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choolWe are going to graduate from our middle school, __________________________________【答案】We are going to graduate from our middle schools, and we will make a choice to enter a boarding school or a day school. Both kinds of school have their advantages and disadvantages.If we choose a boarding school, we will save time to study. However, we may have less time to stay with our family. If we choose a day school, parents can know more about our studies. At the same time puter games and TV plays may make a bad influence on us. As for me, I prefer a boarding school. We should pay attention to our studies to get good grades in the high school.【解析】【分析】整體分析:這是一篇給材料作文。第一段要寫(xiě)總體交代你即將升入高中,面臨寄宿(a boarding school)和走讀(a day school)兩類(lèi)學(xué)校的選擇。第三段要表述作者自己的選擇和理由。、短語(yǔ)、句型。寫(xiě)完后反復(fù)閱讀修改推敲潤(rùn)色,人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、單復(fù)數(shù)一致等。用的短語(yǔ)、句型:both kinds of、If we choose a boarding school、At the same time、As for me, I prefer a boarding school、pay attention to、來(lái)增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)。做到:要點(diǎn)要全,表達(dá)要清晰明確,使用短語(yǔ),句型要準(zhǔn)確,注意避免拼寫(xiě)和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。你想請(qǐng)他來(lái)你的家鄉(xiāng)一安徴一游,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示用英文給他寫(xiě)一封電子郵件。,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)Dear DaveI know that you are interested in Chinese culture and Im glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not e to Anhui, my home town, to have fun?【答案】Dear Dave,I know you are interested in Chinese culture and I’m glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not e to Anhui, my hometown, to have some fun.Anhui Province lies in the east of China. The best time to e here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats. There are many famous places to see. For example, Mt. Huangshan, where you will see wonderful plants and special rocks. Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on. As a fan of Chinese culture, don’t forget to try green tea in Anhui which smells good and tastes better. What’s more, e and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!Wele to Anhui! I’m looking forward to seeing you here!Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以李華的身份給自己的筆友Dave寫(xiě)信,邀請(qǐng)他來(lái)你的家鄉(xiāng)—安徽一游,題目中列出了文章的提綱,審題可知,短文應(yīng)從以下幾個(gè)內(nèi)容敘述:首先介紹家鄉(xiāng)的位置;然后介紹來(lái)這里最好的時(shí)候;接下來(lái)是介紹家鄉(xiāng)的景點(diǎn)和文化,并給出建議。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)合理安排幾個(gè)內(nèi)容,分清主次,并注意上下文的連貫。如可以使用簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu),易于掌握,不容易出錯(cuò)?!军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,短文作者根據(jù)題目要求邀請(qǐng)Dave來(lái)自己的家鄉(xiāng)旅游,并介紹了家鄉(xiāng)的景點(diǎn)和文化。短文先對(duì)Dave發(fā)出邀請(qǐng),然后具體介紹了家鄉(xiāng)的位置、景點(diǎn)、文化等,并提出了建議。第二,短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱,語(yǔ)法規(guī)范,用詞準(zhǔn)確,句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整,符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡(jiǎn)單句為主,也使用了并列句、賓語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句等復(fù)合句,還有一些好的句型,如The best time to e here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats、Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on.、What’s more, e and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!、I’m looking forward to seeing you here!等。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇約100詞的短文。因此寫(xiě)作前,要仔細(xì)看圖片,了解圖片中所發(fā)生的事情,并提煉出要點(diǎn),列出所要用到的詞匯、短語(yǔ)等,或者列出大概的寫(xiě)作提綱。寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意按照事情發(fā)展的先后順序,這樣可以使文章條理清楚。在文章中點(diǎn)綴幾個(gè)并列句、復(fù)合句或復(fù)雜句式,調(diào)整文章節(jié)奏,提升文章檔次。點(diǎn)睛:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。作者在短文中敘述了林濤和梅梅兩人在公園里給小樹(shù)澆水、并掛牌子告訴人們注意保護(hù)樹(shù)木。文章最后的兩句話也點(diǎn)明了文章的主題。語(yǔ)法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確。7.環(huán)境保護(hù)人人有責(zé), 如果我們每一個(gè)人都能珍愛(ài)美麗地球 保護(hù)自然資源,相信我們的家園會(huì)越來(lái)越美好。假如你是李華,請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿,談?wù)勎覀兠媾R的主要環(huán)境問(wèn)題是什么,為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么,以及你的期望。例文點(diǎn)評(píng):例文采用的是三段式;用第一人稱來(lái)敘述為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么;時(shí)態(tài)采用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),描述建議時(shí),描寫(xiě)具體,條理清晰。句型:When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins;Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference。以及狀語(yǔ)從句等;然后緊扣要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作,在寫(xiě)