【正文】 to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games. Second, it is a good idea to buy something useful for our parents or teachers so that we can show our love to them. What is more, why not donate our lucky money to the poor kids in need? Helping others makes us happy.All in all, let us manage our lucky money properly. We should use our money in a meaningful way.【解析】【詳解】每年春節(jié)，每個(gè)孩子都能收到來(lái)自長(zhǎng)輩的壓歲錢（luckymoney）。同學(xué)們?cè)撊绾喂芾碜约旱腻X，讓自己的錢用得更有意義？這是一篇給材料作文，本題所給材料比較詳細(xì)，寫作中注意將所給內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，不能逐字翻譯。動(dòng)筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，寫作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。【點(diǎn)睛】文章使用了很好的短語(yǔ)和句子：In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video 。注意事項(xiàng)：，條理清楚，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。 狀況水污染，大氣污染...... 應(yīng)對(duì)措施立即阻止此類活動(dòng),治理環(huán)境（至少兩條）...... 感想建議環(huán)境能夠變得更好......Change for a better China________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】We all know it is being more and more important to protect our environment well. But some people don’t care about it .They throw litter into the river and even worse factories also put waste into the river, the river is full of rubbish. The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days. Factories that burn coal also pollute the air with a lot of black smoke. We hardly ever see blue skies anymore.I think everyone in our hometown should play a part in cleaning it up. We should write to the government ,they should close down the factories. Trees are very helpful and important for the environment .We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more healthy .Now, Our hometown has started to face the problem, I believe we can make our country a better place if we keep trying.【解析】【詳解】環(huán)保話題是人們最關(guān)心的話題之一，請(qǐng)以Change for a better China為主題，結(jié)合自己家鄉(xiāng)的變化寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文。寫作中注意表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)時(shí)的常用句式，注意在表達(dá)不同觀點(diǎn)時(shí)，連詞的使用?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文緊扣要求對(duì)家鄉(xiāng)做了簡(jiǎn)單介紹，內(nèi)容完整，用了表格中的信息。句式豐富。銜接自然，順暢。7．書(shū)面表達(dá)每個(gè)人都有自己心愛(ài)的物品，相信你也擁有一個(gè)自己心愛(ài)的物品吧！請(qǐng)以“A（n） _____ I have”為題，描述一個(gè)或一件你心愛(ài)的物品，并談?wù)勀闶侨绾蔚玫剿?，以及它存在的意義。3. 語(yǔ)言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，短文連貫通順，80詞左右。寫作的難度是逐漸加深的，在討論其如何獲得的時(shí)候要注意正確使用時(shí)態(tài)，在談?wù)撘饬x的時(shí)候要注意表達(dá)的準(zhǔn)確性，避免不熟悉的表達(dá)。在描述得到的經(jīng)歷的時(shí)候不落俗套，講到了自己的家庭那時(shí)比較困難，父親是通過(guò)努力工作為我賺錢買槍的，寫作是富有感情的，也通過(guò)這段經(jīng)歷為這把玩具槍賦予了一定的意義。8．共享單車自從2016年在江陰投入使用以來(lái)，給人們帶來(lái)了諸多便利，受到人們的追捧，改變了人們的出行方式，但同時(shí)也遇到了一些挑戰(zhàn)，是國(guó)民素質(zhì)的“照妖鏡”，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格中信息的提示，給21世紀(jì)英文報(bào)寫一篇關(guān)于共享單車看法的稿件。諸多優(yōu)勢(shì)隨處可見(jiàn)，出行方便有益健康，減少污染費(fèi)用不高，負(fù)擔(dān)得起存在問(wèn)題未及時(shí)歸還占道擋路你的觀點(diǎn)我認(rèn)為參考詞匯：公共自行車public bicycles注意事項(xiàng)：，要求語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫。，文章的開(kāi)頭部分已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。作文應(yīng)包括4個(gè)主要內(nèi)容，一個(gè)是社會(huì)現(xiàn)狀，第二個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)，第三是存在的問(wèn)題，最后發(fā)表個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn)。要注意上下文的連貫，將這些內(nèi)容有機(jī)的連接起來(lái)，不要逐句翻譯。9．4月23日是“世界讀書(shū)日”，你校英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部正在開(kāi)展主題為“多讀書(shū)，讀好書(shū)”的活動(dòng)。內(nèi)容包括：應(yīng)該讀什么樣的書(shū)，以及讀書(shū)的意義。例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文采用的是一段式，寫的是閱讀的好處，時(shí)態(tài)采用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，描述倡議時(shí)，描寫細(xì)致，條理清晰。句型：reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills；reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future。讀書(shū)可以成就更美好的自己，讓讀書(shū)伴隨我們成長(zhǎng)。要點(diǎn)提示：讀書(shū)的重要性1. 獲取知識(shí)，開(kāi)闊眼界；2. 提升自我，增強(qiáng)自信……讀過(guò)的一本書(shū)或一首詩(shī)1. 作品內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介；2. 讀書(shū)感悟及對(duì)自己的影響。2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)姓名、學(xué)校及地名。參考詞匯：classic 經(jīng)典作品； open up one’s eyes 開(kāi)闊眼界；improve oneself 提升自我； be more confident 更自信；responsibility 責(zé)任；cooperation 合作。s writer is called Charlotte Bronte, who was born in England in had two sisters and one brother, but unfortunately their mother died when they were very young. Actually Jane Eyre is a book whose theme is of love. In the story. Jane Eyre lived a hard life, but she was selfconfident and perseverant. In her heart, there is always a mind that if you hold a belief and stick to it, you will eventually achieve your dream.【解析】這是一篇圖表，要求介紹自己讀過(guò)的一本書(shū)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一，三人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)和過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。