【正文】 談我們班上發(fā)生的好事。另外，李明周一生病，班長(zhǎng)親自送他去醫(yī)院。就這些，謝謝！【點(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。語(yǔ)言要規(guī)范，時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用要正確，敘述清楚條里，學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。注意檢查：?jiǎn)卧~拼寫、語(yǔ)法、動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)序、主謂一致等。：要點(diǎn)是否齊全，適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充。合理使用連詞。：注意書寫工整美觀整潔。黑龍江中考模擬）書面表達(dá)假如你是英語(yǔ)俱樂部的Cathy,上周五你們收到了外教Angel為同學(xué)們網(wǎng)購(gòu)的英文書籍。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下信息, 給Angel寫一封電子郵件，告訴她俱樂部的活動(dòng)情況，并說(shuō)說(shuō)網(wǎng)購(gòu)圖書的好處。2介紹活動(dòng)的情況：（l）上周五，俱樂部成員們一起讀英文書。（3）同學(xué)們將在下個(gè)月網(wǎng)購(gòu)其他的英文書。寫作要求：1不得使用真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名。3字跡工整、語(yǔ)言精練、表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、條理清晰。Dear Angel,How are you doing? Best wishes!Yours,Cathy【答案】Dear Angel,How are you doing? I’m writing to tell you that we received the books that you bought for us. We are grateful to you and all of us are very happy。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。構(gòu)思提綱。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀觥⒚鞔_的關(guān)鍵。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。8．（近日，又至畢業(yè)季，師生們忙著互致臨別贈(zèng)言。短詩(shī)如下：My English Teacher Miss ZhangThere is a teacher, Miss Zhang,Who is friendly, patient and helpful.Always encouraging us to try,She leads us to a world of why.We all respect and admire her. 注意事項(xiàng)：，不得抄寫短詩(shī)原文：、意思連貫、符合情境。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Editorial Office,I am writing to remend as The Most Popular Teacher．She is Miss Zhang.She is my English teacher． She is in her forties． Her small round glasses make her look smart． She often works to high standards and is willing to work extra hours． She is kind and helpful， too． She always helps us with our study． She loves jogging， so she looks healthy． To my surprise， she has donated blood many times since 2001． She has also decided to donate her body for medical research after her death． I really love her and I want to be a teacher like her in the future． I think Miss Zhang is the most suitable person to be the Most Popular Teacher．I hope that you agree with me． Yours sincerely，Beth,【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇給材料作文。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要為第一人稱。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩?！军c(diǎn)睛】點(diǎn)睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。河南中考模擬）書面表達(dá)。假若你是來(lái)自九年級(jí)三班的李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)寫一份不少于80詞的倡議書。不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名。要求：1. 內(nèi)容必須包括以上要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3. 語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；4. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及校名。講述鍛煉身體的好處、鍛煉的方式，并建議大家積極參加體育活動(dòng)。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如either...or..., be based on, keep healthy, such as, have time to do, take part in, in order to, stronger and stronger以及all kinds of等，增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。構(gòu)思提綱。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀觥⒚鞔_的關(guān)鍵。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。10．（假設(shè)你是張華，你正在以“如何與父母更好地相處” 為題進(jìn)行英語(yǔ)自主課程研究。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表選取并整合你認(rèn)為有用的信息，結(jié)合你的實(shí)際經(jīng)歷以How to get along well with parents為題寫一篇感想?！敬鸢浮縃ow to get along well with parentsMore and more people begin to focus on the parentchild relationship. Here’s my understanding of how to get along well with our parents.CYCRC did a survey in the United States and China. The results showed that % of Chinese children often talk to their parents, far fewer than the Americans. More understanding lies in American parentchild relationship. I think we should not only talk often but open our heart. For example, when I got low marks in exams, I always talked to my parents. They helped me find the reason and encouraged me. I also shared my secrets and worries with them. A good relationship requires efforts from both parents and children. As children, getting well with parents is of great importance to us. We should find a proper way to create a healthy parentchild relationship.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以How to get along well with parents為題，就中國(guó)青少年研究中心（CYCRC）近日對(duì)中美兩國(guó)親子關(guān)系問卷調(diào)查的結(jié)果進(jìn)行介紹，并結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際經(jīng)歷，發(fā)表自己的感謝。然后結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際情況，對(duì)如何與父母良好相處，發(fā)表自己的看法。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：內(nèi)容應(yīng)密切結(jié)合表格中所給的數(shù)據(jù)以及自己的實(shí)際經(jīng)歷，有敘述，有議論。其次應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)的不同，不能根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)式思維逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句式的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，使用適當(dāng)?shù)膯卧~、短語(yǔ)和句型表達(dá)。同時(shí)注意語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使行文連貫、自然。短文有以下幾個(gè)特點(diǎn)：首先文章內(nèi)容完整，符合題目要求。這是文章的主體部分，敘述非常詳細(xì)，內(nèi)容也很充實(shí)，所占篇幅也最大；最后一段作者重申主題，點(diǎn)明了良好親子關(guān)系的重要性。句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，也使用了賓語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句、并列句、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞等復(fù)雜句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。短文中較好的句型有：The results showed that % of Chinese children often talk to their parents, far fewer than the Americans.、I think we should not only talk often but open our heart.、I also shared my secrets and worries with them. A good relationship requires efforts from both parents and children、We should find a proper way to create a healthy parentchild 。江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)時(shí)間過得飛快，似乎幾個(gè)月前才進(jìn)入初三，現(xiàn)在中考卻近在眼前。由于有太多的作業(yè)和考試，學(xué)生沒有足夠的時(shí)間來(lái)進(jìn)行課外活動(dòng)；2．有的同學(xué)以前學(xué)習(xí)不太努力，但現(xiàn)在他們已經(jīng)意識(shí)到這次考試的重要性，并且全身心投入到學(xué)習(xí)中去；3．你在這最后一個(gè)月里的打算和安排……注意：1．短文須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫；2．第3要點(diǎn)的內(nèi)容須用2至3句話作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3．詞數(shù)90左右，短文的開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。m sure we will do well in the ing exam if we try our best!【答案】Are We Ready for the Challenge?How time flies! It seemed that we began our Grade Three only a few months ago, but the Senior High School Entrance Examination is ing soon! I find the teachers speak more quickly than usual in class now, and we have so much homework and so many exams that we do not have e