【正文】 with the remarkable improvement of people39。s living advanced science and technology add much spice / flavor to our daily life It is monly believed that… (后者)觀點(diǎn) I give my vote to the former / latter aroused wide public concern./ Sth has drawn great public It is undeniable that… , / Personally, be supported by sound reasons argument on both sides play an increasingly important role in… …必不可少 be indispensable to … As the proverb goes: …產(chǎn)生有利/不利的影響 exert positive / negative effects on… The advantages far outweigh the ，引起 lead to / give rise to / contribute to / result in a plicated social phenomenon / 成就感 sense of responsibility / achievement sense of petition and cooperation widen one39。s vision acquire knowledge and skills …有益 be beneficial to / be conducive to… make contributions to the society lay a solid foundation for… prehensive quality … Admittedly, unshakable duty satisfy / meet the needs of... a reliable source of information valuable natural resources the Internet(一定要由冠詞，字母I 大寫) convenient and efficient in all aspects of human life environmentally friendly materials a symbol of society progress Sth has greatly facilitated people39。s time and energy on… expand one39。s dream The main / leading reasons are listed as follows: We still have a long way to ，用詞多變是關(guān)鍵。提綱第1點(diǎn)指出一種現(xiàn)象，提綱第2點(diǎn)要求分析產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因，提綱第3點(diǎn)要求談?wù)劇拔摇睂υ摤F(xiàn)象的看法，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為現(xiàn)象解釋型作文。分析越來越多的大學(xué)生熱衷考取各種證書的主要原因。高分范文Certificate Craze On CampusIn recent years, getting a certificate has bee a new craze among college students.[1]Just randomly ask a student on campus what he or she is busy doing, [2]quite possibly, you may get the answer [3]that he or she is preparing for a certificate [2]of some kind.[4]Why does this craze appear?[4]There are mainly two reasons behind this , [5]it is the employment pressure that forces college students to get more the admission expansion of colleges, a lot more graduates have to face the fierce petition in the job can one make himself more petitive? More certificates at hand, , diploma and certificates are still important standards [6]by which many employers measure a person’s order to increase the qualifications for a job, the students pel themselves to run from one exam to another.[7]From my point of view, we should be more rational [8]when it es to certificates, [9]since certificates [2]do not necessarily prove one’s crazy in getting certifications blindly is [10]nothing but wasting conclude, we should focus on improving our ability [10]but not getting a certificate of no practical value.【亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評】[1]祈使句使用恰當(dāng)。[2]限定詞使用恰當(dāng)，使文章表達(dá)更嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，增強(qiáng)了說服力。[4]設(shè)問句引出原因，容易引起注意。[6]which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，充當(dāng)介詞賓語。[8]“當(dāng)談到或提及…時”。[10]“只是，僅僅”。佳句臨摩：You may get the answer that he or she is preparing for a certificate of some ：離婚率上升盡管令人難過，但卻是不爭的事實。：From my point of view, we should be more rational when it es to ：我認(rèn)為，對于我們來說，更重要的是盡可能提高自己的能力而不是獲得更多的證書。提綱第1點(diǎn)指出一種現(xiàn)象，提綱第2點(diǎn)要求分析產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因，提綱第3點(diǎn)要求談?wù)劇拔摇睂υ摤F(xiàn)象的看法，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為現(xiàn)象解釋型作文。分析大學(xué)生熱衷名牌的原因。高分范文Students’ Pursuit for Famous BrandsNowadays many college students like to pursue famous clothes to mobile phones, even study articles like electronic dictionaries and pens, they [1]are inclined to buy famous brands.[2]Moreover, many students from poor families begin to [3]follow this consumption trend as phenomenon has aroused wide attention.[4]The following reasons can account for college students’ preference for famous brands.[2]Above all, in many college students’ eyes, a famous brand is a symbol of sophistication and expect others to admire their high class and good taste.[2]What’s more, in modern society, famous brands to some extent are equal to fashion, [5]which has a great attraction to young college students.[2]Besides, parents’ spoiling their children helps form their bad consumption habit.[2]As far as I am concerned, [6]it is irrational for college students to pursue famous brands.[3]After all, most of famous brands are [7]far beyond their consumption ability.[3]Besides, [8]it is not famous brands but a person’s noble character that really makes him high class.[3]Therefore, college students should attach more importance to cultivating a good character [9]rather than pursuing famous brands.【亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評】[1]“有…傾向”。[3] follow表示“跟隨，追求(趨勢或時尚)”[4]用于引出原因。[6] it為形式主語，不定式為真正主語。beyond表示“超出…范圍”。not…but連接并列成分。佳句臨摹：It is irrational for college students to pursue famous ：對大學(xué)生來說，了解校園以外的世界是非常必要的。___________________________________________________________________________：Therefore, college students should attach more importance to cultivating a good character rather than pursuing famous ：很多同學(xué)經(jīng)常玩電腦游戲，這是浪費(fèi)時間，而不是一種有益的放松方式。根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：簡單介紹自己的情況，表明寫信目的：申請助學(xué)貸款。保證合理利用貸款并表明還款決心，最后表示感謝。[2]“超出…的能力范圍”。[4]過渡銜接詞語，使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密。[6]“我保證…”，that引導(dǎo)同位語從句。佳句臨摩：To make matters worse, my mother has suddenly fallen ill and is expecting a major ：令人更迷惑不解的是，很多飛機(jī)都從大海上離奇消失了。：Meanwhile, I’ll spare no effort to work hard both in the study and my future career in order to pay back the ：全國人民都不遺余力地支持北京舉辦奧運(yùn)會。15it is almost impossible to do..。17...has/have no alternative but to...除...外別無選擇18....between the devil and the deep blue sea 進(jìn)退維谷，左右為難 in the thought that...滿足于...的想法20(重磅出擊，一般老師都會感動，這個句子可以千變?nèi)f化，可以替換其中的一些詞）The long,(costly strike)proved to be the last nail in the coffin for(the pany),with(its history of financial problems).長時期的罷工損失巨大，再加上一直以來的財政問題，使得該公祠一蹶不振?！泻?do harm to / be harmful to / be detrimental to / 情感 / 信息 exchange ideas / emotions / information …的最新發(fā)展 keep pace with / catch up with/ keep abreast with the latest development of …… take effective measures to do sth。…觀點(diǎn)因人而異 Views on …vary from person to person。 replace / substitute / take the place of cannot bear closer analysis / cannot hold water offer job opportunities mirror of social progress Undoubtedly, / There is no doubt that… enhance / promote mutual understanding make full use of / take advantage of suffer from heavier work pressure guarantee the stability and prosperity of