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t eleven. So I had to go to his party with nothing. It was really an embarrassing day! 潤(rùn) 單元專題聚焦 該篇作文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,首尾呼應(yīng),語(yǔ)法正確,敘事清晰,是一篇標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的滿分作文。 點(diǎn) 單元專題聚焦 2. 作者在寫作中使用了 embarrassing, experience, decide to do sth., pay for, lock, hurry等含金量較高的單詞和短語(yǔ),體現(xiàn)了作者良好的英語(yǔ)功底。 小 試 身 手 … not good at... work hard learning get help from... … when … what how where traveling experiences One possible version: An Unfettable Experience I had a very unfettable experience when I was eleven years old. I had some training with my classmates. We went to Fengxian and we needed to live in a small dormitory for two days. We did everything ourselves. Our parents couldn39。t stay with us. We got up very early in the morning. We had to dress ourselves up quickly. And then we stood in a line. Every day, we had to practice more than five hours. We learnt a lot of things there, such as washing, making beds and even cooking. 單元專題聚焦 I think it was very hard for everyone but it was very good for us. Usually we are looked after by our parents, but in fact we should learn how to look after ourselves. What an unfettable experience! 單元專題聚焦 單元專題聚焦 依據(jù)主題句定短文的中心思想 一篇文章通常是圍繞一個(gè)中心展開(kāi)并且由段落組成;段落之間有著緊密的內(nèi)在聯(lián)系。主題句通常置于段落的開(kāi)頭,有時(shí)在段落的末尾或中間。若把每一段的主題句加以整理,便能得出整篇文章的中心思想,同時(shí)還可以回避、排除個(gè)別生詞或難句 (等困難信號(hào) )所帶來(lái)的干擾。