【正文】 harm the anization. In the final analysis, employees should strike a careful balance when they mix their personal lives with their jobs. Although there are some circumstances in which bringing one’s personal life to the job may be counterproductive, for many reasons it is a good idea to inject small doses of personal life into the workplace. 11. “When someone achieves greatness in any field — such as the arts, science, politics, or business — that person?s achievements are more important than any of his or her personal faults.” “當(dāng)某些人在任何領(lǐng)域獲得成功時，無 論該領(lǐng)域是藝術(shù)科學(xué)政治還是商業(yè)，此人的成就比他或她的任何個人錯誤重要的多。s achievement only because he or she has made some faults. Likewise, we can not neglect one39。 1， The proponents of this view may argue that 人們不能因為過錯而忽視成就。比如 Mao, who released Chinese from the aggression of other nations, and also, who started the “Great culture revolution” in China which brought huge disaster to hundreds and thousands of innocent people. Poet named “Haizi” who is highly achieved in arts and literature, murdered his wife and then mitted suicide. It is unfair to take it for granted that any achievement in any field is more important than life. 3， 所以，在很多情況下，成就與過錯的重要性隨情況變化而變化，沒有一個 perpetual right answer to this question. 我認(rèn)為就這個問題本身的討論并沒有意義，評價一個人的時候，應(yīng)該 collectively and objectively evaluate a person by considering both the faults and the achievements rather than by claiming one of the two is more important than the other. Optional words: Greatness/extraordinary/ outstanding/ supreme Success/ achievement/ acplishment/ attainment Thesis sentence: in most cases, a great achievement that one gains in certain field is more notable than the faults he has ever made. However, that does necessarily mean that the former is more important than the later. Moreover, it is severely biased to praise people?s achievements without even a glance on their faults. View1: Is almost undoubted that we can not eliminate people?s achievements just because they have made some faults. Likewise, we can not neglect people?s faults when they achieve greatness in certain fields. Evidence: View2: An appropriate judgment towards a person should be based on thorough analysis covering both his achievements and faults. It is arbitrary to say whether great achievements are more important than faults unless the allround situation of a certain person is presented. Evidence: Perhaps in some instances the personal failings of great achievers are unimportant relative to the achievements. In many cases, however, the relative significance of personal failings can be very great, depending on two factors: (1) the extent to which the failing is part of the achievement process itself, and (2) the societal impact of the achiever’s failing apart from his or her own success. Personal failings and achievement are often symbiotically related. The former test the wouldbe achiever’s mettle。 even where they are not, personal shortings of great achievers often make an important societal impact of their own. 12. “Education has bee the main provider of individual opportunity in our society. Just as property and money once were the keys to success, education has now bee the element that most ensures success in life.” “教育已經(jīng)成為我們的社會里個人機(jī)會的主要提供者?！? 1， 教育是提高一個素質(zhì)的最好途徑。教育是最主要的為一個個體提供掌握一種技能熟悉一門學(xué)科知識的 provider，從而才可以有所貢獻(xiàn)而得到滿足。 it helps people to distinguish justice form evil. privilege namp。 2， 在過去，教育的也起到 key role 的作用，但是，那時候只有 property and money can provide the opportunity of receiving education. 所以 privilege and property were the keys to education, and thus to success in ， people have equal opportunity to obtain education. 財富不再能 Property can no longer possess exclusively the resource of education. 教育成為了決定因素。 Optional words: Ensure/assure/ guarantee Thesis sentence: Money and property has been replaced by education as the main provider of individual opportunity to success. View1: In the past, the wealth people are more likely to be successful because the education is only accessible by them. When bees available to almost everyone, education plays an more and more important role in providing opportunities to success. Evidence: View2:In today?s business world, employer are more likely hire people on the basis of capacity rather than the kinds of traditionally personal connections that are mon among the wealthy. Evidence: ctor offers more opportunities for success in our society: education or money and property? In my view, education has replaced money and property as the main provider of such opportunities today. I base my view on two reasons. First, education—particularly higher education—used to be available only to the wealthy but now is accessible to almost anyone. Second, because of the civilrights movement and resulting laws, businesses are now required to hire on the basis of merit rather than the kinds of personal connections traditionally mon among the wealthy. Education probably always played a key role in determining one’s opportunities for success. But in the past, good postsecondary education was available mainly to the privileged classes. Because money and property largely determined one’s access to higher education, money and property really were the critical factors in opening doors to success. However, higher education is more egalitarian today. Given our vast numbers of state universities and financialaid programs, virtually anyone who meets entrance requirements for college can obtain an excellent college education and open up windows of opportunity in life. Another reason those opportunities will be open to educated young people from middleclass and poorer backgrounds is that hiring is more meritocratic today than ever before. In principle, at least, we have always been a society where all people are equal。” 1， 個人往往是按照 自己的利益辦事即使有環(huán)保意愿但和個人利益沖突或要損失個人利益時候往往就會選擇犧牲環(huán)境 moreover 個人往往是短視的，只關(guān)注眼前不注