【正文】 first.., it was the first time in his life that he felt that a friendship was that precious, because the stories depicted in his novel, reflect him of the old times he spent in his high he bought four books of Jingming39。首先指出第一個作品本身亦有其可取之處。這樣就使演講personalized，so that audience can relate more easily to personal topics—they probably have similar experiences．And the second reason is that we are not living in a world where everything is depicted as are living in a world of good and evil, evil and , to that extent, if I am confined in a world where everything is depicted as good, I will feel quite perplexed when I am facing the real the real world really resemble what I read in the novel? We need something positive, also we need something the third reason is that our generation, I believe, have the sense of can make our own our parents, for our families and for the government, they should resume, assume the responsibility to remind us that what is good, what is bad, what is cynical Make our voice be is my answer and I am not afraid of tile side effects of those you very ：世界亦非完美無暇，文學就應該反應真實的世界。至此就分別從文學作品、社會、個人三個方面透徹地闡釋了演講人的觀點。這一段中也出現(xiàn)了較為明顯的問題。m not really familiar with the struggle for stardom thing in in the city where I e from, there is this also as cutthroat as the one in Beijing here petition going on, and perhaps I can share with you the experience we have me tell you the city where I e from, there is this famous singing petition going on every what they do is that pick the best one, and the best one goes to the next week and it goes on and on until one day that person is 。演講者是香港人，雖然她對主持人所問的內(nèi)地的情況不甚了解，是一大劣勢，但她卻巧妙的地使用but轉而談到香港的情況；also的使用使演講的主題不變。這種角度的變換使演講者的劣勢變成了優(yōu)勢。And there39。m sure all of you blow him, tile famous singer and actorwhen he read the newspaper, he said, “Wow, that39。s not easy.”這里演講人以演唱比賽為切人點，以小男孩的參舞，點出了香港人對當明星十分熱衷。并且演講人Support points with specifics．以典型的例子支持論點。本段對general public和Andy Lau不同態(tài)度的對 比，可以引起聽眾的思考。t it a bit too negative? I think better word for it is “strive.” Being a star is also is also a job that you need to work hard does not e , if we take a look at famous actors and actresses such as lackie Chart, Chow Yun Fat, Andy Lau, Tony Lun, they are all in their midforties, and even , what do they have in mon? When they first became..., when they first started their careers as a star, or as an actor, they were described as “Cinema Poison,” meaning nobody would see their did they give up? No, they didn39。t give have been working hard all the now they are over the over are they proud of themselves? Well, I suppose still they work very at Andy 39。并且在臨場仍然明確地區(qū)分struggle和strive，顯示出演講人深厚的語言功底。這種演講技巧十分重要，因為在短暫的幾十秒鐘內(nèi)談論一個十分陌生的話題，實在有難度，但是這位演講者的巧妙過渡，既沒有跑題，又談了熟悉的話題，因此這種技巧值得學習。這兩句話Al lover the world．All over Asia．若能調(diào)換順序，就更加順暢。s nothing wrong if you want to be a 39。s a job that everybody can work for it if you really want there are qualities that you need to possess if you want to be a Course you have to be hardworking, like Andy Lau, like Chow Yun 39。s a chart telling the people how many...well, how much those stars in China are making, l/Veil, if you are only attracted by those statistics, by the figures, the money, well, then, I do not think you can be a are people who have a genuine interest in being a singer, like there are people who have been taking acting classes, who have been acting in secondary schools, in college like have a genuine , then go for ：感興趣[genuine Interest]，并且列舉了生活中的一些實例[people only interested in money rather than film industry)來論證自己的觀點。有立有廢，論證嚴謹Ladies and gentlemen, well, I think the petition is also there39。s no petition, well, we have to have whatever is given to there39。t that something good?Ladies and gentlemen, it is what I think for that struggle for you very —sentence review of the points she presented in her talk．由“為當明星而打拼”引申到一般意義上的競爭，既緊扣主題，又加以升華。t it something good?結尾，進一步強化了演講人的觀點。通過Ladies and gentlemen提示聽眾演講接近尾聲，重提主持人的問題，以告知聽眾她一直圍繞這個主題展開演講，給聽眾一個完整的結尾。外教社杯”全國英語演講比賽季軍的香港選手張阿旭的即興演講。通篇邏輯十分的清晰，而且演講人娓娓道來，絲毫沒有演講的做作，卻又極富感染力。據(jù)演講者本人介紹，這與她所在的學校要求學生做很多即興的presentationn即興演講（impromptu speech），顧名思義，就是指臨場的、毫無準備的演講。如果參賽選手想要取得優(yōu)秀的成績，那么就一定要在該部分取得高分。思維能力是指選手在毫無準備的情況下對某一問題的分析能力，對問題理解的深度和寬度等；邏輯能力主要指選手是否有全局觀，是否能合理搭筑整個演講的框架，所闡述觀點的層次性是否清晰；而語言能力則是指選手即席用英語進行交流溝通的能力，可檢驗選手的英語語言熟練度和準確度如何。這些原則對所有類型的演講都適用，即興演講也不例外。內(nèi)容在討論即興演講的內(nèi)容之前，先了解幾個在近幾年大賽即興演講中出現(xiàn)的題目。通過這幾個題目，大致可以看出即興演講的題目涉及方方面面，從經(jīng)濟、政治、教育、文化、人生到國際問題，包羅萬象。題目的范圍之大之廣對參賽選手提出了很高的要求。這些都是賽前的準備工作，應多積累、豐富自己的知識內(nèi)容，強化自己的觀點。在即興演講中，更要注意這兩點。對于即興演講來說，現(xiàn)場能夠找到恰當?shù)慕y(tǒng)計數(shù)字是非常困難的。那么應該選擇哪種類型的例子來做論據(jù)呢？在比賽現(xiàn)場上進行即興演講時，最切實可行的、最容易做到的就是用自己或自己周圍發(fā)生的例子來說明你的觀點，信手拈來，不用絞盡腦汁，演講起來最自如，最自信；這樣做無形之中也強化了自己的可信度，比較容易打動聽眾。在選擇使用論據(jù)時，尤其是在競賽當中，需要特別注意以下兩個原則。所選擇的支持材料要為你的中心觀點或主題服務，不能偏離這一點，不能跑題。這個故事占了整個演講的三分之二，然后很牽強地把這個故事和她抽到的題目聯(lián)系在一起。的確，在賽前要做充分的準備，準備各個領域的數(shù)據(jù)、例子、權威專家的話等，做好充分的調(diào)研，以便在比賽中游刃有余。不切題的即興演講絕不會得高分。演講的支持材料最好是聽眾熟悉的，貼近聽眾，不僅有利于聽眾理解、接受和吸收你的信息，而且容易產(chǎn)生共鳴。有很多學生舉例子或引用別人的話時，往往愿意用國外的例子或國外名人說的話來支持他們的論點?！比欢谝淮伪荣愔校晃粊碜悦绹难葜v專家在做點評時說到，“不用擔心我們會不了解，或聽不懂?！彼徽Z道破了問題的關鍵，演講者所說的要和你的聽眾拉近距離，講一些本地發(fā)生的事情，發(fā)生的事情對聽眾產(chǎn)生了什么樣的影響，用當?shù)氐奈幕?、理念來解釋你的觀點，這樣更容易在聽眾中產(chǎn)生共鳴。要全方位地選擇論據(jù)，選擇恰當?shù)牟牧蠟槟愕挠^點服務。在一分鐘的即興演講中，你用具體的事例來仔細闡述觀點的時間可能非常受限。2．好的主題與觀點在前面談過選擇題目或角度時應遵循的一些具體原則，如：題目和角度一定是你有切身感觸的；應該具有創(chuàng)造性，是聽眾感興趣的；應該具體；應真實而有意義；所選擇的觀點或角度一定能經(jīng)得起推敲和琢磨，是全面的。（1）切題切題最重要。你需要表明在這個問題上的立場和觀點，決不可以含糊其詞，態(tài)度閃爍不定，站在中間，既談好處又談弊端。這點在CCTV杯演講比賽中尤其重要，因為即興演講是為以后的辯論做準備。但問題是，在這種情況下，他必須要做出選擇，而不能徘徊于兩者之間。（2）觀點的嚴謹性觀點不能偏激，一定要嚴謹。* 觀點本身能夠站得住腳，有充足的材料可以說明論證。* 觀點需要限制和修飾。以上面那個題目來為例，如果既有大量資金扶持運動員又能讓普通群眾受益，那是最好的，但這是一種理想的畫面。請注意：剛才我使用了現(xiàn)階段三個字。* 承認你的觀點有修正和完善的余地。others think that while grades are necessary,they do not mean everyhing and should not be is your opinion about grades? people say keeping a diary in English is one of the effective ways to improve English can help cultivate the habit of thinking in is your opinion? do you think some handicapped people have negative attitudes towards life and how we should help them change all this? the role of the aged,some think that all the aged is offered is a sick role—role of the inf