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ionally, Moreover, Furthermore98. 最后 Finally, Last but not the least, Above all, Lastly, 99. 總而言之 All in all, To sum up, In summary, In a word, 100.我們還有很長的路要走 We still have a long way to go.眾所周知,寫作的提高不是一日之功。隨著考試的日益臨近,文都考研(論壇) 命題組老師為大家支招——越需要花大力氣進(jìn)行備考的題型,越需要注意技巧和方法,抓住解題核心。還要從題目中找出關(guān)鍵詞,判斷該題目含概內(nèi)容以及側(cè)重點(diǎn)是什么。(二)草擬提綱四級(jí)考試中最常見的是給出題目和提綱題型,因此只需考生能正確有效地去利用已經(jīng)給出的中文提綱,對提綱材料進(jìn)行加工、補(bǔ)充、擴(kuò)展即可。另外,考生要注意不同的作文題型,對列提綱的要求有所不同,寫作的格式也不同。這樣既節(jié)約時(shí)間,又提高寫作速度。在這一過程中,以所擬定的提綱為指導(dǎo),把提綱中要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容通過一些過渡手段將其連接成完整的文章。最后還要兼顧各種語法現(xiàn)象。另外,如果確實(shí)有要修改的地方,要注意卷面的整潔,這往往會(huì)影響閱卷老師的第一印象。這主要是檢查文章的主題是否明確,篇章層次是否明顯,段落銜接是否連貫,內(nèi)容是否切題等。這一步主要檢查段落是否完善,中心是否突出,段內(nèi)各句是否銜接緊湊等。下面以2009年12月四級(jí)作文真題為例,詳細(xì)闡述一下寫作的這四個(gè)步驟:Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of “Creating A Green Campus”.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:……,我們應(yīng)該……(一)審題立意,考生很容易判斷出這是問題解決類作文。分析題目Green “綠色”和Campus “校園”是本作文的關(guān)鍵詞。重點(diǎn)應(yīng)放在綠色校園的含義以及我們應(yīng)該采取的措施上。(二)草擬提綱Topic: Creating A Green CampusQuestion: What’s a green campus and how to creat a green campus?Outline:Creating A Green CampusI. Nowadays the topic of a green campus has aroused public attention. is of vital importance to the students has a profound impact on societyII. The idea of “a green campus” is beyond a green environment.1. green environment preservation and protection civilized atmosphere for students’ mental healthIII. It is imperative for us to take effective measures to creat a green campus. law and regulations should be worked out the awareness of the students themselves(三)落筆寫作:根據(jù)題目中的提綱,首先強(qiáng)調(diào)建立綠色校園的重要性,最好在此句之前做一個(gè)鋪墊,介紹建立綠色校園受到人們廣泛關(guān)注這一背景信息,即the topic of a green campus has aroused public attention.important。:對綠色校園的兩方面含義進(jìn)行論述。to begin with, in addition to。 for example/for instance/such as。The idea of “a green campus” is beyond a green environment.campus construction refers to green environment preservation and protection。in addition to引出“綠色校園”的第二層含義,即create a civilized atmosphere for the sake of students’ mental 。It is essential that …。Creating A Green CampusNowadays the topic of a green campus has been widely debated which has aroused public attention. Undoubtedly, a green campus, the indispensable part for the development of college students, has a profound impact on both individuals and society, for its significance cannot be denied.The idea of “a green campus” is beyond a green environment. To begin with, campus construction refers to green environment preservation and protection, such as planting more trees and flowers, which makes campus an ecological and natural resort, and advocating green products. For example, students are e