【正文】 at ，成功是衡量該話題是否積極的唯一標(biāo)準(zhǔn)。 Perseverance means that people can persist on when they face the difficulty and prepare every detail for the ing ：毅力 —在困境中堅(jiān)持，做好細(xì)節(jié)，準(zhǔn)備成功； It is perseverance that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable , that makes us still full of energy to face the ing challenges and petition and that offers us the foundation for the ing ，大氣磅礴。 To account for the above mentioned topic, several reasons can be put forward as mentioned below. To begin with In addition Last but not the least No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. (舉例證明把 for example 寫成十四個(gè)很有特色，而且表明下面的例子很重要，又增加一分，老師看了這么多 for example，審美疲勞，老師一看該句，一定激動。倒裝句在 結(jié)尾補(bǔ)充再好不過。承上啟下 , 引起下文 , 多達(dá)二十五個(gè)單詞的總結(jié)句 表明無論做大事小事，難事容易事，都需要積極事物支持我們。 話題二：打敗自我，不斷改正自身缺陷吸收別人長處，完善自我，自信面對人生； 1Defeating ourselves or Defeating others Defeating ourselvesfight with our defectsperfect ourselvesconfidentperseveranthave a better understanding of ourselves As is vividly depicted in the picture, 描述圖畫 . The most striking feature is 圖畫重點(diǎn)信息 . There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration. As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact that 重復(fù)上面的圖畫信息 profoundly indicates that defeating oneself rather than the other petitors is momentous (重要的 ) and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds. You have to fight with your own shorting and perfect yourself as much as possible. It is defeating ourselves that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty and discouragement , that makes us still full of energy to face the ing challenges and petition and that offers us the foundation for the ing success. Unless we defeat ourselves, we will live a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated and humiliated, only to be eliminated. No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. Many people who do not have faith in themselves always lose the match. Only by defeating ourselves can they make full use of their advantages and have a strong will to always challenge themselves. From what have been discussed above, It admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to have a better understanding of oneself. It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to make yourself more petitive in the society. On the one hand, we should be sensible to encourage ourselves to enrich our minds. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to be more perseverant. However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later. 3. Team work 一個(gè)人蓋樓房很辛苦 , 很多人在一起建 , 他們臉上有很多笑容 . As is vividly depicted in the picture, 描述圖畫 . The most striking feature is 圖畫重點(diǎn)信息 . There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration. As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact that 重復(fù)上面的圖畫信息 profoundly indicates that team work is momentous (重要的 ) and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds. Undoubtedly, it is team work that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty and discouragement , that makes us still full of energy to face the ing challenges and petition and that offers us the foundation for the ing success. Unless we cooperate sincerely, , we will live a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated and humiliated, only to be eliminated. No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. A person who is assigned various jobs along the production lines will make a mess just because no one can be proficient in all the things. Only by cooperating with other people can you put your capacities into full play and can you be the winner in the society. From what have been discussed above, It admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to involve yourself into a team work. It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to make your team work more efficient. On the one hand, we should be sensible to be receptive to other people’s opinions and benefits. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to be active in taking a more tough job and always helpful and honest to other people. However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later. 4. 對別人真誠，有禮貌，無私奉獻(xiàn)，謙虛為人 Genuineness and cordiality are rewarding As is vividly depicted in the picture, a young man with a suitcase under his arm is stretches his hand to greet himself reflected in the mirror. The most striking feature is his image in the mirror is smiling at him sincerely. There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration. As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact that his smile can be reflected as tenderly as his real smile profoundly indicates that genuineness and cordiality are momentous (重要的 ) and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds. It is corporation with