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er age”. Computers are used in many fields. They are very important because they can work faster and make nearly no mistakes. Computers can help people do a lot of work. Writers use them to write. Teachers use them to help teaching. They are also used for studying by students. What’s more, we can use a puter to search for information. Computers are very useful and helpful in our life. They have changed our life and improved the quality of people’s life. They are our friends. I think everyone wants to have one. Sample 1 開(kāi)聲朗讀自己的文章,并 從結(jié)構(gòu)、人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、字?jǐn)?shù)、拼寫(xiě)、大小寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)等方面進(jìn)行自我修正。 Exerc isesTask 2 ① 欣賞與修正 請(qǐng) 交換習(xí)作 欣賞,用 紅筆劃出 對(duì)方的 亮點(diǎn) 詞、句 , 并運(yùn)用 改錯(cuò)符號(hào) 找出不足,進(jìn)行適當(dāng) 修改 。 ③ 點(diǎn)評(píng) 由亮點(diǎn)欣賞到不足的修正(篇章結(jié)構(gòu) 分析 細(xì) 節(jié)點(diǎn)評(píng) ) 集體賞析,共同進(jìn)步 Exerc isesTask 3 Computers have greatly changed our life since they were invented in are one of the m