【正文】 wever, Tommy is stressed when the exam es. And he doesn’t have enough sleep. I think he should go over what he has learned before exams. It’s better for him to manage his time wisely so that he can have enough time to rest.【解析】這篇作文要求我們按照表格里的內(nèi)容介紹一下Tommy的情況，為Tommy寫一篇綜合素質(zhì)的評價報告。表格中涉及的內(nèi)容較多，寫作時要注意表達的條理性。在最后要給Tommy提一些建議，這一部分應(yīng)該用第一人稱?！玖咙c說明】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的范文。表達準確，注意了被動形式的使用，如He was rewarded by our school this year.。短文注意到了長短句的結(jié)合，并恰當?shù)氖褂昧艘恍┻B詞，使文章表達的連貫。 7．　　近年來霧霾天氣在中國許多城市頻頻發(fā)生。請你用英語寫一篇有關(guān)霧霾的短文向?？坝⒄Z角”投稿,內(nèi)容包括：1. 霧霾的危害 2. 霧霾產(chǎn)生的原因（2個） 3. 應(yīng)對霧霾的措施（3個）提示：霧霾 smog poisonous 有毒的注意：1. 詞數(shù)110左右； 2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫； 3. 開頭語已為你寫好（不計入總詞數(shù)）。首先應(yīng)注意在短文中要包括題目中給出的所有信息，不能遺漏要點，并注意表達的層次和條理。最后要注意英語的表達習慣，英語句式與漢語在語序和詞性上的使用是不同的，要注意不能逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語。還應(yīng)使用一些較好的句型或者短語，增強文章的表現(xiàn)力。要點如下： （1）. 雖然你大部分功課你都學得比較好，但是你對自己不滿意。 （2）. 你的父母對你嚴格要求，但是也很關(guān)心你。他們希望你們實現(xiàn)自己的理想。 （2）. 第2要點和第3要點要用2—3句話作適當發(fā)揮。Hello!Dear Amy, thank you for caring.Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Li Ming【答案】例文Hello!Dear Amy, thank you for caring.Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. I have got good results in most of my subjects, but I am not happy with myself. I think I must spend more time on my studies.My parents are really strict with me. However, they care for me as well. Once upon a time, I failed in my physics exam and felt stressed and sad. They had a close munication with me and helped me solve my problems and cheer up again.My teachers are also ready to help us. They hope that we can realize our dreams. They tell us to try our best and not to give up. Life is always full of ups and downs. It39。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內(nèi)容?！军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。初寫短文。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。修改潤色。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。假定你是李華，請根據(jù)要點 寫一封信，說說你的計劃。 ，語法正確，書寫整潔。 。m very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation ceremony. The ceremony will be held in our school hall at 7 o’clock on June have planned three activities for it. First of all, we would like to invite our headmaster to make a speech and give us his best wishes for a bright future. After that, every one give each other gifts and blessings. And then each class will give a wonderful performance. In the end, some pictures will be shown to share the happy time we have had together.This is what we will do. I hope you will choose my plan.Best wishes,Yours,Li hua【解析】【分析】這篇書面表達主要是推薦自己的畢業(yè)晚會計劃。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。10．書面表達為感受母愛情深，弘揚知恩圖報，某英語網(wǎng)站正在舉辦以My參考詞匯：giveto…，It39。myto…，trybestMyMotherWelove．Weneedshowpersonloveisshow love．The person I love most is my mother．My mother is 41 years old．She is of medium build with long black hair．She is quiet．She is a history teacher in a middle school．She likes dancing．She can cook delicious food．She did a lot for me when I was a child．She bought whatever I needed for my study，even though she didn39。ll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young．I39。s what she wants most，I think．【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。Mother為主題寫一篇短文介紹你的母親和你之間的故事，參加某英語網(wǎng)站正在舉辦的征文活動。同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細心復核檢查，確保正確無誤