【正文】 the team with great zeal that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty and discouragement, that makes us still full of energy to face the ing challenges and petition and that offers us the foundation for the ing success. Unless we are genuine to others, we will not be acknowledged, appreciated and respected by the others No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. Many capable people who always care about his way of thinking will be living a dull, depressing by being genuine to others can they win other people’s trust and can they reward the support, sympathy . From what have been discussed above, It admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to cooperate with others with great zeal It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to make it work. On the one hand, we should be sensible to encourage ourselves to imagine everyone to be our friends not enemies. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to examine our behaviors to make sure they will not hurt others. However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later. ，實事求是，量體裁衣，因地制宜 The fittest is the best As is vividly depicted in the picture in the left picture a man A carrying a spanner. He seems very delighted and energetic although wet over with sweat. The most striking feature is……………..There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration. As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact that the two man in different social positions have different attitudes toward life profoundly indicates that the fittest is the best to anyone who wants to enjoy their life. It is fitting the job that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty and discouragement , that makes us still full of energy to face the ing challenges and petition and that offers us the foundation for the ing success. Unless we choose the job that fit us, we will make a mess out of our life. No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. Many capable people who have the burning desire to win choose a admirable employment and suffer great illnesses. From what have been discussed above, It admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to choose job that can be done within his capability. It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to make it work. On the one hand, we should be sensible to find what we are skillful at and make a plan about the future. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to change to another job if it does not fit , it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later. 第一段 (描述現(xiàn)象 )Nowaday there is often a lack of understanding between A and the one hand, A find it difficult to...。 So whenever... are in trouble ,they will seek help from ... instead of from... 第二段 (分析原因 )There are some possible reasons for the the first place,...。 Finally... (參考原因： Even if A listen to the explanation of B, A often disagree with B.) As a result, the problem is being more and more serious. 第三段 (對癥下藥，給出建議。 With joint efforts, A and B can reach a better understanding... 筆者注：模式中的每一段基本都由首句，擴展句，結(jié)論三部份組成，此后模式中此類注釋將部份 同前省略。 ...。 第二段 (B的好處 )But B is also attractive。 Second,(參考原因： pared with the undeveloped factors of B, A is an adeal... for me to...(最后談對 A不足的補救措施 )Of course... 對待某事物與成功的關(guān)系 (以機遇為例 ) 第一段 (首句引出機遇 機不可失，失不再來 )Opportunities don`t e often.(擴展句 1機遇常常悄然離去 )They e every once in a while. Very often, they e quietly and go by without being noticed.(結(jié)論 珍惜機遇 )Therefore, it is advisable that you should value and treat them with care. 第二段 (首句說明機遇的偶然性 ) When an opportunity presents itself(來到時 ),it brings a promise but never realizes it on its own. (擴展句 1抓住機遇，實現(xiàn)成功的途徑 )If you want to achieve something or intend to fulfill one of your ambitions you must work hard, make efforts and get prepared.(擴展句 2反證法 )Otherwise, you will take no advantage of opportunities when they e to visit you. (結(jié)論必須做好一切可能的準備 )It is clear that it order to be highly qualified for our future jobs. We should make every possible preparation. 第三段 (Relationship between opportunity and success首句說明處理機遇的態(tài)度是成功者與失敗者之間的區(qū)別 ) The difference between a man who succeeds and one who does not lies only in the way each treats opportunities.(擴展句 1成功者的態(tài)度 )The successfull person always make adequate preparations to meet... as they duly arrive.(擴展句 2失敗者的態(tài)度 )The unsuccessful person, on the other hand, works little and just waits to see them pass by.(結(jié)論 )Obviously, the two different attitudes towards opportunities may lead to quite different consequences. 第四段 (我的觀點 ) In my opinion, there are plenty of opportunities for everyone in our society, but only those who are prepared adequately and qualified highly can make use of them to achieve their purpose. 筆者注： (1)全文選取該文做為自己的一個模式，是認為此類文章有一定的普遍性。所以對與此類文章，還是該早做準備 加以總結(jié)歸納。平時要注意此類說理句型的總結(jié)，將其納入模式之中。因為考試中說理部份大家都可能差不多半斤八兩。