【正文】 ]nothing but wasting conclude, we should focus on improving our ability [10]but not getting a certificate of no practical value.【亮點點評】[1]祈使句使用恰當(dāng)。[2]限定詞使用恰當(dāng)，使文章表達(dá)更嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，增強(qiáng)了說服力。[4]設(shè)問句引出原因，容易引起注意。[6]which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，充當(dāng)介詞賓語。[8]“當(dāng)談到或提及…時”。[10]“只是，僅僅”。佳句臨摩：You may get the answer that he or she is preparing for a certificate of some ：離婚率上升盡管令人難過，但卻是不爭的事實。：From my point of view, we should be more rational when it es to ：我認(rèn)為，對于我們來說，更重要的是盡可能提高自己的能力而不是獲得更多的證書。提綱第1點指出一種現(xiàn)象，提綱第2點要求分析產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因，提綱第3點要求談?wù)劇拔摇睂υ摤F(xiàn)象的看法，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為現(xiàn)象解釋型作文。分析大學(xué)生熱衷名牌的原因。高分范文Students’ Pursuit for Famous BrandsNowadays many college students like to pursue famous clothes to mobile phones, even study articles like electronic dictionaries and pens, they [1]are inclined to buy famous brands.[2]Moreover, many students from poor families begin to [3]follow this consumption trend as phenomenon has aroused wide attention.[4]The following reasons can account for college students’ preference for famous brands.[2]Above all, in many college students’ eyes, a famous brand is a symbol of sophistication and expect others to admire their high class and good taste.[2]What’s more, in modern society, famous brands to some extent are equal to fashion, [5]which has a great attraction to young college students.[2]Besides, parents’ spoiling their children helps form their bad consumption habit.[2]As far as I am concerned, [6]it is irrational for college students to pursue famous brands.[3]After all, most of famous brands are [7]far beyond their consumption ability.[3]Besides, [8]it is not famous brands but a person’s noble character that really makes him high class.[3]Therefore, college students should attach more importance to cultivating a good character [9]rather than pursuing famous brands.【亮點點評】[1]“有…傾向”。[3] follow表示“跟隨，追求(趨勢或時尚)”[4]用于引出原因。[6] it為形式主語，不定式為真正主語。beyond表示“超出…范圍”。not…but連接并列成分。佳句臨?。篒t is irrational for college students to pursue famous ：對大學(xué)生來說，了解校園以外的世界是非常必要的。___________________________________________________________________________：Therefore, college students should attach more importance to cultivating a good character rather than pursuing famous ：很多同學(xué)經(jīng)常玩電腦游戲，這是浪費時間，而不是一種有益的放松方式。根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：簡單介紹自己的情況，表明寫信目的：申請助學(xué)貸款。保證合理利用貸款并表明還款決心，最后表示感謝。[2]“超出…的能力范圍”。[4]過渡銜接詞語，使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密。[6]“我保證…”，that引導(dǎo)同位語從句。佳句臨摩：To make matters worse, my mother has suddenly fallen ill and is expecting a major ：令人更迷惑不解的是，很多飛機(jī)都從大海上離奇消失了。：Meanwhile, I’ll spare no effort to work hard both in the study and my future career in order to pay back the ：全國人民都不遺余力地支持北京舉辦奧運會。Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and 。An apple a day keeps the doctor ，醫(yī)生遠(yuǎn)離你。Practice makes 。Where there is a will, there is a 。1No pains, no 1Rome was not built in a 。1Knowledge is 。s never too old to ，學(xué)到老。1East or west, home is the 。作文常用句型：開頭：There’s no doubt that … 毫無疑問，….As we all know / As everyone knows, … 眾所周知，…It’s generally believed that … 普遍認(rèn)為, …We have reasons to believe that … 我們有理由相信…More and more people have e to realize that… 越來越多的人相信…No one can deny that … 沒人可以否認(rèn)….As an old saying goes, “...” 俗話說得好, … 連接：There’re many ways to do There’re many reasons for What’s more, …另外，…In addition, … 而且，…Besides, … 除此之外，…Last but not leastIn my opinion, …以我看來，…That is to say, … 那就是說…A very important way of doing to do …One basic way to do to do …1More importantly, …更重要的是…1It’s also necessary/important/… to do …也很必要/重要…1On one hand, … On the other hand, … 一方面, … 另一方面…結(jié)尾：In a word, … / In short, …/ To sum up, … / Generally speaking, 總之, …好句：There is no denying that life is a mixture of laughter and far as I am concerned，In brief, the more confident you are, the better result you’ll is obvious to see that …We still have a long way to full use of / take advantage of suffer from heavier work pressurehave a high sense of 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problems).長時期的罷工損失巨大，再加上一直以來的財政問題，使得該公祠一蹶不振?！泻?do harm to / be harmful to / be detrimental to / 情感 / 信息 exchange ideas / emotions / information …的最新發(fā)展 keep pace with / catch up with/ keep abreast with the latest development of …… take effective measures to do sth?！^點因人而異 Views on …vary from person to person。 replace / substitute / take the place of cannot bear closer analysis / cannot hold water offer job opportunities mirror of social progress Undoubtedly, / There is no doubt that… enhance / promote mutual understanding make full use of / take advantage of suffer from heavier work pressure guarantee the stability and prosperity of our society put more emphasis on… adapt oneself to the development of society realize one’s dream / make one’s dream e true The main reasons are listed as follows: First，F(xiàn)irstly，In the first place, To begin with Second, Secondly, In the second place Besides，In addition, Additionally, Moreover, Furthermore Finally, Last but not the least, Above all, Lastly, All in all, To sum up, In summary, In a word, W