【正文】 9。clock is the best time to finish school. After school, they can do parttime jobs, such as collecting discarded plastic bottles to sell for money.I am in favor of leaving school at five o39。而復(fù)雜并列結(jié)構(gòu)They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after students think that students should leave school at about 5 o 39。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。3．今天手機(jī)在我們?nèi)粘Ｉ钪幸褟V泛使用。你們學(xué)校的?？⑽陌嬲诰痛伺e行征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列表格提示的內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇征文。 Mobile phones have been used widely in our daily life 【答案】Mobile phones have been used widely in our daily life today. With the development of economy, mobile phones are more and more widely used in our daily life. However, some parents and teachers have different ideas about whether the students should use mobile phones at school. Some students are for it. They think that it is convenient to contact with parents. Mobile phones will make them more interested in learning so that they can learn more quickly and easily. Some teachers are against it．They think that some students can39。s worse, some students cheat in exams by using mobile phones. Besides, using mobile phones too much does great harm to students39。需在平時(shí)積累相關(guān)的詞匯，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系，上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞?？梢赃m當(dāng)使用高分句型。I think+賓語從句。4．近來，美國(guó)總統(tǒng)特朗普的外孫女由于說一口流利的中文而成為“網(wǎng)紅”。假如你是大明，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示寫一封郵件給他,提一些關(guān)于如何學(xué)好漢語的建議。,與同學(xué)們用中文交流。,以使行文連貫。,不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。m happy to hear from you. I know you want to learn Chinese well. Here are some suggestions._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________In a word,if you have good ways of learning Chinese ,you will learn it well.YoursDaming【答案】Dear Sam,I39。s a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese. And don39。d better read Chinese magazines or newspapers after class. You can also watch Chinese programmes on the Internet. I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation. Lastly, you can write s to me or other Chinese friends in Chinese.In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it well.Yours,Daming【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以大明的身份給Sam寫一封信，告訴他如何學(xué)好漢語，題目中從四個(gè)方面提出了建議。文章應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，根據(jù)表達(dá)需要使用恰當(dāng)?shù)娜朔Q。應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮，寫完整的句子。為提升文章檔次，可以穿插使用并列句或復(fù)合句以及其他一些復(fù)雜句式。【點(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求給Sam寫了一封信，對(duì)他的漢語學(xué)習(xí)提出了一些好的建議。文章主要分成三個(gè)部分：第一段是與Sam之間的問候以及引出Sam學(xué)習(xí)漢語這一話題，并介紹寫信的目的；第二段中是提出的具體的建議，這是這篇文章的主體，所在篇幅最大。其次短文使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，句式結(jié)構(gòu)符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。文章中的語句以簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，也使用了并列句和復(fù)合句，調(diào)整了文章的結(jié)構(gòu)。s a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese、I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation、In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it 。注意事項(xiàng)：，條理清楚，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。 狀況水污染，大氣污染...... 應(yīng)對(duì)措施立即阻止此類活動(dòng),治理環(huán)境（至少兩條）...... 感想建議環(huán)境能夠變得更好......Change for a better China________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】We all know it is being more and more important to protect our environment well. But some people don’t care about it .They