【正文】 e recent 5 years, the figure has been more than tripled, surging from 40,000 to 120, are several reasons for the , with the development of economy, more and more people bee better their ability to finance their trip abroad is , tourism has greatly developed over the agencies offer not only domestic packages but also travel specials addition, individuals today are expected and encouraged to go outside to widen their horizon and to face the real world of this way they hope to keep themselves informed of what is going on around the the changes reflected in the table, we can predict that the number of individuals going out of the country will encouragingly and inevitably facilitates the cultural exchange between ours and the rest of the world and this trend will be irreversible.【范文二】Currently, people in growing numbers are seeking to make tours in other is vividly indicated in the above chart, the numbers of foreigntravelling people in X city has reached to more than 120,000 in the year of2005, pared with about 12,000 in 1995 and less than 40,000 in the chart, we can also predict that this trend is likely to continue in the following reasons for the increasing of traveling abroad are obvious as , as the development of people’s life style and economy, they are rich enough to afford to go travel , the world has bee a small village as the information age and internet , more and more people are interested in the cultue of other countries, therefore they are eager to visit them in their we can see from the chart, this trend mentioned above will bring lots of benefits for one thing, traveling abroad will help connect our world closely and enhance the friendship between another, tourists can leran great amount of experiences and cultures, which will be unquestionably beneficial for our countries development【題目4】Part (30 minutes)Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists? You should write at Least 120 words following the outline given below :1．名校校園正成為旅游新熱點(diǎn)2．校園是否應(yīng)對(duì)游客開放，人們看法不同3．我認(rèn)為……［參考作文］Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists?【范文一】One can always find visitors taking pictures and enjoying the scenery in university the May Day Holiday, National Day Holiday, summer and winter vacations, many University campuses bee popular tourist my opinion, university campus should be open to fact, there are many royal gardens and parks, all of them obviously better than the scenery in the do you think people prefer visiting here with their children? That is because it is a dream goal for many Chinese parents and young ambitious this, as more tourists e to visit universities, these universities can widen their influence as well and they can also make some profit from the a word, I think the university pus should be open to the tourists 4【范文二】In university pus, especially in some famous ones, such as Peking University and Qinghua University, tourists are always seen looking around most of them visit with hope and repect, I think university pus should not be open to , tourists39。內(nèi)容、安排等。但是對(duì)于當(dāng)代大學(xué)生來說，與大學(xué)生有關(guān)的社會(huì)話題也是需要關(guān)注的，這也說明考試方向的變化：校園類話題與社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)話題同等重要,這一點(diǎn)對(duì)于未來考四級(jí)的學(xué)生的作文備考的方向有的指導(dǎo)意義。除此之外，學(xué)生還要在作文中多采用閃光點(diǎn)，這樣就會(huì)使作文在基本分?jǐn)?shù)上有所提升，有所突破。從四級(jí)考試寫作的測(cè)試目的來看，還是注重考查學(xué)生對(duì)基本語法、基本詞匯運(yùn)用能力的掌握情況。但是這只能得到最基本的分?jǐn)?shù)。比較出人意料，又回到了老的考查模式。但表現(xiàn)出兩個(gè)出人意料：一是體裁，二是題材。s of people view this gala as an annual staple on the traditional Chinese Spring Festival all have a restless night and glue their eyes on the am not supportive of the view that the grand gala should be , it plays a vital role in the celebration of Chinese New increase its appeal and meet young adults39。更多地立足真題，總結(jié)規(guī)律，切實(shí)提高自己語言能力，始終是四級(jí)作文備考的根本。從關(guān)注白色污染到關(guān)注博物館免費(fèi)開放，再到綠色校園構(gòu)建，四級(jí)作文命題重點(diǎn)在側(cè)重校園類話題的同時(shí)開始向與大學(xué)生生活有關(guān)的話題轉(zhuǎn)移。如本文主題“綠色校園”可以采用多種表達(dá)：green campus和environmentalfriendly campus?！驹掝}詞匯拓展】devastation ，毀滅existence ，生活healthful ，凌亂的participation ，參與preserve ，保護(hù)preventive ，凈化stimulation ，鼓舞arouse consciousness 喚起意識(shí)命題風(fēng)向標(biāo)本次作文難度適中，與之前考試中出現(xiàn)的“限塑”主題有千絲萬縷的聯(lián)系。 construction is of vital importance not only to the physical development of students but to their mental health as ，而且對(duì)他們的心理健康也很重要。 construction of “a green campus” will greatly stimulate students to take part invarious environmental protection “綠色校園”將會(huì)極大激勵(lì)學(xué)生參與環(huán)境保護(hù)。 → conduct 引導(dǎo)This will help conduct the activities of the college 。 → be aware of 意識(shí)到We’d better be aware of the seriousness of pollution around 。畢竟，無錯(cuò)表達(dá)才是四級(jí)語言表達(dá)合格的核心。最后，應(yīng)盡量避免單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤。除正確審題之外，考生還應(yīng)注意語言的準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用，不落俗套。剛剛閉幕的哥本哈根世界氣候大會(huì)使環(huán)保減排這個(gè)主題成為焦點(diǎn)，在全世界都提倡可持續(xù)發(fā)展、和諧發(fā)展這一背景下的“綠色校園”，同時(shí)也是一個(gè)社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)話題，這是我們審題時(shí)所必須考慮的。不同句型之間的轉(zhuǎn)換，能讓閱卷老師更好地了解考生對(duì)句子結(jié)構(gòu)的掌握運(yùn)用，從而獲得高分。call for要求。under the burden of在??重負(fù)下?！矩S富的短語】bring benefit to帶來利益。sustainable可持續(xù)的。concept概念。關(guān)系詞的正確使用讓句與句之間、段與段之間銜接緊湊，思想表達(dá)成熟有深度。第三段是談及具體的做法，分一、二、三點(diǎn)進(jìn)行論述，無疑是使“綠色校園”的理念落在實(shí)處。第一段開門見山，強(qiáng)調(diào)當(dāng)今環(huán)保理念下構(gòu)建“綠色校園”的長遠(yuǎn)意義。最后但同樣重要的是，有必要加強(qiáng)學(xué)校和社會(huì)的聯(lián)系以便在全社會(huì)共同努力下使“綠色校園”順利實(shí)施。為使“綠色校園”成為現(xiàn)實(shí)，首先應(yīng)該制定出可持續(xù)發(fā)展、可長遠(yuǎn)發(fā)展的有效政策。學(xué)校在培養(yǎng)年輕一代上起著關(guān)鍵作用，“綠色校園”的意識(shí)必定會(huì)對(duì)學(xué)生畢業(yè)后的環(huán)境保護(hù)意識(shí)產(chǎn)生長遠(yuǎn)影響。這無疑會(huì)給我們的校園和社會(huì)帶來長遠(yuǎn)的利益。一般分成三個(gè)自然段，大概十句話，基本的分布為首段、末段合起來五句或六句，中間段五句或四句，做到結(jié)構(gòu)清楚，重點(diǎn)突出，就可以了。需要注意的就是作文給分的重點(diǎn)在于考生如何用恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z言詞匯表達(dá)自己的思想觀點(diǎn)。在深入理解概念的基礎(chǔ)上，考生還應(yīng)對(duì) “綠色校園”的重要性進(jìn)行剖析，這時(shí)，考生可以從多個(gè)角度組織素材，比如從校園的環(huán)境問題出發(fā)，進(jìn)而擴(kuò)展到師生的環(huán)境意識(shí)對(duì)“綠色校園”所產(chǎn)生的長遠(yuǎn)意義以及為未來環(huán)境改善所做的貢獻(xiàn)。假如對(duì)“綠色校園”這一主題感到難以把握，考生可以從作文提綱入手進(jìn)行分析以獲取對(duì)“綠色校園”這一概念的相關(guān)信息。第一篇：英語四級(jí)作文真題Part Ⅰ Writing審題謀篇本次四級(jí)作文主題為“綠色校園”，這是一個(gè)看似簡單普通的話題，寫起來卻不是那么容易。因?yàn)楹芏嗫忌鷮?duì)于“綠色校園”所表達(dá)的內(nèi)涵感覺比較生僻。根據(jù)作文提示2，可以看出此處的“綠色校園”指的決不僅僅是青青的草地和高大的樹木構(gòu)成的校園綠色風(fēng)景，也不僅僅指對(duì)校園環(huán)境的珍視和愛護(hù)，而是指一種環(huán)境保護(hù)的文化氛圍和師生具有的環(huán)境素養(yǎng)，以及由此帶來的和諧的人文環(huán)境和社會(huì)績效。最后是闡述建設(shè)“綠色校園”所要采取的措施。而不是寫得越多，得分就越高。參考范文Creating a Green CampusRecently, with the idea of making and maintaining “a green earth” being the focus of the society, “green campus” has bee a more and more popular concept in universities or colleges, which, undoubtedly, will bring us an everlasting benefit to both our campus and our concept of “green campus” does not only mean a green environment but also refers to an environmental sense in people’s plays a crucial role in educating the young ge