【正文】 e had a high wind that blew down some trees. Monday was so cold that we had to turn on the heat and wear out winter coats. On Tuesday we formed a group to go roller skating. By Wednesday the weather cleared and the sun came out. Thursday was as hot and humid as an August day. Friday morning it began to rain, and it looks as if we’ll have a cold, steady wind for a few days. ? 這一段寫“最近天氣多變”，首句為主題句。但星期二沒有提天氣，而是說當天的活動安排，偏離了主題，打斷了段落敘述的連貫性，破壞了段落邏輯意義的統(tǒng)一性，應(yīng)刪去或改為與天氣有關(guān)的話。 ?不寫與考試無關(guān)的話 。 20221113 寫作技巧與注意事項 Melody, Hong 過渡詞 ? 啟 first(ly), at first, first of all, in the beginning, in the first place, at present, to begin with, currently, in my opinion, to start with, lately, for one thing, now, recently, on the one hand, in general, generally speaking, in recent years, nowadays, undoubtedly 20221113 寫作技巧與注意事項 Melody, Hong ? 承 second(ly), third(ly), also/too, besides, in addition, furthermore, moreover, what is more, for another, for example, for instance, as an example, as another example, namely, then, in other words, in particular, in the same way, after that, afterwards, from now on, later, just as, similarly, meanwhile, at the same time, consequently, equally important, what is more, what is worse, certainly, surely, obviously, especially, in particular 20221113 寫作技巧與注意事項 Melody, Hong ? 轉(zhuǎn) but, yet, however, nevertheless, noheless, conversely, though, although, despite, in spite of, on the contrary, in contrast, unlike, whereas, on the other hand, unfortunately, still, in fact, as a matter of fact, in any case, at any rate, otherwise, or else, instead 20221113 寫作技巧與注意事項 Melody, Hong ? 合 finally, hence, in brief, in conclusion, in short, in summary, therefore, thus, to sum up, to conclude, to summarize, briefly, above all, as a consequence, as a result, for this reason, as has been noted , at last, at length, by and large, consequently, eventually, accordingly, after all, in general, in a word, on the whole 20221113 寫作技巧與注意事項 Melody, Hong 四級作文不同題型的三段式結(jié)構(gòu) 題型 第一段 第二段 第三段 現(xiàn)象解釋型 描述現(xiàn)象 說明現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因 表明個人的觀點態(tài)度或闡述個人做法 對比選擇型 表明一方或雙方的觀點 表明另一方的觀點及理由，或指出雙方觀點的不足之處及理由 表明個人的觀點或闡述個人做法 問題解決型 提出問題 分析問題，給出解決方案 表明個人的觀點態(tài)度或闡述個人做法 觀點論證型 提出論點 例證論點 得出結(jié)論或表明個人看法與做法 應(yīng)用文 （ 03年以來，應(yīng)用文比例越來越大） 描述事實 闡述原因 表明觀點或提出建議 20221113 寫作技巧與注意事項 Melody, Hong ***應(yīng)用文 *** 自 1995年 6月以來，應(yīng)用文共考過 6次，最新考過的 2022年 6月真題為感言， 2022年 1月真題為競選演說詞， 2022年 6月真題為日程安排解說詞，2022年 1月、 2022年1月于 2022年 6月為書信應(yīng)用文。 20221113 寫作技巧與注意事項 Melody, Hong 批評、抱怨信模版 September 20th 2022 Dear_____, My name is _____. I am _______. I venture to write you a letter about ______. The focus of the plaint is_____. For one thing, ______. For the another,_____. Honestly speaking, _____. But ____. Besides,______. All in all, there is still much room for improvement_______. I do hope ___. Thank you for your time and kind consideration______. 20221113 寫作技巧與注意事項 Melody, Hong A Letter to the University President about the canteen Service on Campus September 20th 2022 Dear Mr. President, My name is Li Ming. I am a junior from the Civil Engineering School. I venture to write you a letter about the canteen service on campus. 20221113 寫作技巧與注意事項 Melody, Hong The focus of the plaint is the poor quality and high price of the food. For one thing, the rice is so hard, the steam bread too cold, and the vegetable overcooked. For another, the price of the food is so high that many of us go out to dine. Honestly speaking, the canteen service is a little better than before. But the cooking staff needs to do the cooking more carefully. Besides, the cost needs to be reduced to lower the price. 20221113 寫作技巧與注意事項 Melody, Hong All in all, there are still much room for improvement. I do hope the service will be much improved very soon. Thank you for your time and kind consideration. Sincerely yours, Li Ming (143 words) Good Luck