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oking after animals and working for sports matches. Also, we can join charity organizations to help protect the environment and so on.It’s OK to have problems, because volunteering takes much time and energy. Sometimes I can’t balance my study and work. If your parents don’t allow you to volunteer, you should have a good talk with them. Try to let them understand you.I hope you love volunteering and do well in it. Looking forward to your good news.Best wishesDavid【解析】這是一篇給材料作文,給好友Li Ming回信,介紹暑假做志愿者的情況。m glad……,we can……,It’s OK to……,If your parents don’t allow you to…….,you should……,I hope……等句式的應用。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關系。開頭為你想要成為一名志愿者而感到高興,接下來介紹我們可以從事的志愿者工作以及志愿者工作帶來的一些問題,最后我希望你喜歡志愿者工作。3.書面表達 初三的學習生活繁忙中有困惑、淚水,也有進步、喜悅。在校老師工作認真負責,充滿愛心學生…… (至少發(fā)揮兩點)周末作業(yè)作業(yè)多.舍棄愛好其它活動鍛煉,電視愿望…… (發(fā)揮一到兩點)要求:1.所寫內容必須包括以上表格提供的所有信息,并適當發(fā)揮:2.文章不少于90詞,開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù);3.語意通順,意思連貫,條理清楚,書寫規(guī)范;4.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名等信息。t afford time for our hobbies any more. I feel a bit stressed actually, so I try to spare some time to play basketball or turn on my favorite TV program to get relaxed.No pains, no gains. But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.【解析】亮點說明:這篇習作的層次清晰,內容飽滿,表達流暢。而It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student./ But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will ,豐富了習作內容,使表達多樣化,是本文的最大亮點。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內容經整理后展開思維,考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。4.馬上要初中畢業(yè)了,大家都是依依不舍的。請你根據(jù)以下提示,寫一篇發(fā)言稿。不開心的事情; 。s unbelievable that I39。題目中利用表格的形式,展示了文章的具體內容,學生們可以此為提綱進行寫作。內容應主要包括三部分:首先是初中三年里的美好回憶;然后是不開心的事情;最后展望自己未來的高中生活。寫作時應注意:文章中應包括表格中的所有信息,不能遺漏要點;第三部分的內容中還需要自己發(fā)揮想象力進行補充,注意應合情合理,與上文很好地銜接。句式結構可以簡單句為基礎,穿插并列句、復合句以及其他復雜句式的使用,提升作文檔次?!军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,短文作者根據(jù)題目要求,回憶了自己的初中生活,并展望了未來。短文分三段,第一段基本是題目中給出的開頭,作者使用一句話引出下文;第二段是主體,介紹了過去美好的回憶以及不開心的事情;最后一段對未來進行了展望。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱,語法規(guī)范,用詞準確,注意了動詞正確形式的變化。語言準確、得體,表達自然、流暢。5.自信賦予人力量,帶給人快樂。假如你是李華,請你為??⒄Z園地“自信助我成長”專欄寫一篇短文,談談自信的重要性,分享一次使你更加自信的經歷,并說說我們如何更加自信。s very important to be confident【答案】It’s very important to be confident. Selfconfidence can bring us courage to stick to what we do. So it’s valuable to us.When I was in Grade 7, once my teacher asked me to make a speech in class. Although I practiced it for many times at home, I still felt nervous and forgot thewords at the beginning of it. Then I breathed deeply and relaxed myself. You can’t believe how happy I was when I recalled the speech and finished it teacher thought highly of my performance and I got much encouragement from my classmates. From then on, I have bee more and more confident.To build confidence, firstly we need to clearly know about our own advantages and try to develop them. It is the most important that we should put in enough effort to what we do. Then we can finally make it and gain more confidence.【解析】本文內容應包含表格中所提供的所有信息。語言力求準確,簡潔。點睛:這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語,為文章增色不少,如at the beginning of; know about;make a speech等;When ;Although ;Then ;From then on,等的運用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理;同時語言流暢,內容完整,是一篇不錯的范文。提示詞語: Chinese classes, learn, attend, culture, prepare提示問題: ● When and where will the Chinese Summer Camp be held?● What activities will be held at the Chinese Summer Camp?● What is your advice for Jack?Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in ourschool this summer holiday . .Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our school this summer holiday.The Chinese Summer Camp will be held in our school from July 10th to July 30th this summer. The activities of this Chinese Summer Camp are as follows:First, you will attend Chinese classes, learning the meaning of Chinese characters. Second, you will take part in different parties, knowing the history of China and Chinese culture, especial