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文章之內(nèi),結(jié)果造成我們稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉勸各位一定要寫一個(gè)主題句,放在文章的開頭(保險(xiǎn)型)或者結(jié)尾,讓讀者一目了然,必會(huì)平安無事!特別提示:隱藏主體句可是要冒險(xiǎn)的!To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam(主題句).Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions 、一 二 三原則領(lǐng)導(dǎo)講話總是第一部分、第一點(diǎn)、第二點(diǎn)、第三點(diǎn)、第二部分、第一點(diǎn)… 如此羅嗦??脊賯兛次恼乱脖厝灰ㄟ^這些關(guān)鍵性的“標(biāo)簽”來判定你的文章是否結(jié)構(gòu)清楚,條理自然。1)first, second, third, last(不推薦,原因:俗)2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推薦,原因:俗)3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推薦,原因:俗)4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly(不推薦,原因:俗)5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(強(qiáng)烈推薦)6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(強(qiáng)烈推薦)7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(強(qiáng)烈推薦)8)most important of all, moreover, finally9)on the one hand, on the other hand(適用于兩點(diǎn)的情況)10)for one thing, for another thing(適用于兩點(diǎn)的情況)建議:不僅僅在寫作中注意,平時(shí)說話的時(shí)候也應(yīng)該條理清楚!四、短語優(yōu)先原則寫作時(shí),尤其是在考試時(shí),如果使用短語,有兩個(gè)好處:其一、用短語會(huì)使文章增加亮點(diǎn),如果老師們看到你的文章太簡(jiǎn)單,看不到一個(gè)自己不認(rèn)識(shí)的短語,必然會(huì)看你低一等。其二、關(guān)鍵時(shí)刻思維短路,只有湊字?jǐn)?shù),怎么辦?用短語是一個(gè)辦法!比如:I cannot bear :I cannot put up with want :I am looking forward to ,表達(dá)也更準(zhǔn)確。這就要求一定要多用實(shí)詞,少用虛詞。比如我們說一個(gè)很好的時(shí)候,不應(yīng)該之說nice這樣空洞的詞,應(yīng)該使用一些諸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warmhearted, hospital 之類的形象詞。比如說:I enjor music and he is fond of playing ,我們可以用一個(gè)超級(jí)句式:Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also :besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover2)轉(zhuǎn)折(拐彎抹角)批評(píng)某人缺點(diǎn)的時(shí)候,我們總習(xí)慣先拐彎抹角說說他的優(yōu)點(diǎn),然后轉(zhuǎn)入正題,再說缺點(diǎn),這種方式雖然陰險(xiǎn)了點(diǎn),可畢竟還比較容易讓人接受。The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent coat was thin, but it was :despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding3)因果(so, so, so)昨天在街上我看到了一個(gè)女孩,然后我主動(dòng)搭訕,然后我們?nèi)タХ葟d,然后我們認(rèn)識(shí)了,然后我們成為了朋友…可見,講故事的時(shí)候我們總要追求先后順序,先什么,后什么,所以然后這個(gè)詞就變得很常見了。文章中如果出現(xiàn)這樣的句子,就更會(huì)讓考官看到你的句子與眾不同。舉例:This is what I can he can go with us or not is not 、賓語、表語可以改成如下的復(fù)雜成分:When to go, Why he goes away…5)附加(多此一舉)如果有了老婆,總會(huì)遇到這樣的情況,當(dāng)你再講某個(gè)人的時(shí)候,她會(huì)插一句說,我昨天見過他。The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of don’t enjoy that book you are liu, our oral English teacher, is ,同位語要解釋的東西刪除后不影響整個(gè)句子的構(gòu)成。6)排比(排山倒海句)文學(xué)作品中最吸引人的地方莫過于此,如果非要讓你的文章更加精彩的話,那么我希望你引用一個(gè)個(gè)的排比句,一個(gè)個(gè)得對(duì)偶句,一個(gè)個(gè)的不定式,一個(gè)個(gè)地詞,一個(gè)個(gè)的短語,如此表達(dá)將會(huì)使文章有排山倒海之勢(shì)!Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for , energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life.(氣勢(shì)恢宏)要想寫出如此氣勢(shì)恢宏的句子非用排比不可!七、挑戰(zhàn)極限原則既然十挑戰(zhàn)極限,必然是比較難的,但是并非不可攀!原理:在學(xué)生的文章中,很少發(fā)現(xiàn)諸如獨(dú)立主格的句子,其實(shí)也很簡(jiǎn)單,只要花上5分鐘的時(shí)間看看就可以領(lǐng)會(huì),它就是分詞的一種特殊形式,分詞要求主語一致,而獨(dú)立主格則不然。原則上在議論文當(dāng)中十不應(yīng)該出現(xiàn)虛假數(shù)字的,可是在考試的時(shí)候哪管那三七二十一,但編無妨,只要我有東西寫就萬事大吉了。Travel by Bike根據(jù)最近的一項(xiàng)統(tǒng)計(jì)調(diào)查顯示,85%的人在近距離旅行的時(shí)候首選的交通工具是自行車。Fiveday Work Week Better than Sixday Work?根據(jù)最近的一項(xiàng)統(tǒng)計(jì)調(diào)查顯示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。也就是說,開頭很好,也必然要有一個(gè)精彩的結(jié)尾,讓讀者眼前一亮,這樣,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子: Obviously(此為過渡短語), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for “顯而見之”,但說無妨,就當(dāng)讀者的眼光太淺罷了!更多過渡短語:to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus更多句型:Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…2. 結(jié)尾萬能公式二:如此建議如果說“如此結(jié)論”是結(jié)尾最沒用的廢話,那么“如此建議”應(yīng)該是最有價(jià)值的廢話了,因?yàn)檫@里雖然也是廢話,但是卻用了一個(gè)很經(jīng)典的虛擬語氣的句型。而且如果我們把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主題:As a creature, I eat。二、主 題 句原則國(guó)有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主??僧吘惯€是條理清楚。破解方法很簡(jiǎn)單,只要把下面任何一組的詞匯加入到你的幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)前就清楚了。相反,如果發(fā)現(xiàn)亮點(diǎn)—精彩的短語,那么你的文章定會(huì)得高分了。五、多實(shí)少虛原則原因很簡(jiǎn)單,寫文章還是應(yīng)該寫一些實(shí)際的東西,不要空話連篇。我這里所說的虛詞就是指那些比較大的詞。再比如:走出房間,general的詞是:walk out of the room但是小偷走出房間應(yīng)該說:slip out of the room小姐走出房間應(yīng)該說:sail out of the room小孩走出房間應(yīng)該說:dance out of the room老人走出房間應(yīng)該說:stagger out of the room所以多用實(shí)詞,少用虛詞,文章將會(huì)大放異彩!六、多變句式原則1)加法(串聯(lián))都希望寫下很長(zhǎng)的句子,像個(gè)老外似的,可就是怕寫錯(cuò),怎么辦,最保險(xiǎn)的寫長(zhǎng)句的方法就是這些,可以在任何句子之間加and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后關(guān)系或者并列關(guān)系。所以呢,我們說話的時(shí)候,只要在要點(diǎn)之前先來點(diǎn)廢話,注意二者之間用個(gè)專這次就夠了。其實(shí)這個(gè)詞表示的是先后或因果關(guān)系!The snow began to fall, so we went :then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that4)失衡句(頭重腳輕,或者頭輕腳重)有些人腦袋大,身體小,或者有些人腦袋小,身體大,雖然我們不希望長(zhǎng)成這個(gè)樣子,可如果真的是這樣了,也就必然會(huì)吸引別人的注意力。其實(shí)就是主語從句,表語從句,賓語從句的變形。The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of don’t enjoy that book you are liu, our oral English teacher, is ,同位語要解釋的東西刪除后不影響整個(gè)句子的構(gòu)成;定語從句—借用之前的關(guān)鍵詞并且用其重新組成一個(gè)句子插入其中,但是whom or that 關(guān)鍵詞必須要緊跟在先行詞之前。The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of ,characters, folks替換(people ,persons)2: positive, favorable, rosy(美好的),promising(有希望的),perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替換good3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill(有害的)替換bad如果bad做表語,可以有be less impressive替換 army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they records are less .(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most):用many, if not most 一定要小心,many后一定要有詞。所以當(dāng)修飾名詞時(shí)用increasing/, has gained growing with the advancement of if anything, 或little or nothing替換hardly13..beneficial, rewarding替換helpful,client,consumer,purchaser, 替換customer,extremely, intensely 替換very necessary, hardly inevitable...替換 unnecessary, avoidable appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替換sb take interest in / interested in one39。s ,demension,sphere代aspect indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear rise to, lead to, result in, trigger are several reasons behind sth 替換..reasons for sth attention into 替換pay attention to in mind that 替換remember, possess 替換have(注意process是過程的意思) on sth替換 be against , disagree with sth name only a few, as an example替換 for example, for instance to / virtually impossible,替換nearly / almost impossible