【正文】 的數(shù)量，以研究鳥兒在數(shù)量方面的變化。如：…….（舉1例）要求：1）表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫； 2）必須包括表格中所有的相關(guān)信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； 3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右（短文的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；4）不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)，例如like reading，more than，all kinds of，spend time doing，enjoy doing，the number of，twice a year，be the chief engineer of等?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。陜西師大附中中考模擬）書面表達(dá)“文明是一面鏡子，折射出一座城市的品質(zhì)”。在你身邊有哪些不文明現(xiàn)象？作為中學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該從哪些方面做起，為文明城市的建設(shè)出一份力？請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示詞，以“Let’s help Xi’an be better”為題，號(hào)召全體中學(xué)生共創(chuàng)美好西安。 traffic rules。 collect the trash。 clean the streets。Let’s help Xi’an be betterOur city is making its effort to bee an international city. But in our daily life, we find_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Let’s help Xi’an be betterOur city is making its effort to bee an international city. But in our daily life, we find many bad behaviors around us. For example, many students spit everywhere. Some students don’t follow the traffic rules. Also, some students don’t respect others. These are not right. As students, we should do our part to build a civilized city. We can plant more trees to make our environment better. On weekends, we can help clean the streets and collect the trash in public places. Besides, we can do volunteer work to help others. Let’s work together to make our city more civilized and more beautiful.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們闡述身邊的不文明現(xiàn)象，并闡述我們應(yīng)該如何做，為文明城市的建設(shè)出一份力。需要注意題目中給出的提示詞在文章中必須要用上，可以根據(jù)表達(dá)需要調(diào)整順序。審題可知，短文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主，第一人稱來敘述。為提升文章檔次，在文章中應(yīng)穿插幾個(gè)并列句或復(fù)合句的結(jié)構(gòu)?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目提示，介紹了自己身邊的不文明現(xiàn)象，并對(duì)中學(xué)生如何創(chuàng)建文明城市貢獻(xiàn)自己的力量提出了自己的看法。文章內(nèi)容分成兩個(gè)部分：第一部分列舉了一些不文明現(xiàn)象；第二部分介紹了為創(chuàng)建文明城市，中學(xué)生應(yīng)該怎么做。其次短文使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確。短文中的一些好的句型和短語(yǔ)有Also, some students don’t respect others、As students, we should do our part to build a civilized city.、We can plant more trees to make our environment better. 、On weekends, we can help clean the streets and collect the trash in public places. 、Besides, we can do volunteer work to help others等。山東中考模擬）“揚(yáng)帆起航新學(xué)期，學(xué)姐學(xué)長(zhǎng)提建議”。2. 短文中不能出現(xiàn)正式姓名，校名。【答案】I39。而To begin with,/ Moreover,/ Last but not least,等短語(yǔ)的運(yùn)用，既豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，更使短文很有條理，是本文的亮點(diǎn)?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。山東中考模擬）假如你是學(xué)生會(huì)主席， 你校學(xué)生會(huì)打算以“保護(hù)環(huán)境”為主題搞 一次社會(huì)實(shí)踐。要點(diǎn)如下：，多走路。多植樹。 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列提示用英語(yǔ)寫一封倡議書。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。15．（（1）父母要求你每天打掃房間；不能玩電腦游戲；晚上10點(diǎn)前必須睡覺（2）你覺得父母雖太嚴(yán)厲，但理解他們。（4）你認(rèn)為……。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。構(gòu)思提綱。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。16．（_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Hi, everyone. My name is Li Lei. My parents love me very much. But it doesn’t mean I can do everything I want at home.First, I should finish my homework before Saturday evening to make sure I have enough time to make a review. It’s necessary. Second, I have to do washing by myself. This means I won’t have enough time to play. I don’t really understand why they ask me to do so. Third, I must sleep before 11 in the evening and get up at 6 in the morning. I hope I could sleep till 10 am someday.My friends seldom have enough time to relax either. So I think I should listen to my parents. No cross, no crown.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下你的父母對(duì)你在學(xué)習(xí)、衛(wèi)生、作息上的要求是什么。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱。寫作時(shí)，避免使用漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語(yǔ)。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。句子I won’t have enough time to 。句子why they ask me to do so. 是由why引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句。北京中考模擬）現(xiàn)在，某英文報(bào)紙正在開展以＂遇見美＂為主題的征文活動(dòng)。談一談生活中你遇見美的一次經(jīng)歷，主要內(nèi)容包括你什么時(shí)候在哪里遇見了美，經(jīng)歷了什么事情以及你為什么覺得它美。寫作亮點(diǎn)：短文用了一些短語(yǔ)和句式，如：in front of sb在某人面前；give ；用了that引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句，如：The movie was Dunkirk, and the story that happened on the screen was one of heroism and the sad reality during if引導(dǎo)的從句，如：As I watched the movie, it was as if I were experiencing the same victories and setbacks right from my seat in the 。湖北中考模擬）為配合我市開展“創(chuàng)建文明城市（build a civilized city）”活動(dòng)，學(xué)校舉辦以“How to Behave Well”為主題的英語(yǔ)征文比賽。提示：1. 保持環(huán)境衛(wèi)生；2. 待人有禮，樂于助人；3. 遵守交通規(guī)則；4. 寫出1到2條自己的觀點(diǎn)。3. 詞數(shù)：80100詞。d better not talk or laugh loudly in public.Let’s action now. I believe, the better we behave, the more civilized our city will be.【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇提綱作文，要求是為配合我市開展“創(chuàng)建文明城市（build a civilized city）”活動(dòng)，學(xué)校舉辦以“How to Behave Well”為主題的英語(yǔ)征文比賽。s best to do ，be friendly to ，be ready to do ，It’s +adj.（ for sb.） + to do 。19．（請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，用英文寫一篇演講稿，談?wù)勥@一段美好的經(jīng)歷。（2）演講稿的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Ladies and gentlemen,My name is Li Ming. I’m very glad to talk about my wonderful experience. Tianjin International Marathon________________________________________________________【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,My name is Li Ming. I’m very glad to talk about my wonderful experience. Tianjin International Marathon was held on April 4,.Before the game, volunteers were given a training. In our spare time, we talked to the athletes in English to help we are friends with many the same time,we also learn about many different cultures.I think the experience is good for me.【解析】亮點(diǎn)說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。而Tianjin International Marathon was held on April 4,./Before the game, volunteers were given a think the experience is good for ，使本文內(nèi)容豐富，語(yǔ)態(tài)多樣，表達(dá)流暢，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。20．（183