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,既豐富了短文內容,使表達多樣化,更使短文很有條理,是本文的亮點?!军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。所以,考生不能遺漏要點,要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結構以便得到較高的分數(shù)。要求:1. 意思連貫,語句通順;2. 詞數(shù)80詞左右;短文的開頭已給出(不計入總詞數(shù)) 3. 參考詞匯: at a fixed time 定時emergency 緊急情況 cpany sb. 陪伴某人Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I’d like to introduce my new invention to all of you. 【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I’d like to introduce my new invention to all of you.I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. It can cook meals and do some washing at a fixed time. When old people feel alone, it can also acpany them by having a chat, playing chess or doing exercise. What’s more, it can deal with some emergencies. For example, if an old man falls ill suddenly, the robot will call doctors immediately for help.I’m sure my new invention will be a great help to the elderly. I think in the future people will live a more fortable life with the help of new robots.【解析】亮點說明:這篇習作的層次清晰,內容飽滿,表達流暢。而Thank you for attending our robot show./ I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. / I think in the future people will live a more fortable life with the help of new ,豐富了習作內容,使表達多樣化,是本文的最大亮點。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內容經整理后展開思維,考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。4.書面表達同學們,中考后就會迎來漫長的暑假了,班會課上老師組織大家討論假期學習和生活計劃。內容提示:暑假計劃學習博覽群書;學習技能 (或自擬一點)生活健康飲食;堅持鍛煉 (或自擬一點)其它熱愛公益;親近自然 (或自擬一點)注意:1. 表達中必須包括所給要點,可以適當發(fā)揮,不要簡單翻譯。開頭和結尾已經寫好,不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear classmates,Summer holiday is ing, and here is my plan for it.____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ I hope all of you can enjoy the ing holiday. That’s all. Thank you.【答案】Dear classmates,Summer holiday is ing, and here is my plan for it.First, I39。s necessary for me to learn at least one skill. I39。s a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind to someone in need. I will pay more attention to protecting our environment so that we can make our Earth a better world. Also, travelling out is a good choice. While travelling, we can be close to nature and learn about different cultures. We have more chances to search the Internet. I know unhealthy websites are harmful to us. I will say no to them.I hope all of you can enjoy the ing holiday. That39。文中使用了非常好的短語,例如I39。而First, I39。s a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind to someone in ,既使短文層次清晰,又豐富了習作內容,使表達多樣化,是本文的最大亮點。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內容經整理后展開思維,考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。5.今天手機在我們日常生活中已廣泛使用。你們學校的??⑽陌嬲诰痛伺e行征文活動,請根據(jù)下列表格提示的內容,用英語寫一篇征文。 Mobile phones have been used widely in our daily life 【答案】Mobile phones have been used widely in our daily life today. With the d