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onious and sustainable society, so it is not advisable to support youngsters to do like this. Some regulars can be made to help network administrators to censor blogs more strictly.【點(diǎn)評(píng)】本篇是現(xiàn)象解釋型作文。詞匯:flaunt their wealth with posting pictures of their luxury products意為“通過在網(wǎng)上貼出奢侈品的圖片的方式來炫富”;reflects someone’s vanity意為“反映了一些人的虛榮”;build up the correct values and views on life意為“豎立正確的人生觀和價(jià)值觀”?!痉段摹縄t is generally acknowledged that a successful person should make greater contributions to social progress and the wellbeing of others. However, a successful person also means his personal happiness in return, at least, in most cases.Though I am inexperienced in fighting for future as a young man, I know I must first of all study and work hard, which means overing difficulties and learning to be more creative and original in achieving what the others can’t do or fail to.In my eyes, firstly, I think we should have a definite goal in life. Secondly, we must always check our plans and work steadfast towards the goal. Thirdly, accumulate knowledge and skills to make ourselves petent in our working posts. And, the last of all is to have a teamwork spirit in getting along with our colleagues, which is surely the key to our future success in life. 【點(diǎn)評(píng)】本篇屬于途徑方法型作文。第二段講的是自己的成功經(jīng)驗(yàn)。詞匯:wellbeing意為“幸福、安康”;in my eyes意為“在我看來”;work steadfast towards the goal意為“朝著目標(biāo)堅(jiān)定地前進(jìn)”。開頭指出大學(xué)生身體素質(zhì)越來越差這一現(xiàn)象,緊接著分析了原因大學(xué)生生活方式不健康以及大學(xué)不重視體育課,最后作者結(jié)合多方面的因素提出了解決辦法。預(yù)測(cè)作文(二)Should Retirement Age Be Postponed?1. 近年來,推遲退休年齡引發(fā)人們熱議2. 推遲退休年齡有利也有弊3. 我的看法【范文】Based on a recent survey on the Internet, a majority of individuals admit that aging society will bring a variety of problems to their life. Along with the trend of longevity, it has bee a trend for people to debate whether it is wise to postpone retirement age.Some people favor postponing the retirement age. In their eyes, it is this policy that enables the aging society to build up enough workforce. As a matter of fact, people in mounting numbers have e to realize this problem in an aging society. Even so, others hold a different view that postponing retirement age carries some risks. This policy can bring old people stress, but cannot arouse their enthusiasm for work, and cannot help them to enjoy their retirement pension.I am convinced that we should balance old people’s interest against this aging society. Thus, if those seniors have enthusiasm for work, we should educate, advocate and encourage them to work and perform their tasks. If we try our utmost to do so, the future of old people’s life will be promising, hopeful and rosy. 【點(diǎn)評(píng)】這是一篇利弊選擇型作文,第一段開門見山,引出話題