【正文】 n of ___. However, from a personal point of view I find ___. 21. It is essential that effective actions should be taken to end the situation. 22. It is no doubt that special attention must be paid to the problem of ___. 23. But both ___ and ___ have disadvantages. For example, ___. Which to choose, ___ or ___? Careful consideration is necessary before you make your own choice. 24. From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that ___. 25. We must search for a quick action, because the present situation of ___ is grievous, if allowed to proceed, will certainly lead to ___. 26. No doubt, if we ignore the problem, there is every chance that ___ will be put in danger. 27. We need to take a second look at the matter from a wider standpoint, otherwise, we won’t ___. 28. It is high time that ___. Here are some of the measures that might be taken immediately. 29. In conclusion, we should know about the problem of ___, and object to ___. Only in this way ___. 30. Although it is affected by many factors, still there are certain ways that can make the situation better. The most import is ___. Another way is ___. Still another one is ___. 31. Many solutions are offered here, all of them make some sense, but none is adequate enough. The problem should be studied in depth. 32. No easy method can be at hand to solve the problem of ___. But the mon recognition of the importance of ___ might be the first step on the right way. 33. It is clear, therefore, that the task of ___ demands great attention. 34. We may have a long way to go before we reach the final goal. But once we are on the way, the chance to reach it is greater. 35. But for me, I would rather think of the matter in an optimistic way. Because I believe ___. 36. We all know the story of ___. this lesson tells us that ___, we should ___. 37. My own point of view is that ___ is a normal behavior in our society. There is no doubt that ___. As an old saying goes, ___. 38. If we can’t take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable result may e out unexpectedly, so what we should do is ___. 39. However, this graph may not predict the entire situation in the future. I believe ___. 40. From the graph it is evident that ___. 41. From all the reasons above, we know that great changes had taken place in ___. And I believe that ___. 42. Taking into account all of these factors, we may reach the conclusion that ___. 43. For the reasons given above, I strongly remend that ___. 44. Given the factors I have just outlined, I believe that ___. 45. Therefore, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that ___. 46. Recognizing the fact that ___ should lead us to conclude that ___. 47. In short, I support the statement that it is better to ___ because ___. 48. After pondering this question on many occasions, I have finally reached the conclusion that ___ is something I truly want to do and it is worthwhile. 49. My point of view in ___ largely results from the fact that ___. 50. Now after close examination, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that ___. 51. From what has been discussed above, you can get your preference. Personally, I think ___ has more advantages. 52. On the one hand, it has helped china ___. On the other hand, it has increased china’s ___, and at the same time, made great contributions to our national development. 53. In my opinion, to solve this problem there might be two ways. One way to tackle this question is ___. Another way that is worth adopting is ___. 54. As far as I am concerned, I trust the advantages mentioned above exceed the disadvantages. 55. For me, ___ is a glory and it is the most important thing I have to take into feasible consideration. 56. As regards me, I tend to pick ___, for ___. What’s more, ___. 57. If I were given a choice between ___ and ___, I would certainly prefer ___. For me, ___.1) 避免使用漢語(yǔ)式英語(yǔ)，盡量使用自己熟悉的句型。 (2) 多用簡(jiǎn)單句型，記事、寫(xiě)人一般都不需要復(fù)雜的句型。不用或少用非謂語(yǔ)或情態(tài)動(dòng)詞等較復(fù)雜的句型。 1) 語(yǔ)態(tài)、時(shí)態(tài)要準(zhǔn)確無(wú)誤。 3) 注意人稱(chēng)代詞的賓格形式。 5) 注意拼寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)和大小寫(xiě)，例如：receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。 . B. 省略號(hào) …… … C. 頓號(hào) 、 無(wú) (4) 描寫(xiě)人物時(shí)，要生動(dòng)具體，例如： 1) 外表特征：tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinarylooking 等。 3) 內(nèi)心境界：glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。 5) 動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)：e, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。上下文的連貫性也是評(píng)分的一條原則，因此同學(xué)們應(yīng)把寫(xiě)好的句子，根據(jù)故事情節(jié)，事情發(fā)生的先后次序（時(shí)間或空間），使用一些表示并列、遞進(jìn)等過(guò)渡詞進(jìn)行加工整理，使文章連貫、自然、流暢。造句越簡(jiǎn)單準(zhǔn)確越好，造復(fù)合句容易出錯(cuò)，容易被扣分，閱卷場(chǎng)上有句話(huà)：“錯(cuò)誤面前人人平等，文采好不加分”。總之，所造句子要正確、得體、符合英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣。擴(kuò)展思路，然后從英語(yǔ)中找出一個(gè)與其詞義相近的代替。 (2) 小詞大用 漢語(yǔ)中有些語(yǔ)意看來(lái)很復(fù)雜很文雅，但在英語(yǔ)中可用一些常用詞表達(dá)。 (3) 借花獻(xiàn)佛 有時(shí)書(shū)面表達(dá)中需要的單詞或詞組或許在試卷中的其他地方出現(xiàn)。 5. 錦上添花，量力而行 如果你還有時(shí)間和精力，想把書(shū)面表達(dá)寫(xiě)得更好，那么，請(qǐng)注意以下幾點(diǎn)： (1) 句型多樣化，不要I（We）……到底，使人覺(jué)得乏味。 (3) 進(jìn)一步描繪人或事物時(shí)，適當(dāng)使用定語(yǔ)從句。 (5) 偶爾使用一下倒裝句，增加新鮮感。 (7) 上下句子緊接時(shí)，其中完全相同的成分可以省略，以節(jié)省篇幅。 7. 寫(xiě)完之后，勿忘檢查 中考作文時(shí)，由于時(shí)間緊、內(nèi)容多，同學(xué)們出錯(cuò)在所難免。中考作文評(píng)卷是根據(jù)要點(diǎn)、語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確性、上下文的連貫性來(lái)給分，根據(jù)錯(cuò)誤多少來(lái)扣分。檢查錯(cuò)誤應(yīng)從以下幾個(gè)方面入手： (1) 格式是否有錯(cuò)。 (3) 語(yǔ)言是否用錯(cuò)。 (5) 標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。：further more，moreover，besides，what’s more, in addition，then，etc：however，but，nevertheless，on the other hand, on the contrary, instead, etc：to tell you the truth, in fact, etc.：really，indeed，certainly，surely，above a11，etc：in the same way，just as，on the other hand，etc：in other words, that is to say, to put it another way, etc.：as long as, on the condition that, etc.： in brief，in conclusion，as a result, in short, thus, therefore, in a word, on the whole, all in all, in general, etc.