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y poor and the streets were very narrow. Houses were small and old. Rubbish was everywhere. Few people would like to e to my hometown. Now the government takes measures to improve the pollution and the city bees cleaner and cleaner. The houses are big and bright. Many people have moved into new apartments. More and more people have their own cars and live a fortable life. The new airport has been in use for two years. There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every hope my hometown is being more and more beautiful.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以The Changes in My Hometown為題,介紹一下自己的家鄉(xiāng)這些年來(lái)發(fā)生的變化。審題可知,作文的基本框架和大概內(nèi)容都有了,需要注意的是在描寫過(guò)去的時(shí)候,需要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮一到兩點(diǎn);還有對(duì)將來(lái)的希望也需要學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮。表達(dá)時(shí),需要注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的,不能逐詞翻譯表格中的語(yǔ)句,而應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮,使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、短語(yǔ)和句型來(lái)表達(dá)。語(yǔ)句之間注意使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分,使文意連貫。文章是按照時(shí)間的順序,先介紹了家鄉(xiāng)過(guò)去的面貌,這一部分使用了過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài),謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞都變成了過(guò)去式,形式準(zhǔn)確。最后對(duì)家鄉(xiāng)的未來(lái)表達(dá)了自己的愿望。文章中語(yǔ)言得體,語(yǔ)句通順,句式表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)的習(xí)慣,語(yǔ)法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確。7.近年來(lái),習(xí)近平主席提出了實(shí)現(xiàn)中華民族偉大復(fù)興的“中國(guó)夢(mèng)”。m a Dream Teenager”為題,寫一篇80-100詞的短文,向大家推介自己。提示詞語(yǔ): good at ..with ...rules up popular with... to do something【答案】I39。 Good morning, dear teachers and friends, I am Zhang Ming. It39。d like to help people. For example, I volunteer to visit sick children in the hospital and cheer them up.In a word, I believe that the man who holds his dream will be able to achieve his dream one day. That39。學(xué)校開展“夢(mèng)想少年”的主題演講活動(dòng),假如你是張明,要求根據(jù)圖表提示內(nèi)容,以“I39。根據(jù)所給出的材料提示可知文章時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),人稱主要為第一、第三人稱。在寫作過(guò)程中,要將圖表內(nèi)提示信息用英語(yǔ)正確的表達(dá)出來(lái),要涵蓋圖表中提到的所有要點(diǎn),注意理順要點(diǎn),防止漏寫。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查,確保正確無(wú)誤。course(s)dolike?2.Whyyouit/them?3.Whatyoufrom Ofthelike __________________________.【答案】例文Of all the courses, I like sports best because I am interested in playing basketball. I can make a lot of friends when I play basketball. And I will learn the spirit of teamwork. So I want to choose sports.I also like paper cutting because it is very interesting and I can learn more about traditional Chinese culture. That’s why I want to choose paper cutting.I often help my parents with housework when I am free. So I want to learn how to cook delicious food. I think it is very useful course because I’d like to cook something different for my parents.I believe these courses will make my life more colorful.【解析】【詳解】。注意時(shí)態(tài)的運(yùn)用,靈活運(yùn)用所學(xué)單詞、短語(yǔ)和句型。:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的文章,很好地完成了試題中所規(guī)定的內(nèi)容。前三段分別講述他所喜歡的學(xué)科(體育、剪紙和廚藝),并解釋愿意以及收獲,最后一段講述這些學(xué)科對(duì)他的生活的意義。高分句型:That’s why I want to choose paper cutting中why引導(dǎo)的表語(yǔ)從句。9.寫作某英文網(wǎng)站的“ Student Life”欄目正在向中學(xué)生征文,標(biāo)題為“ A time when I made someone happy”,請(qǐng)你寫一篇英文稿件,內(nèi)容需包括以下要點(diǎn):1. Who was the person you made happy?2. When was it?3. What did you say or do?4. Why did it make him/her happy?5. How did you feel at that moment?注意:1.詞數(shù):100左右(題目不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))?!敬鸢浮縇ast summer,though it was hot,I volunteered to teach children English in rural I arrived there,I couldn39。寫作亮點(diǎn):既然這是一篇記敘文,就應(yīng)該完整地呈現(xiàn)故事,需要加上必要的背景,指明時(shí)間(Last summer),地點(diǎn)(in rural area),簡(jiǎn)要概括事件(teach children English),這是文章首句的點(diǎn)睛之筆,信息量豐富。在收尾部分表達(dá)了作者積極的人生態(tài)度,表示如果還有機(jī)會(huì)自己還樂(lè)于參與,這樣使得這篇文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整,表意更加清晰。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的提示,寫一篇不少于80詞的英語(yǔ)短文,談一談你對(duì)智能手機(jī)的看法,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。文章時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),人稱主要用第一、第三人稱。在寫作時(shí),注意連句成篇,保持文章的連貫性,要層次清楚,要點(diǎn)分明,中心突出。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查,確保正