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t wishes!Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Billy,It’s my great pleasure to receive your . You wanted to know about my usual exercise. I’ll tell it to you. I am busy preparing for the ing physical test. So I take exercise less than an hour every day. Sometimes I don’t do exercise, because I have so much homework that I have no time to do it. I do well in playing balls.Doing exercise can help me keep a strong body, and it is good for my health. Besides, I think it can make me relaxed by doing exercise. So I advise you to spend more time doing exercise every week.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文,給Billy回封電子郵件,介紹自己平時的鍛煉情況,并建議他每周都要花些時間鍛煉身體。寫作中注意運用代詞,注意多種句式交替運用?!军c睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語言簡練。此處be busy doing sth, prepare for, do well in, be good for, advise sb to do sth等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。而你的朋友Daming最近卻被誠信危機所困擾。因此,Lingling很生氣,并且不愿接受Daming的道歉。注意:詞數(shù)80—100;行文連貫,邏輯合理;文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的校名和人名; 文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好,不計入總詞數(shù)。信守承諾是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德,在寫作過程中,注意文章結(jié)構(gòu),先寫出大明和玲玲之間的事情,然后再說自己對此的看法。然后仔細闡述了事情發(fā)生的經(jīng)過?!军c睛】文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,符合邏輯,先表明自己觀點,然后闡述事情,提出自己的觀點和建議。除此之外,中間也使用了一些連接詞,例如but,so,because of等,使文章更加通順。你想請他來你的家鄉(xiāng)一安徴一游,請你根據(jù)以下提示用英文給他寫一封電子郵件。,不計入總詞數(shù)Dear DaveI know that you are interested in Chinese culture and Im glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not e to Anhui, my home town, to have fun?【答案】Dear Dave,I know you are interested in Chinese culture and I’m glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not e to Anhui, my hometown, to have some fun.Anhui Province lies in the east of China. The best time to e here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats. There are many famous places to see. For example, Mt. Huangshan, where you will see wonderful plants and special rocks. Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on. As a fan of Chinese culture, don’t forget to try green tea in Anhui which smells good and tastes better. What’s more, e and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!Wele to Anhui! I’m looking forward to seeing you here!Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以李華的身份給自己的筆友Dave寫信,邀請他來你的家鄉(xiāng)—安徽一游,題目中列出了文章的提綱,審題可知,短文應從以下幾個內(nèi)容敘述:首先介紹家鄉(xiāng)的位置;然后介紹來這里最好的時候;接下來是介紹家鄉(xiāng)的景點和文化,并給出建議。寫作時應合理安排幾個內(nèi)容,分清主次,并注意上下文的連貫。如可以使用簡單句結(jié)構(gòu),易于掌握,不容易出錯?!军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,短文作者根據(jù)題目要求邀請Dave來自己的家鄉(xiāng)旅游,并介紹了家鄉(xiāng)的景點和文化。短文先對Dave發(fā)出邀請,然后具體介紹了家鄉(xiāng)的位置、景點、文化等,并提出了建議。第二,短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱,語法規(guī)范,用詞準確,句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整,符合英語的表達習慣。句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡單句為主,也使用了并列句、賓語從句、狀語從句等復合句,還有一些好的句型,如The best time to e here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats、Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on.、What’s more, e and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!、I’m looking forward to seeing you here!等。 要求:、條理清晰、段落分明、書寫工整;、校名和地名等信息;,并作適當發(fā)揮。 結(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時,人稱為單數(shù)第一人稱,注意主謂一致問題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見句式的應用,寫作中注意運用代詞,注意多種句式交替運用?!军c睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語言簡練文中運用了一些好的句型:We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this 。請你按照以下提示給他回一封。參考詞匯:霧霾haze注意:1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱;2. 語言通順,句子連貫,條理清楚,書寫規(guī)范;3. 詞數(shù)80左右,信件的開頭與結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。題目中列出了三個要點,我們應根據(jù)這些要點提示,來組織語言,充實內(nèi)容。因此文章應主要分成三段,一個內(nèi)容一段。寫作時,應注意英語句式表達習慣和漢語是不同的,不能逐詞翻譯,應從句子的整體考慮,寫完整的句子,利用簡單句的基本句型,使用恰當?shù)脑~匯和短語?!军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,短文中作者根據(jù)題目要求介紹了自己家鄉(xiāng)治理霧霾的情況,并結(jié)合自身的實際情況,講述了自己日常生活中是如何做的。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱,作者根據(jù)表達需要使用了一般過去時、一般將來時態(tài)和一般將來時態(tài),動詞形式變化準確,語法規(guī)范。句子結(jié)構(gòu)以簡單句為主,也使用了一些并列句和復合句,長短句結(jié)合,使文章富有節(jié)奏。9.寫作81. 春天,許多人都喜歡參加各種戶外活動。提示:1)What’s the benefit (好處) of outdoor activities? (12 opinions)2)Which is your favourite outdoor activity? How and why? (12 examples)3)What do we need to pay attention to when we do outdoor activities? (At least 1 suggestion)要求:1)表達清楚,語法正確,上下文連貫;2)必須包括提示中的所有信息,并按要求適當發(fā)揮;3)詞數(shù):100詞左右,開頭已給出,不計入詞數(shù);4)不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文會使用到一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài),注意一些常見句式的應用。寫作亮點:本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語言簡練、要點齊全。10. 朋友是我們生活的組成部分,他們總是在我們最需要幫助的時候陪伴我們。1. 簡要介紹你最好的朋友的外貌和性格。題目給出了標題及寫作要點。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時。介紹發(fā)生的一件難忘的事情,要用到一般過去時態(tài)?!军c睛】人物介紹是記敘文中常見的一種寫作類型。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。用“wear + 某種衣服”來介紹某人的穿戴。當主語是第三人稱單數(shù)時,注意主謂一致