【正文】
your requirement. I am a recent graduate of Peking University with a bachelor degree in Computer Science. In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as an intern at a pany where I have attained a fair knowledge and experience. I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thank you for your consideration.Yours sincerely,Li Ming考研英語作文批改點評如下:Dear Mr. Yu,I just read an advertisement in(改為on) jobhunting website about recruiting some positions of(改為for) your pany. I would like to apply for a position as a software engineer.I understand it is essential to master a solid foundation for(改為of) puter science. My professional skills, as described in the enclosed resume, are well suited to your requirement. I am a recent graduate of the(刪除) Peking University with a bachelor degree in Computer Science. In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as an intern at a pany where I have attained a fair knowledge and experience.I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thank you for your consideration.Yours sincerely,Li Ming8分同學(xué)你好,要注意控制字數(shù),,超過50詞只給1分辛苦分。你的作文沒有大問題,但是你對介詞的使用不太清楚,這說明你的語感還不太好,因此,建議你多讀一些英文書籍。②招聘通知 所謂學(xué)而不思則罔,在學(xué)習(xí)過程中要學(xué)會舉一反三,從各類型書信中找到共性與規(guī)律,提高學(xué)習(xí)效率,事半功倍