,注意一些常見句式的應用,比如:I want to……,We are going to……,We can……,Let’s meet at……等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞,注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關系。點睛:本文結構緊湊,語言簡練。開頭介紹了我想要邀請你去老舍茶館,接下來介紹我們去那里做什么,最后指出我們要在何時何地見面。此處want to do sth, invite sb to, let sb do sth, at the gate of等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。9.2019年2月20日,中央宣傳部授予北京榜樣優(yōu)秀群體“時代楷模”稱號。時代楷模充分體現“愛國、敬業(yè)、誠信、友善”的價值準則。某網站正在開展以“向時代楷模學習”為主題的英語征文活動。假如你是李華,請用英語寫一篇短文投稿,談談