【正文】 d us. Respect others to start from small things. Third, behave well. We should be kind to others, warmhearted to everyone, and generous to our friends. By doing so, our world will bee more and more beautiful.【解析】【詳解】題干解讀：該題目屬于應(yīng)用文寫作，但寫作時要按照應(yīng)用文格式寫，寫作時承接短文開頭，具體寫出怎樣做以及這樣做的意義。高分亮點(diǎn)：短語：protect the environment；pick up the rubbish；behave well；be kind to sb；more and more beautiful。7．上周，你們班就初中生能否騎電動自行車上學(xué)進(jìn)行了一次討論。注意：；，書寫工整、規(guī)范；。，騎電動車不安全；，騎電動車也快不起來。根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)寫一篇80100詞左右的英語短文，而且要做到表達(dá)清楚，語句通順，意思連貫。要注意把每一個要點(diǎn)都表達(dá)出來，不要遺漏任何一個，書寫時一定注意時態(tài)的正確使用。并注意上下文要語句貫通。寫作亮點(diǎn)：短文中作者按照題目的要求，給我們介紹了持不同觀點(diǎn)的學(xué)生各自的理由，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，要點(diǎn)全面。該文中以下幾個句子用得很好?？键c(diǎn)：提綱類作文。City ACity BFlying2 hours4 hoursTemperature30℃18℃Hotel★★★★★★Things to do★★★★★★Food★★★★★★In my opinion, is he better place to spend my summer holiday.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文In my opinion, City A is the better place to spend my summer holiday. Although the temperature there is higher, the hotel is less fortable, and even the food is not as delicious as that in City B, I still choose City A. The most important reason is that I can have a lot of things to do in City A . I can enjoy more beautiful scenery and do more activities. Besides, it takes us only two hours to fly there, which saves us a lot of time. I hope the holiday will be an unforgettable experience.【解析】【詳解】試題分析：本題給出了兩個城市的飛行時常、氣溫、旅館情況。雖然字?jǐn)?shù)要求不多，但可以很好地考查考生英語寫作的基本功，需要考生對常用的英語句型熟練掌握。避免漢語式英語。另外，一定要注意題目要求，把每一個信息都進(jìn)行比較，不要有漏掉。對于城市A的缺點(diǎn)，作者用了“Although”盡管一詞輕輕帶過。在比較的時候，作者用了多種方式，使句子不單調(diào)，比如在比較溫度時，直接用比較級“higher”在說旅館時用了“l(fā)ess fortable ”，比較食物時，用了“as…as”等。本文大部分都是復(fù)雜句，顯示了作者比較熟練的英語寫作水平。但既然選擇了遠(yuǎn)方，便只顧風(fēng)雨兼程。請以Dream Chaser為題，談?wù)勀阕约旱挠^點(diǎn)。寫作要求：，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮使行文連貫； ，字跡工整，詞數(shù)不少于80；，不計入總詞數(shù)；。主要說明要有自己的目標(biāo)，努力實(shí)現(xiàn)目標(biāo)應(yīng)做到勤奮學(xué)習(xí)，使自己不斷強(qiáng)大；正確面對困難，積極參加社會活動。承接文章開頭，句意完整，避免漢語式英語，敘述條理清晰。高分句型：It is +adj. + for sb. +to do sth.；there be句型；祈使句；need to do sth.。要點(diǎn)如下： （1）. 雖然你大部分功課你都學(xué)得比較好，但是你對自己不滿意。 （2）. 你的父母對你嚴(yán)格要求，但是也很關(guān)心你。他們希望你們實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的理想。 （2）. 第2要點(diǎn)和第3要點(diǎn)要用2—3句話作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。Hello!Dear Amy, thank you for caring.Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Li Ming【答案】例文Hello!Dear Amy, thank you for caring.Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. I have got good results in most of my subjects, but I am not happy with myself. I think I must spend more time on my studies.My parents are really strict with me. However, they care for me as well. Once upon a time, I failed in my physics exam and felt stressed and sad. They had a close munication with me and helped me solve my problems and cheer up again.My teachers are also ready to help us. They hope that we can realize our dreams. They tell us to try our best and not to give up. Life is always full of ups and downs. It39。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。初寫短文。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。修改潤色。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符