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My favorite actress is Audrey Hepburn. I like I like her starring Roman holiday best. This movie is great because it is so romantic. You can enjoy it with your friends on weekends. Audrey is charming, I think. The movie reminds me of the feeling of love. Outline : :(Tense) The present tense 議論文 : Main body Ending Introduction Watching movies is a good way for me to relax. I’m crazy about it. (10 minutes) 開(kāi)聲朗讀自己的文章,并 從結(jié)構(gòu)、人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、字?jǐn)?shù)、拼寫(xiě)、大小寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)等方面進(jìn)行自我修正。 Exerc isesTask 2 ① 欣賞與修正 請(qǐng) 交換習(xí)作 欣賞,用 紅筆劃出 對(duì)方的 亮點(diǎn) 詞、句 , 并運(yùn)用 改錯(cuò)符號(hào) 找出不足,進(jìn)行適當(dāng) 修改 。 ③ 點(diǎn)評(píng) 由亮點(diǎn)欣賞到不足的修正(篇章結(jié)構(gòu) 分析 細(xì) 節(jié)點(diǎn)評(píng) ) 集體賞析,共同進(jìn)步 Exerc isesTask 3 Rewrite your article and hand in tomorrow.