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that where there is a will, there is a way. They also told me that I should be confident. My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it. I had the confidence again. I found when I put my heart into it, English didn’t’ seem that difficult. I made great progress. My parents and teachers were happy for me. I felt pleased and proud for myself, too. To be confident means I should believe myself. Believe myself, there are hopes in my life. In the future, I won39。m sure that nothing can beat me and I will win! Believe myself, a beautiful future is waiting for me.Thank you for your listening.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以Believe Myself and I will win為題,寫一篇演講稿。寫作時學(xué)生們應(yīng)根據(jù)這幾個內(nèi)容提要,發(fā)揮自己的想象力,將這些內(nèi)容補充完整,用正確的英語表達出來。寫作時應(yīng)注意:首先要保證發(fā)言稿中包括了所有提示的內(nèi)容,不能遺漏要點,可以根據(jù)表達需要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,但要與上下文意銜接起來。應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā),選擇適當(dāng)句型、短語、詞匯進行表達。為提升文章檔次,應(yīng)注意銜接詞以及高級句式或復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)的使用。文章有以下幾個優(yōu)點:首先短文內(nèi)容完整,包括了題目中要求的所有內(nèi)容,沒有遺漏要點。短文主要分成三段,每一段主題都很明確,敘述詳細、清楚。文章中句式變化豐富,有簡單句、并列句、復(fù)合句,長短句結(jié)合,增強了文章的表現(xiàn)力。t be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I39。7. 近年來霧霾天氣在中國許多城市頻頻發(fā)生。請你用英語寫一篇有關(guān)霧霾的短文向??坝⒄Z角”投稿,內(nèi)容包括:1. 霧霾的危害 2. 霧霾產(chǎn)生的原因(2個) 3. 應(yīng)對霧霾的措施(3個)提示:霧霾 smog poisonous 有毒的注意:1. 詞數(shù)110左右; 2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫; 3. 開頭語已為你寫好(不計入總詞數(shù))。首先應(yīng)注意在短文中要包括題目中給出的所有信息,不能遺漏要點,并注意表達的層次和條理。最后要注意英語的表達習(xí)慣,英語句式與漢語在語序和詞性上的使用是不同的,要注意不能逐詞翻譯,寫漢語式的英語。還應(yīng)使用一些較好的句型或者短語,增強文章的表現(xiàn)力。請你根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容提示, 用英語寫一篇短文參加此活動。要求:1. 可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié), 以使行文連貫:詞數(shù):100左右. 2. 不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校的真實名稱、老師和同學(xué)的真實姓名。目的是宣傳和弘揚中華優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化。作文要包含材料上的所有信息,通過介紹這個故事,發(fā)表看法或者觀點。注意固定搭配及主謂一致的問題,例如:There was/ were...注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系,具有條理性。假設(shè)你是李華,請根據(jù)下表提示,用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿,在班會上談?wù)勀阌龅降臒酪约澳阕约旱淖龇ā?. 所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中所有的信息,并作適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。Hello everyone,Hello everyone,I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them. That’s all. Thank you!【答案】Hello everyone,I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them.I am not very tall and very mon. But I don’t care and I believe in myself.My parents don’t understand me and I have very few friends. I encourage myself to be kind to others and learn to municate with others very well.I often feel stressed because of my study and I don’t have many chances to join the afterclass activities. I will plan my time very carefully and improve my study in a very good way. Try to join as many activities as possible and achieve a balance between study and hobbies.That’s all. Thank you!【解析】試題分析:本題是一篇給材料作文,要求用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿,在班會上談?wù)勀阌龅降臒酪约澳阕约旱淖龇?。要包含表格中所有的信息,并作適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。寫作亮點:短文開頭直奔主題:我想要談?wù)勎业臒兰霸鯓犹幚硭麄儯缓竺嫒畏謩e從外貌上的煩惱、與父母交流上的障礙、學(xué)習(xí)上的壓力幾方面分別談?wù)撟约旱臒兰疤幚淼姆绞?,生動具體,條理分明?!究键c定位】 考查提綱類作文。course(s)dolike?2.Whyyouit/them?3.Whatyoufrom Ofthelike __________________________.【答案】例文Of all the courses, I like sports best because I am interested in playing basketball. I can make a lot of friends when I play basketball. And I will learn the spirit of teamwork. So I want to choose sports.I also like paper cutting because it is very interesting and I can learn more about traditional Chinese culture. That’s why I want to choose paper cutting.I often help my parents with housework when I am free. So I want to learn how to cook delicious food. I think it is very useful course because I’d like to cook something different for my parents.I believe these courses will make my life more colorful.【解析】【詳解】。注意時態(tài)的運用,靈活運用所學(xué)單詞、短語和句型。:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的文章,很好地完成了試題中所規(guī)定的內(nèi)容。前三段分別講述他所喜歡的學(xué)科(體育、剪紙和廚藝),并解釋愿意以及收獲,最后一段講述這些學(xué)科對他的生活的意義。高分句型:That’s why I want to choose paper cutting中why引導(dǎo)的表語從句。